MAANEET SS - Solitary Last Part @ page 18 - Page 16

another lovely ff of yours
u write so good that i started feeling sad when i began reading it nd was similing by d end of it
u r so good dat one easily feels all d emotion u pen down
its jst gr8 2 read ur ff

Originally posted by: preethia

i absolutely loved this ss..............@ some parts my eyes were moist cudnt help it..............loved all the emotions and everything abt this ss was perfect...................

O....superb superb superb.........wat a wonderful SS. i am completely bowld over........................WOW simply awesum👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

just awesome lovely SS...

hhhiii...me back again...

part 1
aahhh wot can i xpect from u accept endless pains sweetly jotted in golden words neither too long n byond reality nor too short to be unable to hold nerves...
first part brought tears in my eyes living alone is more painful than death...both living alone in memories of each other seems more than painful

part 2
Geet seems to be a bit more stubborn than him...mu is not yet disclosed but i guess those having children mostly avoid separation cz of children as separation b/w parents play havocs in children's life...
now maan ud be his boss😛...seems intrsting😛

part 3
Oh my God dere convo made me sad😭
after 2 long years they must be feeling so uncomfrtabl
OMG again😆 for fire but maan ud be safe...i knew it😉
geets reaction is soo natural...hope she find him soon...

Part 4
aoohh maans convo wid mehar was heart wrenching...
i literally hated geet for this...
wot he said was right she was soo mean to spoil 2 long years of 2 other persons alongwid her..., this part is really very heart touching...n dadi is no more😭😭 poor maan was soo alone😭😭
i hope every thing get fixed soon...😭
rest two parts i ll read later on😊

part 5
holy shit...this was the reason of dere sepration...uff i cant tell u maddy how much i hate geet when this sequence was shown in serial...i mean how ud she ever imagine of not trusting him😡😡😡...dont she know he is her SAVIOUR 😡
this nt...sucha...🤬
hah when will geet grow up...😡
feeling sad for maan😭😭😭