OS: A Night of Togetherness (Part 2 on pg 5) - Page 5

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Part 1: Beautifully written once again!! Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago

Babaji ki special bachchi...Aww...such a cute line!! 

lovely update. i just loved it.

👏 Awesome. More closer to reality than anything else. Perfect. 

outstanding
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it was a lovely update too good👏 luvd it  thnx 4 d pm!

Hey Sharmishtha....Just finished reading part 2....All I can say is "Yaad aa Gaya Mujhe Guzra Zamana"...😍...Wow...reminiscing those days thru the dialogues between Maan and Geet has been really heart-warming...

The tete-e-tete between Maan and Geet takes you through all the phases of their Journey together...The Ups and Downs, The Laughter and the Sadness, The Love and The Fights....😍....Their Khatti-Meethi Nok-Jhok  brought out by your dialogues is par excellence...and so real..😳😃....Hai Sharmistha you have outdone yourself...👏

I know at the risk of repeating myself I'm gonna say...I would love to see something like this shown on Maan and Geet...It would be such a refreshing change from all the cliched SR scenes shown on TV...😛

So once again Sharmishtha Take a Bow for an excellent OS...👍🏼Hope you keep coming up with more such stories

Thanks everyone. I sometimes feel bad that we are seeing this wonderful couple in a daily soap; so everything has to be stretched; else they will soon run out of the story. If we still lived in the times of weekly shows, we could have seen some talks when it was needed, rather than unnecessarily not talking for long, as it happened in today's episode. So, I take solace in writing my own scenes in my OSs. Really glad that you all enjoy it too. 😊

Aweosme yaar.. always a pleasure to read u dear sharmili... 🤣