Devils Den:Aa Gale Lag Jaa...

Today's episode was a good filler one, just what u need before the marriage of the lead couple...😊...Once again CVs,its a request plss make sure there r no repeated scenes😳...We don't want Kisses and something which cannot b shown on TV before marriage ..all we want are some fresh Maaneet scenes and not what we have already witnessed before😃

• The starting scene and the Maaneet Hug...it reminded me of the disco hug...intense..passionate and divine😍😍😍.,.the best part about the hug was that Geet started talking while hugging him and so it looked all the more natural😳;Also while hugging and talking, we can see how both MSK and Geet were enjoying the moment in each other's arms..the satisfying smile on their face made the scene more adorable😳..
• Dialogue in this scene were good..loved the way MSK indirectly said that "When u smile..my life becomes colourful or else its fully black and white"👍🏼;Its clear that MSK's mission is to see Geet happy and for this he is ready to change himself even if it goes against MSK's basic nature😳...Forehead kiss was a good gesture to show respect for his lady love that moment😳
• Morning scene with Dadi was a good one and very realisitc👍🏼;Loved the way MSK was teasing Geet about how to become a good housewife🤣;Here we can argue that last night Geet said she can do anything for MSK's happiness and next morning she is not ready to bring coffee for MSK or is throwing tantrums over the selection of wedding card😆...but the point is r we suppose to take these cute nok-jhok scenes so seriously and search for such logics in it ??🤔;Geet can do anything for MSK's happiness holds true in the context of some serious turn of events in their life but not in these silly nok-jhok moments...so lets not take everything so seriously that as viewers we stop enjoying such scenes which r meant for fun and fillers😃...
• MSK-Geet going together for their wedding shopping is a good and realistic scene👍🏼;Finally they r doing something like a real couple🤣;Even though the scene had some extra sweet dialogues coming from MSK ,but I feel it was necessary that moment because all he wants is to see Geet happy and whenever she feels that MSK is not giving her attention,he tries to make her feel extra special by giving her extra sweet compliments😳;Viewers might find this going against MSK's character but the man is in love and just wants to make his ladylove feel extra spl by being extra sweet which is not wrong😊..

• Arjun-Anvesha chemistry not there in the one scene which they got🤔..Arjun is an interesting character👍🏼..but I m not seeing any future in Arjun-Anvesha track🤔
• MSK's dialogues in the last shopping scene were extra sweet...some of the sweetness can b cut down and a bit of passionplay can b shown here...it need not b kisses but some passionplay with his fingers on her bare back or some bedroom eyes can come in action☺️
• Story has taken a backseat in last few episodes;I can see that CVs want to concentrate on Maaneet marriage and so other important issues r put on hold but a bit of storytelling is needed here along with the nok-jhoks and marriage preparations😊

 

 

Some Issues and Queries of my dearest Cubes😆

• Is MSK Changed ??..Is he  a love sick puppy now ??😲..where has passion and intensity gone ??😲:🤣Lets all remember the MSK of Monday's episode.,.the way he went on doing hitlergiri in the office and then blasting Annie for not working properly in the office😛...So moral of the story is MSK is a changed man only for his Gith..he becomes shayar..majnu..romeo only when he is in his private space with Gith😛..but for his rest of the family members and office staff ,he is still the rough and tough MSK that we know😎..Also lets not forget the Attic room wala smiling MSK too😛..We hv only seen the HP wala or Delhi wala khadoos MSK..but do we know his past or how was he before Sam aunty came in his life ??😈..So in short MSK is still a bit of a mystry for us😛
• Why there is passion missing in Maaneet love story,..why is it so sugar-coated ??😲..The phase of passion and desire has passed now after confession😃...A guy desires for a woman till the time he is trying to woo her😛..Once he knows that she is his forever...he feels relaxed and tries to pamper her more where passion takes a backseat for some period of time and mushiness takes over😃;But thats doesn't mean the passion is over in their relationship🤣;Its still intact but has only taken a backseat because MSK knows that Geet is still not very comfortable with his extreme passionate pull..we saw that in pool party fiasco and earlier in RTM fiasco also😊;So he is trying to win her over and make her comfortable fully with his sher-o-shayari ..a zone in which Geet is more comfortable since MSK keeps saying that her happiness matters more to him than his own desires😃;The day MSK feels that she is truely ready to take their relationship to a more matured level,his passion too will b back😳;But hving said that,I still believe with mushy romance,a bit of finger passionplay can b shown🤔and also forehead kisses can b promoted to cheek or neck kisses at least if not more😛😆
• What happened to NT-Dev case..why is Geet not informed that MSK-Dadi has withdrawn the case ?😲😲...Firstly how can Dadi or MSK withdraw the case which was filed by Geet😃..Secondly Dadi only talked about withdrawing the case but that doesn't mean she has already finished withdrawing it😃;Thirdly Dev and NT r still in that same city..so its not that they hv already gone scotfree and Geet knows nothing about it😃;Fourthly MSK has not forgotten the matter ..reason why Dev's name is not there in the wedding card as per the precap😃..he has only kept those issues on hold sinse his top priority is marriage right now😃..Lastly if the case itself is not taken back yet,why will MSK tell Geet anything related to that matter at this point of time when after a long time she is enjoying her marriage preparations😃...Moral of the story is that the case track is put on hold till Maaneet marriage happens because Arjun's character needs to b established before the case track comes in front of Geet..u will know why later😊...Also in a daily soap there is something called suspense and curiosity element which remains to b there in  such shaadi moments...if MSK tells everything to Geet..then whole curiosity which is generated regarding this case will die down fully😃

Edited by jyoti06 - 13 years ago

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reserved 😃

Take toh aaj likhenge hi hum 😆
Milayenge apne saathi devils se kadam

Ab writers pe phool barsenge ya chappal 😕
Ye sawall hai iss cheez pe nirbhal 😉
Ki woh joh Geet ke writing karthe hain sample 😕
Unko abhi tak aaye ki nahin hai akal 😡


Poem 2

Inanity and repetition seem to be order the day
In the recent episodes logic has gone for a full toss
Their lot of disenchanted viewers in increasing day by day
If the viewers leave, it will be the Geet teams' loss

If you want your viewers to not leave and stay
Bring some freshness and creativity into the show in some way
With the viewers feelings and emotions you continue to play
They will show you the way to the highway

Poem 3
Sing NE will sing jab hoga uska aur Dev ka milan 🤢

Bhaiyya mere rakhi ki bandhan ko nibhana
Bhaiyya mere kisi aur ko mangalsutra na pehnana 🤢
Bhaiyya mere rakhi ke bandhan ko nibhana
Bhaiyya mere Meera ke laj ko tum bachana 😳

Bhaiyya mere Rakhi ke bandhan ko nibhana
Bhaiyya mere divorce ko please rukwana 😆
Bhaiyya mere Rakhi ke bandhan ko nibhana
Bhaiyya mere NT ke paas tum laut jaana 😆

Bhaiyya mere Rakhi ke bandhan ko nibhana
Bhaiyya mere Geet aur Maan ke beech na aana 😆
Bhaiyya mere Rakhi ke bandhan ko nibhana
Bhaiyya mere Arjun ko mujh se bachana 😉 😆

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John Henkel

"Sugar in the morning, sugar in the evening, sugar at suppertime"

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PS: If anyone is got the jest in this, do ping me folks, for I am floating in the misty seas of yonder

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JOYfully ve jumped to RESErve but dunno wat ll write after seeing toDAY!!!  Edited by Malihaluvmyself - 13 years ago

without even watching today I will say based on previous performance that the new writers need serious improvement. If I were to give them a grade it would be a 50/100. That is a major fail. You would have to get at least an 80 to pass. What I fail to understand is why we are stuck in one point in the story or why scenes are so repetitive? What kind of creative team is this if they are not creative at all? bottom line, start thinking of new ideas! There are so many loops to be closed from before, your running out if ideas? Then re-watch your own show and find the questions you have left unanswered and answer them! The script is just plain lazy, stop writing while your half asleep. We would like to see things that make sense. Take inspiration from great literary works, but don't copy exactly. Everything comes from inspiration, so find something inspiring.

More after I watch...

Today's episode was alright. I would have liked it more if scenes and dialogues were not so repetitive. How many times have we heard "tum mere zindagi ho" from Maan and Geet? Many times, in different words. It is very clear cv's are running out of ideas. What a shame since they just hired new writers. The episodes are getting too redundant at this point.

Bangle scene: It was good, would have enjoyed it more if i did not see similar scenes before. How many times will we keep seeing forehead kisses and ones that last forever too? The human body consist of many other places to kiss...i wonder why the forehead is so famous on Indian television. At this point it is boring. Two people about to get married, only tell each other "you are my life and my happiness". Yeah we get it, now move on!

Anvesha-Arjun scene: I don't have much to say about them. They need more improvement. They need more work and time. Though I like Arjun better then Anvesha. Editors, I would like to know why Anvesha went to meet Arjun in the morning and was still leaving at night? You guys were doing well so far, don't falter with silly mistakes. This scene could have easily come before the Maan and Geet scene.

Daadi-Maan-Geet Scene: This scene felt odd. It was as of it was only there for the sake of adding it. Yes there was meaning in the scene. Maan indirectly teaches Geet that just because they will get married she does not have to sacrifice her wants and needs for him. There was some nice Daadi and Geet bonding, which i guess showed that she has become apart of their family and the doubts she had about not being accepted may have been erased.

Bridal shop scene: This scene also showed Geet being accepted by Anvesha in to the family. I liked this scene only because Maan's stupidity made me laugh. Its good that he is finally complimenting her.

Maan and Geet's love is so selfless that I have diabetes. I wonder how many times we will hear the same things being said and done. Lets hope they are selfish about their love say if some Samaan from the past comes along.

CV's I will suggest of following Pride and Prejudice or Mahabharata as inspiration. Get inspired and make it your OWN.

Lastly, I will call my future fiancee "sir" because according to Maan and Geet's epic love story it is a term of endearment. Yup! Its not weird at all if you call your fiancee "sir"...it really means "Jaanu" in GHSP dictionary.

For Maaneet romance scenes how about...
1. A walk on the beach or steamy night in the water
2. Maan trying to sneak in Geet's maayka at night.
3. Going on a date
4. Geet cooking and Maan "helping" with other intentions.
5. Geet watching Maan workout and him catching her and "teaching" her some moves again with other intentions.




Edited by Ann.A - 13 years ago

The episode was fine. Nothing to get all excited about, but nothing to complain about either. Passion didn't come, but whatever was shown was not out of order. Edited by sharmishtha01 - 13 years ago