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Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.
hey nicely written...lol...but i was hopping for a nice ending lol..but ur never to continue just left me giggling...lol..
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hey very nice one..loved it...i needed something like this...i am feelin so restless and wondering wat would happen on monday...
loved tht line..abhay is suffering from MPD..lol..sometimes it does feel like tht...can't wait for monday
Originally posted by: Akanksha0701
Aww, Neethi, I loved this so much! I'd love it if Pia behaves like this with Abhay! She needs to get over her vulnerablity and get back to Abhay with the same cold heartedness he showed her! That's the only way to melt the iron man. π³
PS - What do you mean by 'NOT GONNA CONTINUE'? π‘ What happened to the boom-baam-dhishoom I was expecting? Pia needs her suspicions about Abhay back, no?
Originally posted by: Princezz22
Woah Neethi Sis this is such an awesome piece of writing.
Totally loved it.Simple amazing OS.
I write alot and barely read others ff'sππLOL but I read few FF's which are really awesome and I feel that it doesn't seems the writer has indulged in writing for the first time.As the writing seems so perfect,realistic and factual.π³
Once again , beautiful piece of writing.π³
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