SS-Mayank&Nupur:Mera Naam Hai Mohabbat THE ENDpg29

Annie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

Beautiful update Sajjal............

i m really liking the way story is weaving.................. Nupur's helplessness and Mayank's way of falling in love................

its so cute, do update soon...........

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ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#192

its awsom
plzzzzzzz update soon yr

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#193

hey it has been long time you have update your ff .

i am curious to know what is next coming for our mayur.

please update please update please update

please update please update please updateplease update please update please update

please update please update please update

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Posted: 14 years ago

#194

Note.

Okay due to unfourtunate events i have lost the script of this story, hence i apologize for any unconvinience caused. I know you guys want me to update but i can't, i really don't have time to write out the story again. It would take a hefty amount of time which i don't have at the moment. Though upon Mehak& Nikita's wish i took out some time to write out a paragraph on how the story ended.

Will post in a while

Sajjal.

Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago

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jiya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#195

😲

oh no!!!

nahi!!!

aisa nahi ho sakta🥺

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nerdndproud

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Posted: 14 years ago

#196

what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Gul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#197

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo😭

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Posted: 14 years ago

#198

The End!

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What lies in mayanks past is a simple event of misfourtune, he and some friends went on a trip to Goa and on the way back they were involved in a accident. In result his friend lost his fiance for which Mayank lamented himself at every point of his life. Those letters were from his friend addressed to him asking him to forgive himself, but mayank never got the courage to read it. Mayank tried to change himself and accept nupur but the thought of taking away somones elses love from them made him guilty in his life. Though somewhere throughout the life with a heartfelt confession, nupur comes to know of his past and why it was becoming a barrier in their today. They both realize how much they both have grown to love each other, with mayanks respect and nupurs love both accept each other as life partners.

Gunjan is not a victim of spousal abuse rather in the coming parts you would have found out that in an attempt to be granted with a child she had been going to different darbars and peer baba's in hopes that maybe god would grant her child soon as her in - laws continously taunted her for not being able to provide a grandson.Those marks on her body were nothing but her attempts, her vunerable attempts that were prescribed by people whom she visited to gain blessing so god would grant her with a child!

Nupurs Mum, well yes at first look she appeals to be a mother whom detests her daughters but as the story moves on you would have come to know that ....she was just vunerable....its said that a child is their parents 'guroor, sahara, izzat '' in coming age but with daughters she would never be able to have them by her side...its rather her sadness and pain of her daughters going away from her ....her child whom she had carried in her womb for nine months dissappearing and creating a life of their own....its the hardest for a mother to see her children leave the nest!😳

a snippet of what i could remember i wrote for Mayank and Nupurs confession its not exact as i had written it long before...but i wrote something..:

''Mayank mohabbat izhar chahti hai, app apni poori zindagi jee lein humse mohabbat karte karte par jab tak yehi lafz apki zuban pe nahi ayeinge ......hume nahi maloom hoga ke apke dil ke andar kya chupa hai!'' Nupur said holding his face in her hands and looking unto him vunerably as ever. It had been enough already she needed to know, she knew she had said she truted him but everyone was right...sometimes being in the dark becomes scary and confusing.

''mujhe tumse mohabbat nahi hai nupur'' pushing away her hand mayank tried to make a dash for the door, but nupur stood before it blocking his way.

''nahi aaj nahi....apko mujhe batana hi hoga ke aap ka mazhi kyun hamare aaj ke beech mein araha???''

''nupur mujhe mere kal ke bare mein koi baat nahi karni!!''

stopping him from moving further nupur fustratingly yelled at him for the first time in her life, 'NAHII APKO BAAT KARNI HOGI....app chahiye ya na chahiye par apko mujhe batana hi hoga kyun aap mere pass ane se darte...kyun nahi batate apke dil mein kya hai!!''

Pushing her aside mayank walked out to the terrace with nupur following right behind, ''Mayank'---''

before she could utter another word mayank spun around in anger, 'jana chahti ho mere dil mein kya...mere dil mein darr ...darr ke kahin mera aaj mere kal jaisa na ho....darta hoon tumhe khone...darta hoon ke kahin upar wala meri mohabbat bhi na cheen le....jaise usne...''

Nupur was too stunned by his words to react but she asked, '' jaise??''

''jaise..meri dost ki mohabbat ko cheena unho ne....nahi seh paunga agar tum meri zindagi se chali gayi....nahi dehk sakta...Nupur....tum mera mazhii jana chahti ho..toh suno...meri wajah se ..mere dost ne apni zindagi ko khoya hai....sirf aur sirf meri wajah se''

''mayank isaan ki kismat mein joh likha hai woh hoke hi rahega ek tarah yan doosri tarah se, hum galat sochte hain ke insaan apni kismat khud likhta hai kyun sach toh yeh hai ke yeh sab upar wale ka khel hai.....hume toh bas apni zindagi mein accha karna chahiye aur accha sochna chahiye.......''

''par nupur, tum nahi janti main kaise har pal jeeta hoon...yehi sochte sochte ke agar tum uss ghari mein hoti aur ..tumhe kuch ho jata .......'' his voice trailed off slowly indicating the amount of pain he was in the moment.

Nupur ran towards mayank and hugged him, '' mayank aap hain toh hum hain, yeh zindagi apke hi naam hogayi thi jiss din apko apni zindagi mein kabool kiya tha!!''

slowly mayank placed his hand around nupur, hugging her tightly as ever, '' bahut chahta hoon tumhe...zindagi ban gayi ho tum meri''

'' hume apse mohabbat hai mayank...bahut bahut mohabbat hai'' Mayank parted and looked onto her lovingly and stroked her face slowly,

'' i love you nupur'' leaning in he kissed her forehead...and both stood there under the moonlight...

Khoyi khoyi si, Dheemi dheemi si, Thori unkahi..Thori si muskuraati......Do dilon ki hai ijazat.....Mera naam hai mohabbat

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I apologize wholehearted for this blunder and not being able to completely finish this ff, but i guess this was bound to happen no matter what i did or could have done!

Hope you like the ending!😳

Sajjal

Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago

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