omg amazing parts dear.. poor geet. one hand maan torcher her by mentally & other hand shuriya will make a plan against her. i think sam will do something to stop shuriya.. do con..
another brilliant update... would love to see how Maan learns to open up to her emotionally... what he tells her of his hurt , his pain... what and how she learns of his vulnerabilities..
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wow fantastic update. just loved it. maan should understand geet was not trying to control him, she was trying to patch up with him and maan didn't left any other option. now shuriya will create trouble. lets see wht geet will do. continue soon...........
felt bad for geet....felt maan was little rude.....anyways whatz with shaurya.....its a fight between maan and him.......why is he making geet suffer........hope she does everything well than his expectations......plzz update soon.
hey ash...........sorry i have been busy😭..........but i m here now......... anyway back to updates...........awesome⭐️...... great work........ i must say ur taking great advantage of maan's human instincts 😉 😆....... thnks for PM 😊.........(P.S: waiting for BRIJ love story)😳 Edited by komlika - 13 years ago
i lovee this concept....a very different but lovable relationship!!
i hope maaneet have their huge confrontation soon, where maan expresses how much he missed geet while she went to shimla and just open up more to her!😳
please do add me to your pm list and continue soon!!
Hey Ash I have just finished reading your FF all over once again. you have woven the story beautifully and the last part was simply awesome. This shauriya is showing his bad side now cant wait to see how Maan turns him into a pulp.
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