AbhIya OS: Stop being difficult!

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Posted: 2010-12-25T12:13:52Z


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Posted: 2010-12-25T12:22:29Z
hey nicely written...lol...but i was hopping for a nice ending lol..but ur never to continue just left me giggling...lol..
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Posted: 2010-12-25T12:30:04Z
Originally posted by .:.MONA.:.


hey nicely written...lol...but i was hopping for a nice ending lol..but ur never to continue just left me giggling...lol..
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Thanks!! Sorry for not continuing but i don't really write. This was just one scene which popped up in my mind and I really wanted to share it with you allBig smile
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Posted: 2010-12-25T12:30:31Z
hey very nice one..loved it...i needed something like this...i am feelin so restless and wondering wat would happen on monday...
loved tht line..abhay is suffering from MPD..lol..sometimes it does feel like tht...can't wait for monday
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Posted: 2010-12-25T12:41:05Z
Aww, Neethi, I loved this so much! I'd love it if Pia behaves like this with Abhay! She needs to get over her vulnerablity and get back to Abhay with the same cold heartedness he showed her! That's the only way to melt the iron manEmbarrassed

PS - What do you mean by 'NOT GONNA CONTINUE'? Angry What happened to the boom-baam-dhishoom I was expecting? Ouch Pia needs her suspicions about Abhay back, no? 

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Posted: 2010-12-25T12:41:57Z
Woah Neethi Sis this is such an awesome piece of writing.
Totally loved it.Simple amazing OS.
I write alot and barely read others ff'sLOLLOLLOL but I read few FF's which are really awesome and I feel that it doesn't seems the writer has indulged in writing for the first time.As the writing seems so perfect,realistic and factual.Embarrassed
Once again , beautiful piece of writing.Embarrassed
Edited by Princezz22 - 2010-12-25T12:42:27Z
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Posted: 2010-12-25T12:50:09Z
Originally posted by kiranni


hey very nice one..loved it...i needed something like this...i am feelin so restless and wondering wat would happen on monday...
loved tht line..abhay is suffering from MPD..lol..sometimes it does feel like tht...can't wait for monday

Thank you! Same with me!! I've been wondering what will happen on Monday! Then I was like, I will have to wait till Monday to find out what happens, but I can still think about what I want should happen! So here it was!
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Posted: 2010-12-25T12:53:07Z
Originally posted by Akanksha0701


Aww, Neethi, I loved this so much! I'd love it if Pia behaves like this with Abhay! She needs to get over her vulnerablity and get back to Abhay with the same cold heartedness he showed her! That's the only way to melt the iron manEmbarrassed

PS - What do you mean by 'NOT GONNA CONTINUE'? Angry What happened to the boom-baam-dhishoom I was expecting? Ouch Pia needs her suspicions about Abhay back, no? 


Aww!! Thank you so much Akanksha!!Hug As I said, I can't control Pia's behaviour but I'm allowed to imagine what I'd like her behaviour to be, right??Wink I seriously want Pia to be a little more self respecting in front of Abhay!! He's right. She's always lost around him, so lost in his hypnotic eyes that she doesn't care about the rest of the world!! She needs to stand up for herself!! 

P.S. Sorry, Akanksha, but you know that I don't have experience! I do not have ANY story in mind which I can share! Its was just this one scene!
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