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Posted: 13 years ago
bidzz <3 ed ur part......
thnk u rudra uncle is f99......i loved d way sagar supported vidya n all...
aur throat tumour ke baare mein kabhi mat likhna....ok????
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: awesumsonia

bidzz <3 ed ur part......

thnk u rudra uncle is f99......i loved d way sagar supported vidya n all...
aur throat tumour ke baare mein kabhi mat likhna....ok????


Arey dii.. just chill!!! maine pehele part mein likh diya tha ke khoon ki ulti huyi thi iss liye throat tumor likh diya!!! Just relax!!! hehe!!! and thankss!!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 22

Scene 1 (After an hour at the hospital)
Vidya is sitting outside VP's cabin!!! Dadi went home!!! VP is sleeping in his cabin!!! Sagar arrives and tells Vidya...
Sagar - Yeh lo, Vidya!!! Main saare medicines aur kafi saare fruits le aaya!!!
Vidya - Thank you Sagar!!!
Sagar - Phir se yeh "Thank you" kaha naa toh main tumse kabhi baat nahi karunga!!!
Vidya (smiles) - Achcha theek hai nahi bolungi!!!
Sagar - Waise, papa so gaye kya?
Vidya (smiles) - Haan woh aram se so gaye aur maine Dadi ko bhi ghar jaane ke liye kehe diya!!! Unka bukhar abhi abhi theek hua hai aur aise mein hospital mein rahena achcha nahi lagta naa!?! Iss liye maine unhe jane ko kehe diya aur yeh bhi kaha ke main aur tum papa ka dhyaan rakhenge!!!
Sagar (smiles) - Chalo achcha kiya!!! Unhe bhi toh aram ki zarurat hai!!! 
Vidya - Haan!!! Oh by the way, tum Mumbai subha aa chuke ho aur tum apne mom-dad ko abhi tak khabar nahi kiya!!! 
Sagar - Oh ha!!! Main toh bhul hi gaya!!! Abhi call karta hoon!!! Ek minute!!!
Sagar calls at his home!!! The servant (kaka) picks up the call!!!
Sagar - Hello, kaka!!! 
Kaka - Sagar baba, aap? Kaise hai aap? 
Sagar - Main theek hoon kaka aur aap kaise hai?
Kaka - Main toh theek hoon baba!!!
Sagar - Achcha kaka mom ghar par hai? Unhe phone dijiye please!!!
Kaka - Woh Sagar baba, malik aur malkin toh kam ke silsiley mein pardes gaye huye hai!!! 2 din ke baad lautenge!!!
(Sagar thinks, "Oh iss liye toh mera 2 bar accidents huye par inn hono ka koi pata nahi hai!!!")
Kaka - Hello, hello Sagar baba!!! Kya hua?
Sagar - Haan kaka!!! Kuch nahi!!! Achcha theek main phone rakhta hoon!!! Aapna khayal rakhna!!!
Kaka - Aap bhi apna khayal rakhna!!! Theek hai toh hum phone rakhte hai!!! Namaste!!!
Sagar - Namaste!!!
Sagar disconnects the call!!!
Vidya - Baat hui uncle aunty se?
Sagar - Nahi woh dono business ke kam se kahi gaye huye hai!!! 2 din ke baad lautenge!!! Aur unke lautne ke baad hi main unse humare baare mein baat karunga!!! 
SV both smiles and they have a half-hug!!! 
Vidya - Main doctor se baat karke aati hoon ke papa ko kab discharge milega!!!
Sagar - Chalo main bhi chalta hoon!!!
Vidya - Haan theek hai chalo!!!

Scene 2 (SV and doc's convo)
SV go to doctor's cabin!!!
Sagar - Doctor, papa ko kab discharge milega?
Doc - Dekhiye yeh operation toh kafi bara operation tha iss liye discharge hone mein kuch waqt toh lagega!!! Minimum 5 din Rudra ji ko yaha rehena parega!!! 
Vidya - Achcha theek hai, baki aur koi khatre ki baat toh nahi hai naa?
Doc - Nahi nahi!!! Baki sab theek hai!!! Dont worry!!!
SV smiles, then they leaves doc's cabin and sits outside VP's cabin again!!!
Vidya - Chalo, aab tension toh khatam!!! Abhi sirf papa ko 5 din yaha rahena parega aur uske baad sab pehele jaisa normal!!!
Sagar - Haan!!! (Smiles) Achcha Vidya, main kahi dino se tumse ek baat kehena chahta tha lekin kabhi mauka hi nahi mila!!!
Vidya - Kya?
Sagar - I know ke yeh sahi time nahi hai par phir bhi main tumse kehena chahta hoon ke...
Vidya - Ke tum mujhse bohot pyar karte ho, yehi naa?
Sagar - Arey yeh baat toh sach hai par main tumse kehena chahta hoon ke.... please St. Martin's mein admission lelo!!! 
Vidya (laughs out) - Hey bhagwan!!! Yeh baat kehene ke liye itna nervousness? Maine socha ke tum kitna serious baat mujhse kehena chahte ho!!! Pagal!!!
Sagar - Maine socha ke tum papa ke liye pareshan ho iss liye....
Vidya - Lekin aab papa toh bilkul theek hai!!! :) Waise, tum ne abhi jo kaha, main woh kahi dino se soch rahi thi!!!
Sagar - Really?
Vidya - Haan!!! Theek hai main papa se baat karungi!!!
SV smiles!!! Just then a nurse comes there and tells....
Nurse - Ji aap dono ke papa aap dono ko yaad kar rahe hai!!!
After telling this, she leaves from there!!!
Vidya - Papa jag gaye!!! Chalo Sagar, andar chalo!!! :)
Sagar - Chalo!!!
Suddenly, Sagar's phone rings!!!
Sagar - Vidya, tum jao, main ek min mein aata hoon!!! Sahil ka phone hai!!!
Vidya - Okay!!!
Vidya go inside the cabin and Sagar goes to a corner and talks with Sahil!!!

Scene 3 (SV and VP convo)
Vidya is sitting in VP's cabin and is talking with her!!! Sagar enters!!! Baap, beti aur damad ka conversation (:D) --
VP - Aao beta!!! (welcomes Sagar with a smiley face)
Sagar (smiles) - Uncle aab aap kaise ho?
VP - Uncle?!?!?!
Sagar - Oh!!! Sorry!!! I mean, papa aab aap kaise ho?
VP - Abhi main pehele se kafi behetar hoon!!!! :)
Sagar - Achchi baat hai!!! :)
Sagar is talking with Vidya in "aakho se ishara" way!!! ;) He's asking her if she has asked about getting admit in St. Martin or not!!! Vidya sadly nods her head!!! Sagar becomes sad by this!!!
VP - Yeh aakho hi aakho mein kya baate ho rahi hai zara mujhe bhi toh batao!!!
Vidya - Kuch nahi papa!!! Bas aise hi!!! Waise, aapko 5din ke baad discharge milega!!!
VP - 5 din ??? Mujhe phir se bimar banana hai kya?? *shocked*
Vidya - Papa!!! Please, aapko 5 din yaha rahena parega!!! Dadi din mein yaha rahegi jab main college mein rahungi aur phir main raat ko yaha aa rahungi tab dadi ghar jayengi aram karne!!!! Agle 5 din aisa hi hoga aur bas yeh mera final decision hai aur iss ke baad aap kuch nahi kahenge!!!
Sagar - Haan papa, Vidya sahi kehe rahi hai!!!
VP - Aab boss ne aur tumne kehe diya tha toh aab main kya kehe sakta hoon?!?! Theek hai!!!
SV smiles!! Then again Sagar gets sad!!! 
Sagar - Papa main hum 3 dino ke liye kuch khane ko lata hoon!!!
VP - Theek hai beta!!!
Sagar goes!!! 
VP and Vidya laughs out loud!!!
Vidya - Papa aap bhi naa kabhi kabhi ekdum super ideas dete hai!!!
VP - Beta hum bhi kabhi jawan the!!! And don't forget!!! Main koi typical papa nahi hoon balki main tumhara dost hoon aur...
Vidya - Aur dunia ke sab se best papa hai!!! :D
VP - I know!!! (LOL!!!)
Vidya (smiles) - Aab dekhiye!!! Main kaise kal Sagar ko surprised kar deti hoon!!!
Vidya and VP smiles!!!

Precap : Sagar is roaming around sadly in his college!!! Sahil calls Sagar and tells him something which makes him (Sagar) shocked!!!

Part 22 ends!!! Hope u'll like it!!! Waiting for ur comments!!! Love... Bidz!!! :) :)

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was toooo good yaar 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
bidzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz------awesum update deae..
eagerly w8inf for teh next update...
im sad bcoz saahil didnt meet his pari till nw...
n ya im a bit tensed.....coz i feel dat sagar's parents will nt agree to SV''s marriage :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update !
Loved it !
So Vidya is gonna surprise Sagar !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: awesumsonia

bidzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz------awesum update deae..

eagerly w8inf for teh next update...
im sad bcoz saahil didnt meet his pari till nw...
n ya im a bit tensed.....coz i feel dat sagar's parents will nt agree to SV''s marriage :(


Sahil ji ko uska pari zarur mil jayega....tension kaiko leneka!!! 😉
Tension mat lo....all will b fine..😃
And thanxx!!!! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks everyone!!! Here's part 23!!!! Enjoy!!! :)

Scene 1 
Vidya and her dad is talking!!! Sagar comes with the food!!! 
Sagar - Yeh lijiye!!! Khana aa gaya!!! Dadi ji ne ghar se khana bhijwaya hai!!!
Vidya - Mujhe do, main hum sab ke liye paros deti hoon!!!
Sagar smiles and gives the bag of food to Vidya!!! Vidya, then, starts serving the food on the plates for all 3 of them!!! While Vidya is doing that work, VP and Sagar is having a small convo...
VP - Waise, Sagar, tumne aapne parivaar ke baare mein toh kuch bataya hi nahi!!! Unke baare mein bhi toh kuch bolo!!!
Sagar - Woh papa, mere mom dad most of the time business ke kam mein busy rehete hai!!! Main 3-4din mein ek bar unse mil pata hoon!!!
VP - Oh!!! (makes a sad face)
Sagar - Aur aab akele rehene ki aadat ho gayi hai!!
VP feels sad!!! Then he tells...
VP - Beta khud ko kabhi akela maat samajhna!!! Vidya, main, Vidya ki dadi, hum sab tumhare sath hai!!! :)
Sagar (smiles) - Main janta hoon papa!!! 
Vidya comes with the plates of foods!!!
Vidya - Aab aap dono ki baate khatam ho gayi ho toh khana khaye, bohot bhukh lagi hai!!!
VP - Haan haan chalo!!! Mujhe bhi bohot bhukh lagi hai!!! :)
Vidya passes each plate to her dad and Sagar!!! And then, she takes a plate!!! Now all 3 starts to eat!!!
VP - Beta, yeh tumne mujhe kya khane ko diya? Saara ka saara boiled hai!!!
Vidya - Papa, doctor ne aapko spicy khana khane se mana kiya hai!!! Iss liye aap ko yehi khana parega!!! 
VP - Par beta..?!
Vidya - Papa, please!!! Aap ko yehi khana hoga!!! Main aapki health ke bhale ke liye hi bol rahi hoon!!!
Sagar - Haan papa!!! Vidya sahi kehe rahi hai!!!
VP - Achcha theek hai!!! 
VP and SV are eating!!!
Sagar - Dadi ji bohot accha khana banati hai!!!
Vidya - Dekhne parega na kiski dadi hai!!! ;) (smiles)
Sagar (smiles) - Haan woh toh dekhna hi parega!!! :) 
VP - Vidya, woh tumhari dadi ke sath sath meri maa bhi hai!!! (laughs)
All 3 laughs!!! Suddenly, while eating, Sagar ate mirchi by mistake!!!
Sagar - Uuuu...aaaa...!!! Mirchi!!!!!
Vidya - Ek min!!! Main pani lati hoon!!!
Vidya rushes and brings a glass of water for Sagar!!! Then, she gives it to him!!!
Vidya - Thora dhyaan se nahi kha sakte? Tum jante ho na ke tum tikha nahi kha sakte? Phir bhi?!
Sagar - Sorry!!! Galti se ho gaya!!! Aage se dhyaan rakhunga!!!
VP smiles seeing Vidya caring for Sagar!!! Then all three finish their food and Vidya keeps the plate aside on the table!!!
VP - Baccho, tum log subha se yaha ho!!! Abhi sham hone ko hai!!! Ghar jaake thora sa aram karlo!!! 
Vidya - Par papa, aap ko aise akele chorkar hum kaise jaye?
VP - Main theek hoon beta!!! Tum log jaao!!!
Sagar - Par, papa?
VP - Accha theek hai, agar meri itni tension ho rahi hai toh maa ko bhej do!!! Tum log ghar jaake thora sa aram karlo!!!
Vidya - Okay, main dadi ko phone karti hoon!!!
Vidya calls her home!!! Dadi picks up the call!!!
Dadi - Hello!!!
Vidya - Haan dadi!!! 
Dadi - Vidya, tu?! Rudra kaisa hai aab? Aur khana kha liya tum sab ne, jo maine bheja tha?
Vidya - Papa theek hai!!! Aur hum sab ne khana kha liya!!! Bohot accha tha!!! Anyways, dadi, kya abhi aap hospital aa sakte ho? Papa kehe rahe the ke mujhe aur Sagar ko aab ghar jana chahiye aur hum papa ko aise akela chorkar nahi jaa sakte!!! Aap aa jati toh accha hota!!!
Dadi - Beta, main toh ready hoon!!!! Abhi nikal ne hi wali thi ke tumne phone kiya!!! Tum log waha se nikal jao, main hospital ke liye nikal hi rahi hoon!!!
Vidya - Great!!! :) Toh phir theek hai, hum yaha se nikal te hai, aap papa ka dhyaan rakhna, aur khud ka bhi!!!
Dadi - Haan zarur beta!!! Tum chinta maat karo!!! 
Vidya - Theek hai dadi!!! Aab main phone rakhti hoon!!! Aap jaldi se aa jaiyega!!! Hum log yaha se nikal rahe hai!!!
Dadi - Accha theek hai!!! Rakhti hoon!!!
Call disconnects!!!
Vidya - Dadi yaha aa rahi hai!!! 
VP - Great!!! Toh tum log aab jaake aram karo!!! 
Vidya - Par papa aap...?
VP - Arey beta, tumhari dadi aa rahi hai naa? So tension kaisa? Tum log befikar hokar jao!!! :)
Vidya - Accha theek hai papa!!! Apna dhyaan rakhiyega!!!
Sagar - Take care papa!!!
SV both hug VP!!!
VP - Tum dono bhi apna dhyaan rakhna!!!
SV smiles!!! Then they go from there!!! 

Scene 2 
SV come outside the hospital where they meet Dadi!!!
Vidya - Dadi, accha hua ke aap se mulakat ho gayi yaha!!! Please papa ka dhyaan rakhiyega!!!
Dadi - Beti, chinta maat karo!!! Main Rudra ka dhyaan rakhungi!!! Tum log jakar thora sa aram karo!!!
Vidya - Theek hai dadi!!! Papa ka aur apna dhyaan rakhna!!!
Dadi - Tum dono bhi apna khayal rakhna!!!
Dadi goes inside the hospital and SV are walking towards their car!!!
Vidya - Toh aab?
Sagar - Aab kya? Tum tumhare ghar aur main mere ghar!!! (takes a sigh)
Vidya - Waaah ji!!! Aaj Mr. Romantic aisi unromantic baate kyu kar rahe hai? 
Sagar - Matlab? 
Vidya - Matlab, tum mere ghar chaloge!!! Waise bhi tumhare mom-dad ghar par nahi hai!!! Toh tum akele ghar pe kya karoge!!! Mere ghar chalo!!!
Sagar - Par... papa?
Vidya (whispers) - Papa ko kuch pata nahi chalega!!!
Sagar (smiles) - Agar naukro ne bol diya toh?
Vidya - Mere ghar mein koi naukar nahi hai!!! Maine tumse kaha tha naa!!!
Sagar - Oh haan!!! Bhul gaya!!! Theek hai chalo!!! 
Vidya smiles!!! SV comes near their car and both sits in the car!!! 
Sagar - Waise, ek baat batayu?
Vidya - Kya?
Sagar - Mere sath rehete rehete tum bhi besharam hoti jaa rahi ho!!!
Vidya - Isse kehete hai sangat ka asar!!! (laughs) Aur waise bhi, zarurat ke liye kabhi kabhi besharmi dikhani parti hai!!! (winks)
Sagar - Arey waah!!! Mera dialogue mujh pe hi!!! Accha hai!!! 
SV smiles!!!
Vidya - Accha theek hai!!! Aab chalo!!! Sari time gari mein hi baate karne ka irada hai kya?
Sagar (laughs) - Nahi, chalo!!!
Sagar starts the car!!! Sagar is driving and Vidya is sitting next to his seat!!! Vidya turns on the mp3 player!!! "O Sanam O Sanam from the movie The Killer" is playing!!!
Vidya - Yeh gana mere liye bohot special hai!!!
Sagar (looks at Vidya) - Mere liye bhi!!! Issi gane pe hi toh humne humara pehela stage performance kia tha!!! :)
SV both smile!!! Then Sagar takes Vidya in his arms and is driving!!!

Scene 3
SV are in front of Vidya's house!!! SV get out of the car!!!
Sagar - Oh!!! Toh yeh hai mera sasural!!! Bohot accha hai!!! (LOL)
Vidya (smiles) - Thanks!!! 
Sagar smiles!!! Then both enter into the house!!! 
Sagar (looks around the house) - Bohot hi pyara ghar hai!!!
Vidya smiles!!!
Vidya - Chalo, main tumhe apna bedroom dikhati hoon!!! 
Sagar (smiles) - Chalo!!! :)
Vidya takes him to her bedroom!!! 
Sagar - Waah!!! Tumhara bedroom toh tumhari tarah hi bohot khubsurat hai!!! (smiles)
Vidya - Thanks!!! (smiles)
Sagar - It's my pleasure!!! (smiles)
Sagar sees Vidya's computer!!! 
Sagar - Ohhhh ji!!! Toh aap issi computer se mere sath chat karti thi!!! (smiles)
Vidya - Haan ji!!! (smiles)
Sagar - Lekin yeh computer toh kafi purana lag raha hai!!! Change kyu nahi karwaya?
Vidya - Kaise change karwati? Yeh computer toh humare pyaar ki nishani hai, iske vajar se hi toh hum dono aaj sath hai!!! 
SV smile and their eyes lock!!! :) Then both hug!!! <3 After a few seconds...
Vidya - Tum fresh ho jao, main humare liye coffee banake lati hoon!!!
Sagar - Okay!!! :) Washroom kaha hai?
Vidya - Waha!!! (points out at right direction)
Sagar goes to the washroom and Vidya goes to the kitchen for making coffee!!!

Scene 4
Sagar is in the washroom!!! He washes his face and hands and then is about to remove the water from his face and hands by towel!!! The towel belongs to Vidya's, it's a pink towel!!! While removing water with the towel, Sagar sees, in the middle of the towel, there is bigly drawn a heart shape and inside it is written SV!!! Seeing this, Sagar smiles!!! :)
Vidya is in the kitchen!!!! She's making coffee, that's when Sahil phones her!!!
Vidya - Hello, Sahil!!! Kaise ho?
Sahil - Haan Vidya!!! Main theek hoon!!! Tum kaisi ho? Aur uncle kaise hai? Abhi tum aur Sagar kaha ho? Aur Sagar ka phone kyu nahi lag raha? Kitne time se usse call karne ki try kar raha hoon!!!
Vidya - Arey hold on!!! Itne saare questions ek sath!!! Yaar thora break toh lo!!! 
Sahil (laughs) - Achcha theek hai!!!
Vidya - Main theek hoon aur papa bhi ekdum theek hai!!! Abhi main aur Sagar mere ghar par hai aur dadi papa ke sath hospital mein hai!!! Sagar ka phone dead hai, iss liye shayad phone nahi lag raha!!! 
Sahil - Uncle theek hai yeh sunkar accha laga!!! Ohhoo, toh love birds abhi akele akele hai!!! Accha hai!! Uncle aur dadi ko pata hai?
Vidya - Dimag toh theek hai tumhara!!! Unhe batakar mujhe marna hai kya!!! (laughs)
Sahil (laughs) - Hahaha!!! Sahi baat hai!!! Waise Sagar kaha hai, usse phone do zara!!
Vidya - Woh washroom mein hai, jab aa jayega tab call karne ko bol dungi!!!
Sahil - Chalo theek hai!!! Accha toh main rakhta.....
Vidya - Ek minute!!! Tumhe ek khush khabri deni hai!!! Main kal se St. Martin's join kar rahi hoon!!!!!!!! :D
Sahil - Wow!!! That's great news!!! 
Vidya - Sagar ne hi mujhse bola tha St. Martin's join karne ko!!! Lekin maine abhi tak usse bataya nahi hai ke main kal se hi waha join kar rahi hoon!!! Woh soch raha hai ke papa ne college change karne se mana kar diya!!!
Sahil (laughs) - Hahah!!! Toh usse batado naa!!!
Vidya - Abhi nahi!!! Kal khud woh mujhe dekhlega!!! :) Usse kal ek surprise dungi!!! Aur tumhe kal mera ek chota sa kam karna hoga!!!
Sahil - Haan haan!!! Main samajh gaya!!! :) Main humesha se hi toh tum dono ka postman ka kam kar raha hoon!!! (laughs)
Vidya (laughs) - Dost ho humare!!! Itna karna toh tumhara farz hai!!! :)
Sahil - Haan woh toh hai!!! (smiles) Accha theek hai toh main phone rakhta hoon!!! Kal milte hai college mein!!!
Vidya - Theek hai!!!!! Bye!!! :)
Call disconnects!!! Vidya makes 1 cup of coffee and goes to her room!!!

Precap : "Same precap that's written in the previous part"

Part 23 ends!!! Waiting for your comments!!! Do tell me what you like and what you don't!!! Love ya all!!! Take care!!! :) 
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was sooooo nice yaar , lekin akele akele baat kya hai bidu ha 😉
and i'm waiting for the surprise
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: khulh

that was sooooo nice yaar , lekin akele akele baat kya hai bidu ha 😉
and i'm waiting for the surprise


thanks yaar!!! 😃 
"akele akele baat kya hai" matlab??