Firstly, congrats on the new thread!
Coming to the update, gosh, it was fantastic! Fabulous! I really love the way you have portrayed the characters, not only of Maan and Geet, but also of Dadi, Meera, Yash and the others. The way you explain their thoughts, it's just amazing! Whoa, they are getting married! Dadi convinced Geet to marry Maan. It was actually a very beautiful analogy of that butterfly and the cocoon. Loved the convo, Dadi handled it all so brilliantly. She made Geet feel at ease. Poor Maan, he must have felt bad thinking what he lacked in his proposal that Geet did not answer him and instead accepted his Dadi's proposal. Lolz. Ah, now Geet is kind of percipient but Maan is confused about all this. He is fearing the same things that Geet was afraid of. It will be exciting to see how their relationship takes off from here. Do continue soon.
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