My Only Mistake! I'm A FEMALE (MG) #1 - Page 84

sanu3108

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Posted: 13 years ago

#831

Originally posted by: smj1977

match the ages (refer part 17)

Maan: 26

Vicky: 20

Geet:18

Dev: 22

Pari: 21

and Pari is not Vicky's GF but the idea is tempting 😆shall I go for it?

but I had a guy for her in my mind😉

go for PAri and Vicky ... one year difference in not much yaar.. piyaar mein sab chalta hai 😊

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564326

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Posted: 13 years ago

#832

Originally posted by: sindu555

go for PAri and Vicky ... one year difference in not much yaar.. piyaar mein sab chalta hai 😊

actually then I will loose my track Vicky's GF has an important role she is Pari's cousin and also holds some traces to help them find Vicky

Edited by smj1977 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#833

thanks god atleast somebody is talking to geet nahi tho bechari ka kya hota

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MystiqueDew

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Posted: 13 years ago

#834

wonderful update!!!!!

love the phone convo btvn maan nd geet,

they are getting comfortable with each other.

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preethia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#835

hey loved the update...............

sach mein maan kne jo kaha ussey wapas lena hoga...............pari geet se zyada talkative hain.......hai rabbba kitna bolthi hain............bas ussey key dene ki zaroori hain aur yeh ladki chapar chapar shuru ho jaathi hain..............

probably pari knows where vicky is..............

eagerly waiting for the next update..................

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swetha10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#836

wow amazing update.. luved geet-pari convo.. cant wait for the next one.. continue soon

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Vijaylakshmi Singh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#837

Hmmm surprise to see an another update!!!!!

it was very cute........though........

well, geet is very sweet and made Pari very clear bot her well being,

and pari, she is so cute too....

gals started gossipping also........

actually it was fantastic talks between two..........

Loved the update!!!!!!

Hmmm I guess Pari must be aware of Vicky.......

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564326

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Posted: 13 years ago

#838

Part 20

G: welcome DM,

DM: hello, Geet, hope you settled

G: yes Dadi, you look tired

DM: I am

Both ignored NT

G: you please sit DM,

Then she calls Kitchen

G; hello Nakul Bhaiya, send in two glasses of water and make 2 turmeric hot milk 125 ml cups add about 5gm in each and no sugar

DM: what's that for?

One of the house helps gives water to DM and NT

G: trust me it will make you feel better

DM: one for me and other one for NT

G: no DM I am not God I don't forgive people so easily, the other one is for Maan

DM: what happened to him?

G: nothing DM, just tired

DM was amazed that how easily she took over the charge and

accepted them as family and NT still comes in as a guest, nice as she no more will be coming

Nakul brought two glasses of milk, Geet gave one to DM and

G: Bhaiya take this and give it to Maan

N (shocked): MK Sir, no

G (ignored): and bring back the empty cup to show me

N: but

G: he will not eat you up

N; but

G: ok you go; I'll just talk to him

Meanwhile DM asked NT to leave and come for dinner at 9 pm sharp with Dev

Geet called Maan

M; bolo

G: is Nakul there?

M: standing on my head and what is

G: drink it

M: no ways

G: you will feel good

M: I am not a kid

G: it is not for kids, and you sure are behaving like one

M: Geet

G: tell me one thing, do you like my name too much or is it that

you think I tend to forget it

M: Geet

G: again, how many times have you called Geet, shall I count

M: you sure are a joker

G: I know, but drink that stuff now

M: ok

G: and give that empty cup to Nakul

M: I will drink it later

G: now means now

M: you are too bossy

G: you already told me

M: ok I am drinking (he drink in one gulp)

G: that's like a good boy, and the dinner is going to be served at

9

M: I'll be there and how is DM

G: drinking the same stuff

M: good so I am not the only sufferer

G: shut up

M: I better shut up, now if you'll hang I can help my self with

some sleep

G: 'k

NT who was climbing the steps almost missed a step when she heard Geet shutting up Maan,

DM chocked over her milk and

Pari was on the verge of fainting.

Nakul came back equally confused; never in his so many years of service has he seen Maan following instructions and that to cheerfully. But then he has not seen some one care for him in such a way.

DM retired in her room to freshen up, Geet asked Nakul to prepare some hot water with salt so that DM could dip her feet in it.

When Nakul came to DM's room

N: Madam ji today on seeing this girl I remembered Meenakshi Madam, she used to run around the house in similar way, even she used to address me as Bhaiya, who is she Madam ji

DM: Nakul you have always been there with us in high or low, what's there to hide from you, she is being betrayed by Dev and NT, and is carrying a Khurana child

N: but she is so young, and where did they find her

DM: they faked her in marriage

N: MK Sir

DM: he found her and we brought her here

N: she is good for him, when he was talking to her in the evening he was very comfortable with her

DM: I wish he would have met her first, but any ways have you had the dinner ready

N: yes, it'll be served at 9 sharp

He left the room to find Geet in the kitchen she had dismissed Pari and asked her to come next day as usual.

He was surprised by the way she commandeered the household, lest he knew that she was a daughter of the Handa's and was trained to run the entire house hold with ease, she can on her own manage to feed a party of 50 people,

and here she just has to instruct and not work; it was a piece of cake for her.

At the dinner table

DM: Nakul call every one for dinner

N: yes Madam ji

DM: are Geet you are in the kitchen

G: yes DM

DM: why?

G: just learning my way through things, I will be staying here for long na

DM: thank you beta ji

G: for what?

DM: for accepting us so easily

G: I should be thankful to you for giving me chance to live

DM: you are very nice

G: not more then you

Both laughed

NT and Dev were descending the steps, Dev saw Geet and was shocked to see her talking to DM. he halted pulling NT to stop.

Just then Maan entered

M: hello DM, how was the journey

DM: hello Beta, it was very tiring

M: so I heard some one tortured you with some hot yellow stuff

G (glared): Maan

M: Geet

DM: I was not the only one, but it really helped

M: sorry to say but yes, it did help, and what's for dinner

Meanwhile Dev was stunned to see Maan also talking to Geet that too in a teasing tone, like he was talking to some kid.

D: NT how is Geet here?

NT: ask yourself

D: what do you mean?

NT: Maan and DM brought her here

D: why? How? When?

NT: Q1. As she is your wife; Q2. From the Handa house some

Vidai ritual; Q3. Today

D: what crap are you talking?

NT: no crap dear no crap, even I was there with DM and Maan in

HSPur

D: will you explain?

NT: ok then listen, this all is your mistake, you slept with her and did not even bother to use protection, not that I mind your sleeping with her but at least you should have used protection or did you run down; and the consequence is that this stupid village girl is now carrying a Khurana child

D: what?

NT: and you can disown but how will these two oldies disown

their blood, si she is here, want to know more

DM, Maan and Geet heard the whole conversation.

DM and Maan knew how Dev was, but Geet was baffled; she just stands up to leave

M: Geet sit down

G: Maan pls

M: have your dinner; ignore people who have no importance in

your life by getting hurt by them you only prove they hold some feeling on you for them

She sits down

DM: if the abusing session is over, come and have food, remember the rules, and now just shut up and have food

They all had dinner; no one was able to eat much;

As Dev and NT were leaving for there room

DM: be here for break fast at 8 am sharp, and there is something important I have to discuss and tell you both, so be there

M: ok DM I'll also take leave, good night. Geet you too take rest, good night

G: good night

DM: good night

DM and Geet also retired in their respective rooms

Though Dev was shocked to see Geet but he was sure nothing will happen NT told him about the whole incidence; this convinced him further that nothing will happen and things will go on as they went till now

as for now you must have had some idea about what DM has planned for Dev, Pari told it is some legal matter

so this was her first day in the KM and now the second day

after that I will take a week's leap then 6 months leap

now is the time for the verdict

what do you think DM had made the advocate do?

waiting for your responses write soon

i will try one more update today

pls post your comments you know you all are my motivations

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part 21 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/40638139Edited by smj1977 - 13 years ago

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chsweety22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#839

part19

Awesome update ...

loved it .....

part20

loved geet

she is very nice..loved the way she settled herseif in khurana mansion

i really hate devtara..

thank u for all the updates

so sweet of you😊

Edited by millie_maaneet - 13 years ago

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#840

Brilliant part. loved it.
loved the way geet taking care and taking charge of the km.
geet is totally bossy msk 😆. poor mks but he loved to ruled by geet now.
ha ha poor nakul, pari, dm , they shocked and surprised to see this.

that dev-nt never be changed, they should rot.

update soon.
what do you think DM had made the advocate do?
ans:- I have many options like
1. dm will thrown dev from the khuran mansion
2.dm will give only some monthly salry to dev and take away all rights and property from dev

update soon.
I'm enjoying the story more and it's getting interesting more.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 13 years ago

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