-Shanak SS- Banwra Mann Final Pg 16 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Saazy Samjhi....Awesome update yaar🤗 Loved every part of it !!!👍🏼
All dilogue are brilliant like 'Uska dhand me aaj tak bhugat raha hoo" and "Waise tho tum jabhi Natashajee Natashajee kehtee,,,Natasha ka tho mujhe pata nahin,,,,lekin mera khoon tumhare liye bahut khauolta tha'.

Khanak: Dhaath!!!!!!!
I retrive all the old rbo memories while reading your ss !!! 😍
Kaas cvs tumhara ss phade aur kuch soche😍
Thanks so much Saazy!🤗

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Krishna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Saaz darling...what a way to end it....awww...closure for both of them....

Loved how you got her to remeber Shantanu with that Kurta shirt...loved how he was all ready to go to Dulwhadi with her to make new memories..awww...sigh....

Thats what we all want to...don't we...loved you for this and love Shanak...and AkkiBoo.

Brilliant dear 👏👏👏👏

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Anu80

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Saaz- amazing yaar.. you know how much I have been waiting to hear that Dhath again... and when I read it in your final part I was like marjawan... yaaar you made my day!!
amazingly written.... please Saaz become a CV... how about starting a thread guys how much money will we pay to make Saaz a CV??

Pure Shanakism... that naughtiness combined with that gentle pyaar... and the description of the physical attraction is so real... made me blush!!

And already wating for your next post!!

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-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

awww Saaz ... Kya jabardastaa Dialogues ... Mindblowing... So beautifully written ...

Yaaar FInal part ???? Nahieeeeeeeeeeeee ....

A BIG THANKU for the DHAT

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tvrasika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

@ Saaaz
Proud of you dost:) Superbly written and finished👏

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smitha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Beautifully written Saaz keeping it with ShaNak's essence.Loved it and loved how Shantanu talked abt her peti and how he can stuff his things into it and also talking abt the sword.Realised by reading that she doesn't know he was there!It was Awesome.

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vaish_123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

What an ending!

Saaz! No words.

THIS IS IT!😃

Thanks for the pm

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iluvmanar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

oh saaz...sorry yaar 4 being late...aj 1 xam tha issliye....but as usual as awesum....i guess khanak ka pehla pati was awesumest...😆

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142958

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Posted: 13 years ago

#139

Ek dum lovely!

But why was it so short yaar?

Why not let them be mad at each other for longer?

I love it when Shaan is grumpy

Their romance sizzles..... much like the day after the engagemnet with Tashu

The way he looks at her is to die for

I love how uve used REAL converstaions from the show.... makes it so much appealing

Thjeir characters are exactly like they appeared when the show started

Love it Love it

Love it!

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The_May_Rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#140

**Whining** I want to see this episode right NOW NOW!......😳......

Loved it Saaz, just perfect👏⭐️.....I could just imagine, the room, the petti and ShaNak.....Infact the whole scene.....Wish the CVs steal your SS😈😆.....

P.S. Itna kafi hai, yah orr tareef karoon?😃.....

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