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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ash534

will update within 2 days


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Posted: 12 years ago
so u r finally updating. i read it long time back but thought u hv left it. 
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey ash...
pl..plz..jaldi update karo!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear, i m posting this message on behalf of meera "ilove99" , plz follow it if it will help u ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


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hey guys!!!!!!i have made a ff corner for the ff readers and writers ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i'm new here don't know much but u r gud plz keep updating thanx...๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi
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amzinggg part!!!!!!!!!
lovelllyyy
continueee soon n plzz add me to pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 5

Madhu : meri bacchi, I just wanna see her now.

Haseena : Madhu, please don't be like this. You have to be strong. She'll come soon.

Voice : Yes she'll come soon. I'll bring her. And that's why I came back.

Madhu : Jai'

Jai : Mom don't worry.  Sab kuch teek ho jayega. I'll find Piya.

Jai's pic.

Voice : Jai is right'

Madhu looked at door and saw a girl wearing sari standing. Madhu looked at Jai with confusion. Jai was looking down with shy smile. Haseena looked at Jai and Madhu, then at Girl.

Madhu : who is she Jai? ( to Jai). Come inside beta (to girl).

Misha : Nahiii (shouts)


Abhay's Den


Piya was standing near window and looking outside. Suddenly a hand snaked her waist from back and pulled her close. Piya closed her eyes knowing who it is. Abhay started to nuzzle her nape and give small kisses making her shudder with pleasure. When she was not able to take it anymore, she turned facing Abhay and hugged him tight hiding her face in his chest. He smirked seeing his effect on her and hugged her tightly making no space between them. They stood there almost 1 hour. Abhay broke the hug reluctantly  and placed his two fingers under piya's chin to make her look into his eyes. But she closed her eyes shyly making Abhay smirk again.

Abhay :  Open your eyes Sweetie.

Piya : ''''''''..

Abhay : Please look at me Sweetheart.

Piya shyly opened her eyes and saw Abhay's eyes which were filled with desires, feeling more shy Piya closed her eyes again.

Abhay : Please Piya look at me.

Piya again looked at him but could not help blushing. Abhay saw her flushed cheeks and felt an urge to kiss it. He bowed down and kissed her both cheeks and then he noticed her trembling rosy lips. He looked at her seeking permission and she blushed more, he then gently took her rosy lips nibbling it softly. Soon it turned it softness turned more passion and Piya's hands was playing with Abhay's hair and Abhay's hand were caressing her waist. Their tongues were busy fighting to gain control over other. Soon they broke kiss due to lack of air. But their forehead was resting on one another with closed eyes, breathing heavily. Abhay opened his eyes and saw Piya breathing heavily with closed eyes which made him smile.

Abhay : Piyaaa

Piya : Hmm

Abhay : I love you

Piya : hmm

Abhay : I'm sorry if I hurt you but I love you madly.

Piya : hmm (smiling)

Abhay : I know you like me and please don't deny it because I know you like me. Right?

Piya : Hmm

Abhay : Today is great day right?

Piya : hmm

Abhay : U will marry me today right?

Piya : hmmm

Suddenly she opened her eyes and stepped back looking at Abhay with NO-WAY look. Abhay smirked at her and stepped towards her and she took steps backward.

Piya : No

Abhay : But you said yes. (Smirking)

Piya : No, you tricked me.

Abhay : everything is fair in LOVE AND WAR.

Piya : No way, I won't marry you.

Abhay : Yes, you will.

Piya : No ,I won't.

Abhay : Yes, you will.

Piya : No ,I won't.

Abhay : Yes, you will.

Piya : No ,I won't.

Abhay : No ,you won't.

Piya : Yes, I will.

Abhay : OK. (Smiling)

Piya : No, I mean I won't.

Abhay : you lost your chance sweetie.

Piya : But you tricked me and you can't force me.

Abhay : Keep your word Dobriyal. I heard they never back off and keep their promise.

Piya : Dobriyals always keep their promise.

Abhay : then marry me.

Piya : NOOO

Abhay : I know you Dobriyals always '.

Piya : Stop it. OK I will marry you'. Ab kush?

Abhay : Bohut' Wedding dress and jewels are inside the cupboard, right side. Wear it and come down.


Raichand Mansion


 Misha : Nahiii (shouts)

Hearing Misha's nahiii, all of them were shocked. Misha ran towards Jai and whacked him.

Jai : oouch. It hurts Misha.

Misha : really? Bro couldn't you wait for right time?

Jai : Sorry, but can't leave her alone there.

Misha ran towards the girl and hugged her. She too hugged Misha back. Misha took her inside and made her sit on sofa. Hassena looked at the girl and saw a 17 or 18 years old girl wearing golden colour sari with magalsutra and sindoor. She looked like a Barbie doll with flushed cheeks. She came towards Madhu and touched her feet. Madhu gave ashirwaad and then she went near Haseena to touch her feet , Hassena blessed her.

Madhu : Who is she Jai?

Misha : aapki bahu mom.

Madhu : KYAAA??? (Shocked)

Abhay'Den

Abhay saw Piya descending stairs wearing beautiful Red with Golden work lehenga. He was mesmerized by her beauty. She was looking like Apsara from heaven. He forgot to blink his eyes seeing her beauty. She came down and stood in front of him, but he was in trance. She blushed seeing this. Her flushed cheeks brought him back to reality.

Abhay : you look beautiful Piya.

Piya : Thanks Abhay.

Abhay : Chalae?

Piya : Hmm. But where?

Abhay : 1st to registrar office and then to Mandir.

Piya: OK

They went outside and sat inside the car and drove to registrar office.

 Raichand Mansion

Madhu : KYAAA??? (Shocked)

Jai & Misha : Mom calm down.

Madhu : How can I ? My son married secretly and my daughter got kidnapped. Now how can any mom calm down hearing this?

Misha : Mom, Bro will bring Piya home. And About Geet, Ask Jai Bhaiya.

Madhu : Her name is Geet?

Jai : Yes. (Blushing)

Madhu : But how can you marry a girl without informing us? I trusted you Jai. (To Jai). And Misha, how you know her? (To Misha)

Misha : Long story mom. Will say when Piya come back. Mom I think they should freshen up. They will be tired due to jet lag.

Madhu : but..

Haseena : Yes Madhu.

Jai : Mom, I'm going out to collect some information to track Abhay. I'll be back before night.

Misha : But take some rest first Bro.

Jai : No Mish. 1st Piya then rest.

He was about to leave when Misha blocked his way and said "you need rest first" pointing Geet who looked scared. He sighed and nodded to Misha.

Jai : Mom I'll change and go.  Our clothes are stinky.

Misha : Yes Bro. I'll ask Ramu kaka to bring your luggage to guestroom.

Jai : Thanks Mish.

Mish : Haseena aunty, where is guest room?

Haseena : Jobb' Jobb..

A man came running and stood infront of Haseena.

Jobb: Yes Maam

Haseena : Show them restroom.

Jobb : Ok Maam. (To Haseena). Sir, This way (To Jai)

He took Geet's hand and led to upstairs, to room.


Geet's Pic

 

He closed the door of the room and saw his crying child-wife. He closed his eyes seeing her tears and then opened them. He went near her and pulled her into a tight hug. She was sobbing badly. He licked her tears to stop them.

Jai : Shhh. Don't cry Shona. You know I hate tears.

Geet : your family hates me.

Jai : No they love you. You know how Piya, Misha, Panchi and jiju take your side always to support you.

Geet : But your mama hates me.

Jai : No shona, please don't cry. It's not good for our baby.

Geet : ji.


Abhay's Den


Finally Abhay married Piya. They are legal husband and wife. Abhay made a call to someone to arrange for something. He then looked at Piya and smiled. She smiled back.

Abhay : Piya' chalo

Piya : Kaha?

Abhay : Sasural.


POLICE STATION


Police : Sir, please calm down. We're trying.

Kabir : TRYING? LAST 72 HOURS YOU WERE SAYING THE SAME LINE.

Chand : Calm Down beta.

Kabir : But Dad.

Arnab : He is right beta. We will find her soon.

Voice : Yes Dad. We will find her soon.

Arnab turned around and saw his son. His eyes were filled with tears. Jai came towards Arnab and hugged him.

Arnab : Missed you beta. I wish you were here before.

Jai : Don't worry. I'll bring her back Dad.


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Edited by Ash534 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww... No need for thanks. .
I did it for myself. .
How can i miss such a wonderful ss. .

Thank u so much for updating!
Superb update!
I loved every bit of it. .
Yuppee. . Abhiya married. .wow
jeh n geet r so cute
hope the police dont find them
the precap is wow. .hayee!
Eagerly waiting for the next chap. .
Continue soon
tcEdited by missglam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update after such a long time๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update...
Continue soon..
Can u pm me????