*Dying Embers* Pg 26 Chapter 8 :) - Page 19

vatty ur love letter is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo golod
 kitna accha likha hai
khali pili natak kar rahi thi.......lol
 loved it

Vatty!! 🤗

Hey vatty!!when i read your comment 1st i thought this update was going to be confusing but its not....... It was nice i mean it was very very nice...... Dont doubt your writing So much....sehat ke liye acha nahi hai😆..... the suspense of Wat happened dat day is killing me.......... Continue soon......

the story is progressing very well...I really like how you are trying to explore the whole 'love her for what she is' from an adolescent perspective...very nice...continue soon

dear vatty thanx for the pm..

 

i love u for your immaturity after all u are young and dont worry some of us..we were probably even more immature 😆

 

i know i used to put up a face when i was your age and quarrel with friends baat baat par

 

it is natural so no worries😊

 

loved shaan thinking of how he missed khanak and also him wanting to be with her again  ..

full part was  awesome

 

now be confident and be sure ...u write well... I loved it😊keep it up😊

Edited by sshriyaa84 - 13 years ago

dnt remember the 6th part as u update sooo OFTEN! ...

it ws realy gud n nw i m excited 2 c hw does he win over her so pls continue soon

Soooo

Vatttyyyyy!!.....That was beautiful👏⭐️....Like poetry.....Love the mistery and am eager to read more....Can;t wait for Shaan to start wooing her again....But unlike Auntie I want them to bury the past first😊.....

It was beautiful Vats !!
the letter was too cute.....like a teenagers first crush, first love !!
it was beautifully written.....

I am waiting for them to revisit their past and tackle it so that they can move ahead confidently !!

And never say anything negative about your writing.....whatever you write touches deep !!