Mayur OS-Life in moments 7th OS Page 33

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Guys have written my first OS(and maybe last too๐Ÿ˜†)...was missing Mayur a lot...read if u can๐Ÿ˜†
Plz Pardon me for any mistakes i did๐Ÿ˜† and ya sorry for the length๐Ÿ˜†
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Mayank reached home, it was evening, he parked the car and started ringing the bell...once, twice...no one opened the door.He looked at the watch and said "Ab tak toh Nupur ghar pahunch gayi hogi, mujhse kaafi der pehle nikli thi" then smiling said "Lagta hai phir ghode bech kar so gayiand laughed.

Used his pair of keys to open the door and started to tip-toe towards the bed-room as he didn't want to break her dreaming process which was very very important to her and her avorite pass-time too(he smiled at his own thoughts), besides he loved to watch her sleep which always gave the image of "the world is peacefully dreaming".

But he suddenly came out of his dreamy thoughts as he found the room to be empty. He tried searching in the whole house but couldn't find her and got worried. He picked up his mobile to call her but before he could call, a new message was recieved. He read -

Mid-Day News Updates: 1.All the auto-richshaws and Taxis in Mumbai go for a Strike in Mumbai for 24 Hours at 3:00PM in the matter of Fare-Hike. (Skipped reading other news updates.)

It then dawned on Mayank: "ByGod, nupur college se ghar tak chal kar aa rahi hai isiliye ab tak nahi pahunchi.Mayank Sharma, tum Pati ho ya Jallad, college ghar se itni doori par hai. Maa yahaan hoti toh tumse jaroor kaheti ki- Mayu, very bad, issi din ke liye tum Nupur ko 3 saal tak yaad karke usse har pal maanga karte the"(scolding himself from his and his Mom's side).

He decided to catch Nupur in mid-way by car and left home but saw Uday taking his car and leaving for somewhere smiling as he left to let Mayank know that he took the car keys from the table.It irritated Mayank further.

Mayank started walking by himself without thinking much after walking fast for a few minutes he saw the glimpse of Nupur walking in his direction and slowed down his speed then and felt relieved to see her. Nupur as usual walking like she owns the road, blowing her hair fringes and setting it behind her ears...

Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gayi, Kismat Pe Aaye Naa Yakeen 
Utar Aayi Bheed Mein, Jaise Chaand Utar Ta Hai
Kabhi Haule Haule Dheere Se
Gun Guni Dhoop Ki Tarah Se Tarango Mein Tum
Chhoo Ke Mujhe Guzari Ho Yuh
Dekhu Tumhe Ya Main Sunoo, Tum Ho Sukoon 
Tum Ho Junoon..., Kyun Pehle Naa Aayi Tum
Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gayi, Kismat Pe Aaye Naa Yakeen 
Mayank smiled.

Nupur saw Mayank suddenly walking towards her and said "Lo ab pata chala ki strike hai"and smiled at the sweetness of Mayank to come down here.He was her true sapno ka rajkumar, more than she could ever think of.She saw him giving her a smile she smiled back(she loved his smile it made her feel better and as if everything is alright).
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Mayank-Nupur reached in front of each other and Nupur said teasingly,"Mayank Sharma aur itni sweetness ki mujhe yahaan tak lene aa gaye, waah. Agar Prof,Mr Sadu Mayank Sharma hote toh tumhe iss baat pe ek assignment de dete"Nupur started laughing.
Mayank made face in dis-believe and quickly replied,"Main yahaan koi sweetness dikhane nahi aaya hoon, Main toh ice-cream khane ke liye aaya tha, wahaan uss shop se"pointing towards the ice-cream parlour "tumhe dekha toh socha chalo saath kha lete hain"said Mayank teasing Nupur and making her go red with anger(though she knew that her husband only tried to get away with it) Nupur said angrily folding her arms"Mujhe nahi khani koi ice-cream vice-cream, tum akele hi jao aur khud khao"
Mayank held her arm and said"achcha mere saath toh chalo, please"with utter sweetness which Nupur couldn't refuse and went with him (thinking -"and this guy claims to be rude and act Sadu").

Both ordered Butterscotch flavoured ice-creams and Nupur started with her talks again after a single bite of ice-cream forgot all of her anger and asked"Achcha Mayank, mana ki tumhe gyaan baatne ka shaukh toh bachpan se hai, aur duniya mein teaching se jyada boring kaam aur koi nahi hai par phir bhi batao na tumne Prof banane ke baare mein kaise socha"

M: Nupur yeh sawaal hai ya tum mere Prof banane ke peeche koi joke expect kar rahi ho???
N: Arrey, main to sawaal hi kar rahi hoon,taking another bite from her ice-cream
M:(Saying matter of factly)Kyunki mujhe hamesha se yahi pasand tha-Rules & Regulations maintain karna, logon ke thoughts ko suljhana,  jo bhi maine tricks apne liye discover kiye hainunse dusro ki padhaai mein help karna,etc then quickly adding waise tumne bhi meri help ki hai yeh decision lene mein(remembering the time when he used to imagine Nupur when she was not with him for over 3 yrs and when her imagination used to help him sort his thoughts especially of taking up the job of Professor in Excel)...Nupur suddenly broke his train of thoughts...

N:Maine, woh kaise...
M:(Saying dramatically)woh kya hai na ki tum meri inspiration ho(smiling and winking)
N:(Suddenly getting serious)par tum to sach mein meri inspiration the inn 3 saalon mein jab main Dhruv se lad rahi thi-tab tumhari baatein, tumhari smile, tumhara safe hona-yeh sab kuch ek inspiration hi to tha mere liye(tears filling her eyes)

M:(felt relieved coz she brought up the subject and asked what was bothering him from long)toh tumne mujhpe bharosa kyun nahi kiya Nupur, kya tumhe laga ki main yeh situation handle nahi kar paaonga...(with a worried look)
N:Nahi, main jaanti thi ki tum har tarah se mujhe protect karke situation hamesha ki tarah perfectly handle karoge, jaise tumne hamari shadi ke waqt kiya tha, jab sirf tum hi mera bharosa the aur koi nahi, par iss baar bas mujhe tumhari fiqra jyada thi...tumhari,Gunjan ki,Bauji ki...(with a helpless expression)
and then suddenly collecting herself up & saying in a nautanki mood..."Aur waise bhi itni dramatic real-life heroine banane ka mauka main kaise chod sakti thi,ByGod"(smiling and teard brimming her eyes)
M:(Mayank thought against pressing any further...wiping off her tears & trying to change her mood) Ah,tumhari ice-cream pighal rahi hai...waise tum toh heroine ban gayi par mujhe zero bana diya tumne(saying dis-approvingly)
N:Nahi, bilkul nahi, mujhe Gunjan ne sab bataya hai ke tumne uss accident ke baad aisi car banayi jisme 95%safe passenger seat ho taaki koi iss tarah kisi apne ko na khoye(proudly), mere favourite cheezon ki ghar mein dukaan laga di, ghar waisa hi sajaaya jaisa main chahti thi, Uday Bhaiyya(jo ki hamare  college  play ke incharge the) ...unse hamare Confession ka tape mangwa kar tumne dhero baar dekha, meri jagah meri hi rehne di, aur har tarah se positive behave karna chaha aur mere pyaar ko apni kamzori nahi banne diya, waigaira, wagaira...isliye tum toh mere asli hero ho(with proud and appreciation sparkling in her eyes which were tearful a few minutes back)

Main To Yeh Sochta Tha, Ke Aaj Kal Uparwaale Ko
Fursat Nahi Phir Bhi Tumhe Banaake Woh
Meri Nazar Main Chadh Gaya, Rutbe Mein Woh .Aur Badh Gaya

M:(Handling her his ice-cream and and suddenly picking her up and saying) achcha(while starting to walk towards home)
N:(looking around nervously with shock and question in her eyes) tum theek toh ho naa
M:(trying to supress his smile)haan, maine socha ki meri Drama-Queen ki life mein already bahut drama ho chuka hai toh kyun naa thoda Queen ki tarah bhi feel karwaya jaaye(looking at her)

Badle Raaste Jharne Aur Nadi, Badli Deep Ki Tin Tin
Chhede Zindagi Dhun Koi Nahi, Badli Barkhaa Ki Rimjhim
Badlengi Rituein Ada.., Par Main Rahoongi Sada..
Usi Tarah Teri Baahon Mein Baahein Daal Ke Har Lamha Har Pal

N:(Suddenly pulling his cheeks in excitement and feeding him his ice-cream with wide smile)
M: toh tumne mujhe kaise miss kiya...
N:Maine...Maine to apne sapno ko hi apna best friend bana liya tha jaise tumse milne se pehle the(saying as if she had all simple solutions to her problem just like always)...aur hamare liye dher saare sapne dekhen...jaise hum Ahmedabed 1 lambi trip par jaayenge by car, aur...haan mujhe tumhare saath DDLJ dekhni hai...and she kept talking when they headed home which was not far off now...while Mayank made a mental note of fulfilling most of her dreams which he could now and adoring her nautanki...

And a beautiful day was coming to an end with sun setting by...but a relationship rising above all odds to grow stronger and better with each passing moment...of the 2 most beautiful people with the most beautiful hearts that knew no better than each other.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey pallu mind blowing os yaar ๐Ÿ‘
tu to chupi rustam nikli yaar๐Ÿ˜†
u wrote very well and it  was emotional too
loved their convo  talking about their past..
and song was also nice it  was perfect  with the lines ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
and yeah do write more loved it will love to read ur os 
thnx alot for pm ๐Ÿค—

jenny...:))
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Originally posted by: jainypatel

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hey pallu mind blowing os yaar ๐Ÿ‘
tu to chupi rustam nikli yaar๐Ÿ˜†
u wrote very well and it  was emotional too
loved their convo  talking about their past..
and song was also nice it  was perfect  with the lines ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
and yeah do write more loved it will love to read ur os 
thnx alot for pm ๐Ÿค—

jenny...:))

Thanks Jainy๐Ÿค—
ya was missing Mayur a lot so came up wid this๐Ÿ˜†...chupi rustam who me???๐Ÿ˜†
Am really glad you liked it๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Originally posted by: Payal-15

Thanks Jainy๐Ÿค—

ya was missing Mayur a lot so came up wid this๐Ÿ˜†...chupi rustam who me???๐Ÿ˜†
Am really glad you liked it๐Ÿ˜ƒ

yeah u chupi rustam itne achche os likti hain and abhi post kia๐Ÿ˜†
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pallu it's wonderful..u have written so brilliantly yaar..!!
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hi payal..........beautiful OS..........plz do write more :)
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lemme res...................n read!!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Thanks Varshu and Swati๐Ÿค—

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pallu......................๐Ÿค—
aww the OS is so cute as well as touching......!!
i liked the "kaise mujhe tum mil gayi " part...i can so imagine mayur on that..........๐Ÿ˜and icecream......โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜†....then their quite emotional talks.....Amazing<33....
really very well written........liked your style girl.............๐Ÿ˜Ž
keep writing moreeeee.....................๐Ÿ˜›

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Originally posted by: naughtykomal

pallu......................๐Ÿค—
aww the OS is so cute as well as touching......!!
i liked the "kaise mujhe tum mil gayi " part...i can so imagine mayur on that..........๐Ÿ˜and icecream......โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜†....then their quite emotional talks.....Amazing<33....
really very well written........liked your style girl.............๐Ÿ˜Ž
keep writing moreeeee.....................๐Ÿ˜›

Thanks Jee Komzie๐Ÿค—
oh i can imagine many many songs on Mayur......๐Ÿ˜ƒ......i so want them back..........๐Ÿ˜†

Really glad u liked.........๐Ÿ˜ƒ
and thank u for taking pains in reading such a big OS.........which must be difficult for u i understand๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜Š