OS - Is Raat ki Subah Nahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Starts from where the episode ended on friday......

 

Maan watching Geet sleep, holding on to his hand after a while he removes his hand and walks towards the window. He looks at Geet sleeping peacefully and then looks outside, recollecting all the events of the day and thinks that whatever he did was the right thing, he just has to explain it to dadi maa in the morning. Just as he was lost in his thoughts he hears Geet wake up with a scream........................he quickly rushes to her and she hugs him tightly. He hugs her back to comfort her, then opens his eyes and looks for water just to realize that there is no water in the room. 

Maan:  "Tum thek ho Geet? "

Geet : "haan, woh shayad bura sapna dekha tha....."

Maan: Tum ruko mein paani lekar aata hoon....

Just when he wants to get up he realizes that she is still clinging on to his coat....thinks briefly and then carries her and starts walking to the kitchen.

 

Flashback of all the lovely moments spent in the outhouse....Mahiiiiiiiiii

 

He places Geet on the counter top and gets a glass of water. She drinks water and hands over the glass to Maan. Its then he realizes that in all that happened she has not eaten anything.

 

Maan: Geet, tumhe bhook lagi hai? Tumne kab se kuch khaya bhi nahi hai

Geet: Nods and says thodi si   and smiles

 

Maan: Mein abhi tumhare liye kuch bana deta hoon

 

Quickly puuls out the pasta packet and begins making pasta for her. Geet watches Maan in admiration and recollects the last time he cooked pasta in the kitchen.........flashback of kitchen moments.

 

Pasta is ready and Maan places it on the table, get Geet off the counter top and walks her to the table. When he is about to feed her and she opens her mouth (he turns into Maan mode to tease her)

 

Maan: Magar Geet tumhe to pasta pasand nahi hai nah, tum kaise khaoge?

Geet: Pretends to be her angry self and turns her face away from Maan

Maan: Has a cute smile on his face and says "yaad hai jab mera haath jal gaya tha tab tumne mujhe khilane ki bajaye khud kha liya tha? "

Geet: Turns to look at Maan

Maan: He eats the pasta instead of feeding Geet (makes sure it tastes ok)

Geet: Again makes an angry face and looks away

Maan: Geet........lo kha lo, mujhe pata hai tumhe pasand nahi hai lekin mein abhi aloo ke parathe nahi bana saktha

Geet: Turns smiles, realises he was just trying to lighten the atmosphere flashback of the pasta scene and tooth paste scene

 

Maan feeds Geet and then Geet does the same. The couple happily feed each other, lost in each others eyes. When they are done, Maan cleans up the table as Geet watches with love filled eyes. He walks upto the table and then both walk hand in hand, looking into each other eyes back to the room.  Maan makes Geet comfortable on the bed and sits facing her, both still looking into each other eyes.

 

Geet recollects the scene in Hoshiyapur where she was locked into the room and told to remove all the signs of a married woman. She sat there with no food and no one to care for her and today she had everything a girl could ask for. Tears trickle down her eyes………….Maan feels pain by seeing tears in her eyes, he wipes her tears and she hugs him tightly……….this time Maan hugs her passionately and is caressing her back. His touch runs a shiver down Geet, she blushes and relaxes her hold on him. Maan realizes the change in emotion but continues caressing. Geet is all shy and pulls away from Maan. She rests on the pillow and faces away from Maan, with her eyes closed, shy smile and cheeks turning pink. Maan switches his position and rests his back on the headboard. Geet slightly turns to look at him. Maan is lovingly staring at Geet, she tries to look away but he pulls her towards him (precap shown). She lowers her face and blushes. Maan puts his finger below her chin and slightly lifts her face up, she opens her eyes and looks at him.

 

Maan: Kya hua Geet, bolo na?

Geet: nods her head indicating no and tries looking down again.

 

Maan lowers his face towards Geet and her lips part in anticipation, he slowly pants a kiss on her lips, with just the two lips brushing each other and a soft gentle kiss.

He pulls back and sees her reaction, she is all shy and blushing, his heart wanted more of her but he knew that she is vulnerable. He knew that they day he would make love to her, they both would be lost in the world of passion of each other and no other thing to worry about. The passionate man he was, he wanted no compromise for love and he was willing to wait.

 

Geet then held on to his hand, placed her head against his chest, holding his hand falls asleep, he admires her, then palces his head on her head and then falls asleep as well.

 

When he wakes up in morning they are both lying next to each other, his hand on her waist, one from behind and another from front, she has has her on him. Their cheeks touching each other.  He does not want to move with the fear of waking her up………she slowly shifts position and turns towards him. He watches her sleep with contention on her face …she finally found the safest heaven…….Maan's arms.

Soon Geet wakes up to watch up and opens her eyes, finding Maan staring at her lovingly. He places a sweet kiss on her cheeks and wish her "Good morning Mrs. Maan khurana" . Geet blushes, wishes him back and they go into another hug.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hmmm... lovely !
would luv to see something like this :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
That was really Cute 😍
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lovely😳..hope something liks this happens in the show too!
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Beautiful..OS
Loved it!!
Hope to see something like this..hehe
Awesome..


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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh that was really cute dear😍
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awesome dear
just loved it
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awwwwwwwww
this is sooooooooo adorable
i soooooooooooooo badly wish for this to happen in the actual show
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Posted: 13 years ago
cute OS.....................
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you everyone for your comments. This was my first attempt at an OS.