thanks for liking and appreciating 😊Originally posted by: Gunseerat
the introduction is superb
the chracterisation and the adjectives used are perfect
the chracter depiction and the plot is strong wid a really well excecuted theme
m loving the concept and the destiny maker is doing a grt job by making the gals unite
it wud be fun to see the way they wud try to get along
thumbs up for scene description
ur a master
truely a lovly tale awaited
gud luck for more
cant wait for next
gunseerat
Soni...
Wonderful start ...really liked how u hav introduced the girls n der background stories n how dey r so diff frm each other..please update as soon as u can..pls add me also to the PM list.....
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waise bolna padhega har baar kya ke add me in the PM list>?
btw it looks interesting padha nai hain but dekhne main its looking v interesting (rubbing my palms now)
will read it once i get free
thanks dear 😳
ok thanks alot 😃Originally posted by: prernahazra
whenever u start an ff is mind blowing so never forget to put me on ur pm list
pm me🤗
Originally posted by: prernahazra
whenever u start an ff is mind blowing so never forget to put me on ur pm list
pm me🤗
thanks for appreciating and likingInteresting start Soni... loved the way you gave intros of the girls and eager to know what happens next, the boys entry😛.... The best part of your FF's, you take a strong grip in the very beginning and its simply amazing..
Update soon and me is definitely in PM list😊
thanks 😊Originally posted by: Cool_Rads
What a start Soni..loved it...do add me in ur pm list sweety
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