hiii ash ... my sis just read all the parts.... she loved it...
Originally posted by: niharika_87
Sooo goood... i loved the concept that he was trying to prove to her by looking at her and not doing anything.. even though the point he was trying to prove was not physical to begin with ... it still had the same intensity and heat as if they were physical.. It was very well thought and written. Keep up the great work..
Update soon.. cant wait to read more of this..
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