Life Out Of Control - An ArmaanRiddhima fanfiction

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I started this fan fiction on the DMG blog long time ago, and after a lot of persuasion, started and continued it here. It is still posted on the DMG blog, and I will continue doing so as the story prgresses. If you want me to pm you, Just add me as your buddy and I'll be sure to pm you next time I update...😊
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INDEX
Season 1
1 - Guess Who's Back ... Pg 1
2 - Sparks Fly ... Pg 1
3 - Sab ulta Maangna Padega ... Pg1
4 - Well, Someone's surprising ... Pg 1
5 - That fateful day ... Pg 2
6 - Let's dig into the past some more ... Pg 2
7 - Truth Hurts ... Pg 3
8 - It's harder getting over him than they think ... Pg 4
9 - Pyaari Jungly Billy, ya basket? ... Pg 5
10 - Love?... Pg 5
11 - Dare for a date ... Pg 5
12 - A night to remember... Pg 6
13 - Statys between us ... Pg 7
14 - Is this love? ... Pg 8
15 - I Love Riddhima! ... Pg 9
Note ... Pg 11
Recap ... Pg 11
16 - It all falls apart ... Pg 12
17 - Mission Riddhima Manao ... Pg 13
18 - Best Friend or Fiend? ... Pg 14
19 - I love you too ... Pg 15
Season 2
20 - A new life, or so it seems ... Pg 16
21 - Purely Bliss ... Pg 19
22 - Boys VS Girls ... Pg 20
23 - And the fight continues ... Pg 22
24 - Pateience Tested ... Pg 24
25 - Out time in Lonavla ... Pg 26
26 - Go GOA ... Pg 29
27 - You can't beat us! ... Pg 34
28 - My Best Diwali so far ... Pg 38
29 - Guess Who's here, Ammy! ... Pg 41
30 - 1 thing, 2 do, 3 words, 4 you ... Pg 47
31 - And things continue ... Pg 53
32 - Like it was before ... Pg 58
33 - A flaw in the plan ... Pg 61
34 - Conflicting Hearts ... Pg 67
35 - Some more bad news ... Pg 71
36 - A series of Unfortunate events ... Pg 78
37 - Journey to the Center of your Heart ... Pg 86
38 - Just Good Friends ... Pg 91
39 - It all happens for the best. Or does it? ... Pg 100
Season 3
40 - And then Life goes on ... pg 115
41 - It takes two ... pg 125
42 - Life is definitely out of control ... pg 136
43 - Face it ... pg 143
Chapter 1 - Guess who's back

Scene shows the whole of Mumbai'and a girl's voice is heard.

"They say love stories don't exist. Many people fall in love and then when their heart is broken they either live with the pain and regret everything, or simply sit out and spoil their lives trying to take revenge. They do of course forget that they have got their whole lives to live. Well, who am I commenting? I have never fallen in love. Wait, now that would be untrue."

A girl in a yellow tracksuit is jogging along. Earphones in her ears, the audience can make out that she's the one speaking.

"Yes, me Riddhima Gupta, daughter of Shashank Gupta, the famous doctor and owner of Sanjeevani, openly admit that there was a time when I thought I fell in love. And my heart was cruelly broken into several pieces. But what could I do? Take revenge and hate every moment of my life? That wasn't me. I just turned around, and started a new life. One which I loved living. And now it's been a week since I started my internship in the famous Sanjeevani, and it looks like my past is back to haunt me. Well not really, I mean come on, how clich can it get? I guess things will be fine. We parted on a good note."

There, she passed a basketball court and sat down to tie her shoelace, and take a deep breath. She could make out one man playing amongst children and he let them score everytime. Cute, she thought, and turned around to leave. The man turned around and took out his glasses, just in time to see her leave. Wow, he thought. Good figure. He was brought back by the children shouting.

"Armaan Bhaiyya, aaj aapko kya hua? Hum jeetjayenge agar aise hi ladkiyon ko ghoorte rahe!"

Armaan's full face is shown.

"Arre, main ladkiyon ko ghoor nahin raha, Ladkiyan MUJHE, The Armaan Mallik, going to be intern in the best hospital, Sanjeevani, ko ghoorte rehte hain" His phone beeped. "Shit, don't wanna be late now do I? Mujhe jana hoga. Pata nahin kaise Yeh log time ko sambhalte hain. In America, they were too strict." And he laughed remembering how he used to get kicked out of his lecture halls before he even stepped in them! But the professors knew it. He was a born genius! Completing his medicine in America, he returned to India on his parents orders. He did miss America though and of course the girls there. But hey, coming to India he was surprised at the western attitude of girls in Mumbai. That was something he never expected. Reaching home, he strode in, saying a quick good morning to his father Jai Mallik, who was sitting in the sitting room sofa, with a coffee and a newspaper. He went in the kitchen hugging his mom, Shanti Mallik, and raced upstairs.

At the same time, a girl came out of the shower, with wet hair and a towel wrapped around her, under arms, and coming down to her knees. Opening her wardrobe, she took out her jeans.

"Riddhima beta, jaldi kar!" Padma called from downstairs.

"Aayi maa!" she shouted back.

Flipping her hair over, the audience get a full view of her face. (Any Suku, shilpa or Jenni..i don't really mind which one)

"No, jeans and T-shirt, not today!"

Flashback

In Sanjeevani hospital, a nurse and Riddhima were talking as though they were best of buddies. Riddhima was wearing Jeans and a tight T-shirt which was originally white, but had colour sprayed and splashed all over it. Nevertheless, it looked amazing on her, as it showed off her figure. Her straight hair flowed behind her, as the labcoat was casually hanging around her arm.

"Aur maine suna ek naya intern aayega kal. Tumne usse milli hai kya?" Riddhima asked the nurse.

"Haan, maine hi usse Dr Shashank ke cabin tak pohnchaya. Mere paed se toh zameen hi phisal gayi thi! Itna HOT hai!! Aur Doctor bhi! Aur pata hai, usne mujhe flower diya tha, aur kaha main bohot khoobsurat hoon."

"Achcha, toh uss type ka ladka hai. Khair, iska toh kuch pata nahin." She picked up her stethoscope from the desk and started to move forward. Looking back she said,

"By the way, usne naam bataya khud ka?"

"Kaise nahin batata? Khud pe itna gharv jo hai! Armaan Mallik. Naam bhi uski tarha achcha hai"

Riddhima froze. "Armaan Mallik?" she whispered. No, why? What now? Urgh, some people just cannot leave her life alone. She had moved on. It wasn't as though he had done anything that bad. But she was nave at that time. He had no right. Ah well, what happened has happened. No more.

Flashback ends

"No Armaan, I wont show you how you changed me. A few years back I was someone different than what I am now. Not that I haven't liked the change. Actually, it's not even YOU that changed me. Time changed me. Now, no one takes me for my naivety. Infact, no one can see me as naive. But I chose not to destroy my life trying to get back at you. Things happen when they happen. And you actually made me stronger. But there is no way I'm gonna put it in your face that you changed me."

And she took out a sky blue plain chooridar. Putting little make up on as usual, she looked stunning. Slowly she proceeded down the stairs.

Padma saw her and commented,

"Bohot sundar lagti ho tum is chooridar main. Toh kyun jeans aur tops hamesha pehenti ho?"

"Maa, comfortable hai."

"Theek hai tumhari marzi. Waise Anjali ka phone aaya tha. Kaha voh aur Atul tumhe bohot miss karte hain."

"Atul jeej? Mujhe kyun uske honeymoon main miss karte hoge?" she asked putting a toast in her mouth, and her eyes glinting mischievously.

"hat, badmaash! Teri yeh badmashi ek din meri jaan legi!"

"Waise abh toh voh dono seniors honge na? I mean jab wapas ayenge tab"

"Haan, abh tu tumhari bakh bakh band kar aur chup chaap khale! Sanjeevani nahin jaana kya?"

"Haan abhi jaungi"

After a while, "bye maa," was heard and Sanjeevani hospital came into view.

"Hai bhagwaan, aaj toh meri madad kar. Uss kameene Armaan se mujhe door rakh!" prayed Riddhima as she entered.

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Chapter 2 - Sparks Fly

Armaan entered the hospital. It seemed huge, and well kept. He was definitely awed by the friendly and cheery atmosphere in the hospital. Knowing there would be other interns with him, he sincerely hoped some would be his type. Flirt, date, keep for a month or two, maybe more, get bored, start on the next. That was what the word "girls" meant to him. And no, it was not something he picked up in America. Since he was India, he had always been like that. Only difference was, girls in America punched you (black eyes for a few days), threw a drink in your face, cursed you and be seen in someone else's arms the next day. Here, he knew he had to be careful. Girls don't forget. They slapped you (and yes it would really hurt!) and curse you for the rest of your life!

He was in the locker room, putting his stuff away when two people entered. A guy and a girl and both seemed to be on each other's necks.

"Tu khote! Kal tune mera stethoscope churaya tha na?"

"Kitni baar samjhaun, main kyun aisi harkat karunga? Mujhe itni kam umar main marna nahin hai aur voh bhi tere haath! Abhi shaadi bhi nahin huwi meri!"

"haan, kaun karega ek kaankhajure ke saath shaadi? Shaadi toh door ki baat hai! Tumhe dekhne se bhi ghabrahat hoti hai logon ko"

"lekin mera chehra TUMHE kyun affect nahin karta churail?"

"Tune mujhe churail bulaiya? Ek toh mere cheezein chori karte ho phir maafi maange ke bagar mujhe insult kar rahe ho!"

Another voice interfered.

"bas karo tum dono. Dekho naya intern yahin hain!"

"Abhi, tumhe pata yeh.." the girl began, and stopped when she saw Armaan advancing. Putting out her hand she quickly said,
"Hi, Muskaan Chaddha. Full Punjabi and proud to be one!" she said with a smile.

"Haan, Punjabi's are not proud though." Said the guy she was fighting with.

"teri toh'"

"Hi, Rahul Grewal. How you doing?"

"I'm good. Armaan Mallik. Nice to meet you."

"Abhimanyu Modi. Abhi for friends. And since you seem to be part of the gang, then for you too."

"Thanks Abhi. Yehi interns ki bach hai?"

"Arre nahin." Said Rahul

"Riddzi hai, phir Sapna hai, aur Nikki bhi! Oh there they come. Mujhe jaana hai. Rahul tujhe main proof dikhati hoon ke tu hi meri cheezein churata hai!" and she pulled him along with her. Rahul, not being able to do anything much, just followed saying,

"Aapka hukum maha churail!" only to get beaten up severely by a very angry Muskaan.

Riddhima Nikki and Sapna entered the locker room laughing at some joke Riddhima had just craked.

"Ridzi tum bhi na!" said Nikki

Armaan's back was towards them and as Riddhima walked towards her locker.Turning around, he did not see her at all. He looked at Sapna who was looking cute in her jeans and long kurta. "Not my type," he thought. Then he looked at Nikki and a smile formed on his lips. Seeing her wear three quarters, and a tight kurta, with straight hair, she looked like someone who'd be interested in a fling. A smile formed on his lips.

"kiske sapnon main khoye huwe ho?" Sapna laughed. "Hi, Sapna. You must be the new intern right?"

"Yep, nice meeting you, Armaan Mallik"

"Hey beautiful," he indicated towards Nikki. "Armaan Mallik, pleasure meeting you"

Nikki eyed him. He had the build, and the eyes. Oh those blue eyes. She seemed to want to get lost in them.

"Nikita Malhotra," she said coolly. "Pleasure's all mine"

Riddhima, upon hearing that put her head in her file. This was bound to happen. 'The Armaan Mallik', and Nikita Malhotra were bound to get together. Closing her locker, she made to creep out quietly, wanting to go unnoticed. But then again, there was Abhi. Friendly as ever, and unknowingly a pain in the backside!

"Ridzy kahan jaa rahi ho? Armaan se to milo."

"Main, bas'" she looked down her hair covering her face. He looked at her, not being able to see her face, with an interested look in his eyes. Sighing, she looked up straight into HIS blue eyes. And as the hazel green met the ocean blue sparks flew.

"Riddhima Gupta," he said smiling. "Still as beautiful as ever"

"Armaan Mallik" she replied in an even tone, narrowing her eyes. "Still as flirtatious as ever." He was taken aback. This wasn't what he expected from Riddhima. But he liked what was presented. A cool tone, a knowing smile, and a secretive glance portrayed on her face.

"At your service," he replied.

"Oh, You wish." and she cocked her head sideways.

Flashback ' Riddhima's perspective

"Uff, first day in college, and everyone here is wearing jeans and t-shirts and some aren't even wearing anything! Anyways, Sanjeevani Medical College, finally here. First year and already late. Well not exactly, I will be though if I can't find the class." She looked at the map. "So according to this map am I in the 3rd corridor, or 2nd? How can someone make a building so confusing?" and she bumped into someone broad shouldered, only to see her books and papers flying out. Bending down picking up her stuff, she saw the opposite guy doing the same."Yaar, isse bhi abhi hona tha! Tum dekh kar chal nahin sakte? Ek toh already musibat main hoon, upar se tumne yeh files aur sab giradi!"

"Excuse me, Maine giraya? Agar aage chalke dekhti instead of khudse baatein karke toh shayad yeh nahin hota."

"tu meri baatein sunrahe the?" she blushed profusely

"nahin toh," he smiled at her blushing, showing his deep dimples.

She got up and made to move forward.

"Hi, Armaan Mallik, first year. And you will be'"

She finally lifted her eyes, to stare into blue unforgettable ones. "Riddhima Gupta. Mujhe der nahin karni main jaa rahi hoon"
"By the way, aap 4th corridor main hai." And she blushed realising he had heard her talking to herself.

As she walked away, she thought to herself. "Wait isko kaise pata main 4th corridor main hoon agar voh khud first year main hai?"

She asked a random student who was loitering around.

"4th corridor? No ways, that's on the far end. You my dear are in the 3rd corridor, and your class is over there. In the next i.e. 2nd corridor. Hurry up, you'll be late."

"Th - Thank you," she stammered and ran for her class. "Usko chodungi nahin main!" she thought to herself. Reaching late, the lecturer looked at her sternly.

"Sorry, I lost my way, and was misinformed by SOME students," she said smartly.

"Oh, next time please be careful about who you ask, and you may take a seat. Uhm, there's an empty one next to that boy, uske naam kya hai?"

"Sir, Armaan Mallik," said a dreamy girl

The outrage was not hidden on Riddhima's face. Not him again! She stomped to the seat and gave Armaan a menacing look, who, in turn, wiped the seat with a tissue and said, "Please make yourself comfortable your highness." Sniggering he high fived his friends. Riddhima sensed something fishy and looked at the chair. Yep, it was covered with chalk. Seeing Armaan's hankercheif sticking out of his pocket, she used it to wipe the chalk dust out.

"Hmmm, I was expecting something much less obvious," she said and sat down, turning away from a flabbergasted Armaan.

Flashback ends

"Aap ek doosre ko jaante ho?" said Abhi.

Just then a voice was heard.

"Interns report to the Nurse station to Dr Keerti for your briefing"

"Chalo, Varna Hitler maar dalegi" said Sapna, and they all left.

Armaan followed thinking things through. So, Riddhima Gupta, still the same, in a churidaar, looking as innocent as ever, but with attitude? Nice change. But he thought he had more effect on girls. If anything, he wouldn't have been surprised if she slapped him. Or just walked away. Or started crying in front of him. "Slightly disappointing Armaan Mallik. It would have been entertaining if she had reacted that way." Well, this definitely was a change. An interesting Riddhima Gupta, Hot Nikki, Cute friends (Abhi and Sapna) and cats and dogs fighting (Rahul and Muskaan). Life would definitely be more fun now.

Riddhima took a glance at him. I'm sorry I didn't act like a typical broken hearted girl Armaan, she thought. It's just that, I didn't let myself get affected much by your behaviour in the past few years. I mean, you are the typical kind of guy, who'd love to see a girl dying for you. That's just not me I guess. But hey, it was definitely good seeing the disappointment in your face. Laughing to herself, she just shook her head, walked on.

Chapter 3 ' Sab Ulta Mangna Padega!

They were at the nurse station waiting for Dr Keerti, and messing about as usual. While Rahul and Muskaan were blatantly ignoring each other, Sapna was talking to Abhi with Riddhima. Riddhima caught Nikki flicking her hair, and making Armaan give her his naughty grin. Urgh, she thought, kabhi nahin sudrega, shaking her head. Just then Dr Keerti arrived, and all the interns straightened up. She took a good look at Armaan and said,

"Welcome Dr Armaan. I hope you will make Sanjeevani proud of hiring you as an intern. We will not forgive any mistakes easily, and as for the patients, they are everything here. You should take your work seriously and with dedication."

Hah, thought Riddhima. Seriously and with dedication? My foot! Maybe if his patient is some super model or something. And she started sniggering.

"Any doubts, Miss Gupta?" said Dr Keerti eyeing her.

Yes! She wanted to scream. Duhh with Armaan around there's nothing other than doubts in this world!

"No, of course not m'am," she replied looking down with a straight face.

"Good then, because I'm expecting both of you to do your duty together in the General Ward for a whole week. Armaan is new here, and you were very dedicated to your work last week."

Riddhima looked up startled. What? NO! Gag me! A whole week with this guy? Please save me. She sighed. What's the point now? Hitler's already put me in the Concentration camp. I just have to wait for the gas chambers now!

"M'am, my duty was in the OPD last week'" she began

"I know, Dr Riddhima. I am blessed with a sharp memory thank you very much. Dr Sapna will take over with Dr Nikita. And Dr Modi, you will be with Dr Muskaan in the Children's Ward. Dr Rahul, you will be helping me. You have 15 minutes before duty starts, I suggest you prepare yourselves. Disperse."

Back in the locker room, Armaan was lying down on the bench, looking with a slightly amused face at Riddhima who was furiously banging her locker door, files and whatever she can find in her hand. Sapna noticed this and smiled while sitting down on the other bench. Abhimanyu wasn't around and neither was Nikita.

Rahul sat down next to Sapna and said,

"Yaar, aaj toh meri permanent chutti! Hitler ke saath kaam karna padega?! Kya yaar, meri toh zara si bhi himmat nahin hai uske saamne aankh uthane ki."

"Sab kuch theek hoga. Tu tension mat le," replied Sapna.

"Tension mat loon? Kya ve. Sanjeevani main aaker meri toh kismat hi phooti huwi hai! Pichle hafte ek Churail ke saath kaam karna pada, abh Hitler'"

"Tu churail kisko bulata hai? Tu ruk Khote. Meri hi kismat phooti huwi thi jo har subhah tera chehra dekhna pada!" snapped Muskaan who just entered.

"toh kaun kehta hai dekh? Mat dekhna. Issi bahane teri buri nazar se toh bach jaunga!"

"Haan, lekin abh mere haath se nahin bachchega tu!" and she started hitting him as he ran out of the locker room.

Sapna looked at Armaan who was enjoying all this thoroughly.

"Ek do din main used to hojayega tu bhi."

"Lekin hona nahin hai," he laughed. She laughed along with him and said,

"Humein chalna chahiye. Dus minutes hochuke." And she left leaving Riddhima and Armaan alone in the locker room.

Riddhima turned to go adjusting her dupatta. As she walked forwards, it fell from her shoulder and she roughly threw it behind her. At the same time Armaan who was sitting on the bench was about to get up when her blue dupatta fell over his head. Mesmerised by its fragrance and the silkiness, he held on to it. Riddhima found herself being pulled back by it. Turning, she saw Armaan's closed eyes, and his hand on her dupatta.

"Armaan, kya natak hai?" she demanded.

Armaan quickly opened his eyes, and saw her in front of him. He looked at her expectantly.

"Mera dupatta chodo," she asked him, and he quickly let go.

"Maine kab pakda tha. Waise tumhara dupatta kisko pakadna hai?"

"Armaan, tum.."

"Haan Riddhima bolo main'"

"Armaan"

"Riddhima"

"Uff, kabhi nahin sudroge!"

"Waise sudarna kisko hai? Sab mujhe aise hi pasand karte hain, tum bhi!" and he winked at her. She, in reply rolled her eyes at him.

"Karti THI Armaan, voh galat fehmi thi meri."

And she walked away. Waise General Ward kahan hai? He thought. Shayad voh wahan jaa rahi hai. Humari duty toh ek saath hai. And he started following her. She went to the nurse station to get some files, not noticing him behind her. Then went back to the locker room to keep them there, and talked to a nurse. Armaan kept following her around until they reached the General Ward, and finally when she saw the people in the hospital whispering and laughing at her, she turned around to find Armaan standing behind her and looking at the roof, whistling.

"Kya hai Armaan?"

"Voh mujhe pata nahin tha General Ward kahan hai, toh humari duty ek saath hai na, toh mujhe laga tumhe follow karke pata chaljayga. Abh poori hospital mujhe pata chalgayi. Kitna ghoomti ho tum? Mere paed main dard hai!"

"Awww..bechara. Dard hai? Ilaaj kardun?" she said sarcastically while he nodded. She stepped forcefully on his feet making him jump up and down due to the pain.

"Main kya tumhe ek tourist guide lagti hoon jo mujhe yahan vahan follow karte rehteho?"

"Kya hai na, Doctor nahin lagti, toh tourist guide hi sahi, lekin isse bhi zyaada Jangli Billi lagti ho!"

"HUH? Kya kahan tumne? Jangli billi?! Urgh!" and she stormed into the ward muttering to herself. Armaan grinned at himself, put his coat on, and put a serious face.

"Focus Armaan, abh tum Dr Mallik ho Ward main." And he also went into the ward smiling at his first patient.

After some time Riddhima was still examining a patient and was muttering to herself.

"Pata nahin apne aap ko samajhta hai. Just because all the girls in college used to die for him, he thinks every girl will do the same. Arre bhagwaan ji, maine kaha tha na mujhe isse door rakh. Kyun sab kuch ulta hota hai? Door rakhne ke baja ek hafte ki duty uske saath kardi. Abh lagta hai sab kuch ulta hi mangna hoga aapse."

Armaan heard all this and a cheeky look appeared on his face.

"Kya yaar, abhi khud se baatein karne ki aadat nahin gayi?" he went beside her.

She looked up. Great, whenever she wanted to get away from him he always appeared in front of her.

"Tum kya kasam khayi hai mujhe irritate karne ki?"

"Main toh sirf sawaal pooch raha tha, waise mere saath kaam karne se problem hai?"

"Nahin toh," she said in a mocking tone. "Problem kyun hogi?" she plastered a fake smile. "Voh kya hai, mere samne problem nahin hoti, toh main kaam nahin kar sakti. Isilye main koi problem dhoondh rahi hoon!" she gave him a killer look and continued her check up.

"waise khud toh ek badi problem ho, phir bhi kaam nahin karsakti?"

"kya kahan tumne? Main problem hoon?"

"Nahin toh, tumhe yaad nahin tum Riddhima Gupta aka tourist guide aka jangli billi. Shame Riddhima. Itni kam umar main memory loss."

"Armaan"

"Riddhima"

"Mujhe kaam karne doge?"

"Haan haan, roka kisne hai?"

He looked at her irritated face. He had never seen her like this. Well of course, 5 years back she was sweet, shy nevertheless sharp as he remembered the chair and chalk incident. He had never taken the time to know her. Anyways, he was still having fun annoying her. And laughing evilly to himself, he went away.

End of the day, Locker room.

Armaan was observing Riddhima. He didn't know, but there was something about her that made him so interested in her. Nikita came and told him

"Hey Armaan. Poora din nahin dekha. Riddhima bohot kaam karwati hai kya?"

He was brought back to the world and said,

"Jangli billi aisi hi hoti hai," only to get a glare from Riddhima. Rahul, Muskaan, Abhi and Sapna entered the locker room. Everyone was tired and was looking to get home. Armaan on the other hand, was in the mood to go out and have fun.

"So guys, maine decide kiya hai, since I don't know you all that well, hum sab aaj raat ko bahar ja sakte hain? Meri treat."

"Not bad Armaan, par main bohot thak gayi hoon." Said Sapna

"Just for a while, please? Dekho Behenji bhi ayegi."

Everyone looked at him wondering who that was. He continued saying,

"Humari Dr Riddhima,"

And they all started laughing. Riddhima looked daggers at Armaan who couldn't care less. Rahul finally looked at Armaan and managed to tell him.

"Yaar, ek din se hi usko jaante ho! Yahan sab male nurses aur male patients, kuch female patients bhi, uspe fida hai. Waise toh yeh pehli baar churidaar pehhenke aayi hai."

Great, thought Riddhima. Some friends they are. Can't even trust them to keep their mouths shut! Lagta hai sabko masking tape lagani padegi! Armaan raised his eyebrows at her. Interesting. She had changed. Atleast slightly.

Riddhima was looking into her file thinking 'shit I can already see that head getting bigger. Kisike paas ek pin hai? I'd simply love to pop it.'

"So Nikki, what say? Coming?" said Armaan diverting his attention to her.

"Of course, always up for a night out."

"So done, Sunshine Palace, it's a club. We meet at 8?"

Everyone nodded. Seeing that it was 6:30, Riddhima headed home. Her duty was over, and she wanted to get some sleep before going out.

She got home and called out,

"Maa"

"Sitting room main hoon."

She gave her mother a big hug and kiss on her cheek and said,
"Mujhe aaj raat ko bahar jaana hai. Papa aaj hi gayye hai na? Iska matlab main raat ko jaldi aungi!"

And she ran upstairs not waiting for her mom's reply. Flopping down on her bed, she closed her eyes, and the first person she thought of was Armaan. No doubt, he was still as handsome as ever, in fact more handsome since he had the mature look on his face. Opening her eyes, she realised who she was thinking of. Great, she hadn't given him a thought for the past 5 years, and now, the first person she thinks of and it had to be him! Knowing she wouldn't get any sleep, she went to the kitchen to get a snack.

"Food for comfort" she mumbled.

Part 4 ' Well, Someone's surprising.

Riddhima was late. Shit, she thought as she rushed into the club. How could someone fall asleep on a chair, with their head on a dining table and actually manage it for a whole hour? It was 8:00pm by the time she woke up, and getting dressed in navy blue jeans and a purple halter neck top, she had rushed to the club, reaching there at 8:30.

Sapna was feeling bored sitting at a table by herself. As soon as she saw Riddhima she called her over.

"Ridzy, yahaan pe!"

"Thank God tu milgayi! Main toh soch rahi thi ab aap sab ko kahaan dhoondo! Waise sab hai kahan?" she inquired looking around.

"Armaan and Nikki dance floor pe, Rahul aur Abhi dono koi ladki ke saath hain, aur Muskaan gayyi hai drinks lene."

"Great!" she flopped down on the chair next to Sapna and put her head in her hands. "Yeh Armaan bhi hum sab ko treat kar raha hai, yah phir sirf Nikki ko? I mean agar yeh baat hai toh yahan hum sab ko bula kar bore kyun kar raha hai?"

"Main kisko bore kar raha hoon?" said a hurt voice from the back.

Nikki came and sat down opposite Riddhima, looking exhausted.

"Tumhare timing se toh kisiko nahin!" Riddhima replied turning around in an instant, flicking her hair. Armaan gaped at her.

She was wearing the same clothes as the girl he had seen at the entrance. Wait, did that mean that the girl was Riddhima? While dancing with Nikki he had had a sudden urge to look at the entrance and had seen a beauty standing there. The lights were dim and as a result he had not been able to make out her face. But never did he think that was Riddhima! Her curves and her body had attracted him. And right now he also had to admit, with minimal make up on, she was probably one of the prettiest girl around. Still mesmerised, 'gorgeous' was the only word that came out of his mouth. Riddhima meanwhile had been staring at him blatantly. Yes, he looked amazing in the white sleeveless jacket which exposed his muscles and was zipped half way up, exposing his well built chest. It matched well with his faded blue jeans. She came out of her trance, and said,

"What?"

Shaking his head he said in a flirty tone,

"You look good. Dance?"

"Thanks, not interested." She replied knowing full well she was probably the first girl rejecting him like that. His face dropped. Sapna and Nikki who had been in a conversation before diverted their attention to them. Armaan retained his composure and said,

"Riddhima, bhool jao jo hua kahin saalon pehle."

She looked back at him slight confusion on her face. Then, as realization dawned on her, she started laughing.

"Armaan, main toh kab ka bhool chukki hoon. Bas mujhe dance nahin karna aaj," she explained, smiling lightly to herself, while Armaan cursed himself slightly embarassed. This woman sure was different from other girls.

At that point, Abhi and Rahul came by, Abhi with a girl in his arms. He was completely drunk, and manage to splutter out,

"Hi guys, meet Tanya."

"Its Sonia!" said the outraged girl, slapped him and walked away. Riddhima giggled putting her hand over her mouth, while Armaan shook his head, and whispered,

"Sorry yaar. Next time"

"Kavya!" Abhi called for her, then, finally putting his head on the table, he zonked out. Muskaan appeared with her and Sapna's drink. As she put them on table, Rahul, thirsty and tired from all the dancing, drank her coke. Sapna started giggling knowing what was coming next, while Nikki went to dance with some guy she had never seen before. An enraged Muskaan was having a real go at Rahul.

"Oye, khote, tune meri drink peeli!"

"Mujhe kya pata tha tumhari hai! Maaf kar mujhe marna nahin hai!"

"Andhe ho kya? Maine abhi layi thi. Tumhe pata hai kitni der tak khadi thi wahaan?"

"Toh phir se jaa wahaan. Mera mood kyun kharab kar rahi hai?" and he turned to Riddhima who raised her eyebrows laughing.

"Riddzi, dance?"

"Rahul sach mein mera mood nahin hai aaj."

Armaan butted into the conversation,

"Chod na Rahul. Voh dance kar hi nahin sakti. Behenji types ki hai. Gharba hota toh'"

"Tumhara matlab kya hai huh?" she retorted. "Main aise dances kar sakti hoon. Lekin abh nahin karna!"

"haan haan, yehi toh bolegi na Riddhima JEE" he taunted.

Annoyed, she got up from the table. Armaan turned to Sapna to strike a conversation while Muskaan attacked Rahul about her drink. They suddenly heard the DJ.

"Everybody off the dance floor, we've got a special performance tonight from Miss Ridzy!"

The crowd roared and clapped for her as the gang stared at each other with open mouths, except for Abhi who was still fast asleep. Rahul and Muskaan also put their fight on hold while Armaan after recovering from his shock, showed his dimpled smile, and leaned back. This was one girl that never ceased to surprise him. Sapna, on the other hand, who had known Riddhima for longer than the others had, was shocked at this behaviour. She knew she could dance, but a sudden outburst? Armaan certainly had some effect on her!

Riddhima stood in the middle of the dance floor with a pose. The fans were all directed towards her making her naturally straight hair blow in all directions. She wanted to shut Armaan up once and for all! Looking down, she started tapping her feet to the music.

(She taps her feet')

Jogi nachle ..(Starts getting into the music)
Rang rachde ..
Jogi nachle ..
Rang rachde

Lehraake balkhake tu, duniya bhula ke naach (Starts with hip hop moves and continues)
Dhun ko ae gunguna le, gaane tu gaa ke naach
Rangeeleon mein to kho ja, pee ke peela ke naach
Matt bhare naino se tu, naina mila ke naach

Na na na na na na
Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move
Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove
Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you
Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move
Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove
Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you

(Goes towards Armaan and pulls him to the dance floor dancing around him. Armaan amazed, trying to go away while she pulls him towards her. He suddenly responds and takes her hand, spinning her towards him as she looks at him and they have an eye lock. The spotlight shines on them)

Dekh ke bhi nahi ho yakeen
Itni kyun hai bataa tu haseen
Tere husn se zindagi haseen
Tere husn ke aagey koi haseena kuch bhi nahi

(She breaks from the eye lock and goes towards various couples bringing them on the dance floor. One of them being Rahul and Muskaan.)

Hosh gawa deewane, hosh gawa ke naach
Paas tu aa deewane, paas tu aake naach
Dil mein hai armaan jitne, saare jaga ke naach
Tann mein badan mein jaise aag laga ke naach

(comes back on the dance floor dancing with a group. Her, Rahul, Muskaan, Armaan, Sapna and Nikki)


Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move
Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove
Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you
Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move
Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove
Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you

(While the song is ending, she goes to the table and Armaan is left dazed in the middle of the dance floor looking down, smiling to himself. His dimples are deepening by the moment, as her face, during the eye lock moment, won't leave his mind)

She was amazed at what just happened. It created butterflies in her stomach. She had never felt this way before. Not even 5 years ago, when they had met. This was different. She blushed looking down, and when she looked up, Armaan was there, with his hand outstretched, giving her the killer smile.

"Dance?" he whispered. She looked to side, as she laughed. He loved this attitude of hers. It showed genuine amusement. Looking back at him, she smiled and said,

"You won't give up will you?"

He looked up at the ceiling, showing mock consideration, then shook his head, raising his eyebrows at her. Finally she put her hand in his as he led her to the dance floor. The DJ put on a slow number at that moment. It wasn't a song, just a slow romantic tune. Armaan pulled Riddhima closer as they began swaying to the music. Nikita saw this, and turned away in jealousy, hatred burning out of her eyes. She had hated Riddhima ever since she pulled Armaan on the dance floor. During their group dance, Armaan's eyes had been on Riddhima full time, even when Nikki tried push him away. For a change, Rahul and Muskaan were lost in each other, since Riddhima had pulled them to dance floor. Sapna was dancing with a guy, whom she called Amit the next day.

"So, Miss Ridzi." whispered Armaan, unknowingly adoring her. "I didn't know you could dance that well. I mean, in college, you never showed that sort of attitude."

"Armaan," she smiled at him, "you just never knew me that well"

"That's good. Because you keep on surprising me! Sometimes with your attitude, and your innocence, and your dancing! What else do you have in store for me?"

"Flirt kar rahe ho?"

"Just plain honesty," he replied. She nodded looking into his eyes. She was at close proximity with him, yet she felt no uneasiness. She was comfortable with him. Blushing, she looked down. He continued looking at her face, and smiling to himself.

After sometime, Riddhima's mobile beeped breaking their eye-lock. It was midnight and Riddhima told Armaan,

"Mamma ghar pe akeli hai, mujhe jana hoga"

"Achcha, fairy godmother bulaun ya phir step mother bulaun?"

"Kya?" she looked at him confused.

"Chalo main tumhe drop karta hoon, Cinderella!" and she blushed profusely at his statement.

Both were silent in the car. Riddhima was re-playing the last few hours in her head, while Armaan took occasional glances at her. Once she got home, he waited till she was inside, as he drove off. Yeh mujhe ho kya gaya hai? He wondered. Kyun har baar' Nahin I don't like her. I'm not attracted to her. Then why do I lose control when I'm near her. Fine I'm not going to be near her. Focus.

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Thanks guys..please do comment to let me know your opinions..😊
Love,
Sanaa
Edited by ARfanSanaa - 14 years ago
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nice part dear
cont soon
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thx
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fantastic updates! 😊
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hey
good part,so riddhima and arman GF N BF before n broke up,nice,i mean good one
do pm me when u update n update soon
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Chapter 5 - That fateful Day

Riddhima tossed and turned in her bed dressed in her tracks and a tight t-shirt which were her pyjamas. She was not one for night suits or, yet she still had one in her cupboard which she wore occasionally. A long midnight blue one with a dressing gown. Why was she thinking of Armaan right now? Her fringes came into eyes and she puffed them out of her way in frustration. Why didn't his touch leave her? And why had she been stupid enough to pull him to the dance floor? Was it to show him she could dance? Or was it to arouse him? Did she want him to feel what she felt 5 years ago? She sighed as she closed her eyes, and went back 5 years.

Flashback

"Riddhima Gupta, you have to fill in for the model. She just sprained her ankle when she tripped over the stairs" said a girl. She flipped her hair behind her.

"I understand you're my senior'"

"Not only senior, I happen to be in my last year here, and one of your best friends, not to forget YOUR dorm supervisor!"

"Look Shaina. Main yeh kaise karoongi? Me and modelling?"

"Yes! You've got a perfect body, and with training you can do anything!"

Shaina, the "everything" in college was demanding her to model? How? And by everything, Shaina was everything. She was the head girl, not to forget the Head counsellor, Captain of the Girls' basketball Team, Organizer of their college's fashion show line in the Annual Inter-college Fashion Show (AIFS), naturally smart, pretty and hot, always ready for fun at parties but knew her limits and the most popular girl in College! Everyone wanted to be like her! This however never gave her a big head. Her friendly attitude warmed the new comers. In short, she was the epitome to follow when young girls came. Everyone was in awe of her. But as it was her last year, many were sad to see her go. And Riddhima felt like she was going to lose her best friend.

"Shaina, why is this so important?" she whined.

"Tum yeh aise kaise pooch sakti ho? Humare College ka izzat ka sawal hai! It's an inter college competition, you have to do this." Shaina pouted.

"But you know me na Shaina. Main aise sab ke samne'I'm not as confident as you." she spluttered out.

"We'll make you confident. And the model you're replacing is your roommate so she can help you!"

"Kya? I'm replacing Sanaya? No'dekh Shaina'"

"Look Riddhima, you can be as good as Sanaya!"

"No I can't'Shaina, I think you don't get it. They will never accept me. I mean I only wear chooridars"

"Exactly! Your time to show them that you are something!" she replied nodding her head. "Look, sometimes you just need that burst of confidence to show you who you are. Riddhima, I see a LOT of potential in you to be and do something. I used to be like you in my first year. It was only my 3rd year when I realised my capabilities. Don't make it as late. Please?"

And with that she left Riddhimawho was at a loss of words. Shaina always had her way words. Uff, yeh medical college main kya kar rahi hai? Riddhima muttered to herself. Isse toh phsycology karna chahiye. Ya phir law. Atleast that way she knows she can easily convince people to do her bidding. And people are willing to do that! But I bet she already knows that. Issiliye toh medical field main apna dimaag laga rahi hai. And Sanaya! She just HAD to trip down the stairs. Most probably looking at Nikhil. The love of her life. Why doesn't she get that he's confused between her and Riya? Urgh. Aur abh uski chakar me main bhi phas gayi trying to get them together! Well then again she is really clumsy'

"Hey basket! Subha subha tracksuit main mujhe basketball main harati hai, phir chooridar pehnke college aajati being innocent" said Armaan catching up with her and walking besides her.

She just fell silent.

"Waise, khud se baatein karna is the first sign of mental illness. Hospital main admit karwaloon kya?"

"Kahan padha yeh ghatya information?"

"Yeh sab chodo. Achcha, aaj after school, mujhe help chahiye."

"Kisliye?"

"Voh anatomy! Test hai kal! Help karogi naa?" he said earnestly.

She held out her hand saying,

"Mera payment"

"Achcha baba yeh lo! And he placed 2 Galaxies in her hand."

A smile lit up her face.

"Achcha, library, after lessons. Aur sirf 2 ghante. Mujhe aur bhi kaam hai!"

He gave her quick hug and went. They weren't best of friends, yet they weren't enemies either. They got along, and he certainly started respecting her after the chair incident. She still wasn't open around him. She could never be herself. She wasn't herself in college itself. Only when she got into the dorm did she show her true colours. Her stubbornness, her childishness and her openness with everything. In college she remained in a little shell, which Shaina was undoubtedly trying to break.

Armaan on the other hand had managed to make himself known easily around the college. His pranks, flirty attitude, and looks were what girls fell for. When he wasn't booked (with a girlfriend) he would be seen with one girl one day, another the next. His girlfriends lasted for a month or two before they were heartbroken. Knowing this, Riddhima never opened up to him.

It was the middle of the year, and the college was buzzing. As soon as Riddhima agreed to replace Sanaya, she had had another shock of her life. She would be walking the ramp in a revealing evening wear sari! And was supposed to be with the hunk of the college, Armaan! She was aware of the jealous looks she'll get later on. But more was on her mind at the moment. She was not comfortable wearing a sari! And that too in high heels! Swallowing her fears, the practices began in her room a week before practices for the fashion show itself. Evenings of torture, in her opinion.

Day 1: Learn to walk with your head up, confidently.

Day 2: Walk with one/two books on your head.

Day 3: Walk with a stack of books on your head.

Day 4: Walk with stilettos.

Day 5: Walk with stilettos and a stack of books on your head.

Day 6: You can now walk properly like a model, and if not, go back to day 1!

She could not forget the bruises she had received from falling down, or being buried under all the heavy books! To top it off, Shaina often placed a jug of water on top of them just for a laugh. Sanaya would always join in the fun. She had never wanted to be in the fashion show anyway.

Finally practices on the actual ramp came around. People were surprised to see Riddhima Gupta in the fashion show practices. Shaina just smiled and told them they were in for a shock.

Fashion show night.

To say Riddhima was nervous would be an understatement. She was wreck. Desperate not spoil any make up she had sat frozen on her chair for the last half an hour. She and Armaan were up in 10 minutes. Her sari was an evening wear. The baby pink brought out the colour of her cheeks, and her heavily embroidered silver top was matched with silver jewellery. The net sari, with a silver border, was pulled up behind her, and dropped down her front, covering one of her bare shoulder. Her blouse had thin straps, and was tied with ribbons behind her, exposing her back. It stopped just below ribs, giving full view of her flat stomach. Her hair was left loose and curled, so it presented a straight from the wash look. She only knew how long Shaina held her down in the salon chair for! Her fringes were side parted and were straightened so they just escaped her ears. No doubt she loved the pampering, yet she would not do any of it again, she vowed to herself. Too much stress for her.

"Breathe Riddhima," Shaina laughed

"How can you be so calm?" she snapped back. "What if I trip? What if my heel breaks, or sari tears? And'." She added voicing her biggest fear, "if the audience don't like me?"

"Look, you've tried this on a million times, and trust me, the audience will love you! You look so adorable!"

"I've tried on in the dorm right? No one's seen me!"

"It's only cuz I want them to be shocked"

"And where's Sanaya when I need her?"

"Uhhm, Riya couldn't make it, so I'm guessing, no I'm sure, she's in the audience taking full advantage of that."

"Can't she for once forget Nikhil?" Riddhima groaned.

"Ohhkk, look your number is up. Take a deep breath. You'll be fine, Show them what you've got." Shaina hugged her and left, as Riddhima went behind the curtain.

Waiting for her signal, Riddhima started getting into the beat of the music.

"Good luck," whispered a random model who had finished her line long time back.

"Thanks," she replied.

The ramp was an extended stage, where model's came from either side, crossed, and went back, waiting. But because Riddhima and Armaan were the last, and supposedly the ones to wow the audience, they had to meet up in the centre, show some love, and walk back together through the middle.

The signal went, and with a burst of confidence, Riddhima walked onto the stage. The crowd erupted into cheers and applause. Armaan followed from the other end making the crowd go wilder. Well, the girls certainly. Armaan had managed to create a playboy reputation in college already, and with his looks, no girl could resist his flirting. He was dressed in light blue jeans and a pink shirt to match Riddhima's Sari. He then wore a coat, which made him look smart, yet the jeans showed some boyhood in him. His hair was styled without gel, giving it a free look.

Simultaneously, they started walking to the beat, as she posed once to give the camera men what they wanted for the college magazine. A front page. When she got to end of the stage, or ramp as Shaina stubbornly called it, the music stopped abruptly. 2 spotlights shone on her and Armaan and a different music started.

(Chup chup ke ' Bunty aur Babli)

(I think this song is an all time amazing song. And since this was supposed to be 2005, this was the only song I could think of that showed Riddhima and Armaan's relationship. Hope it's not a disappointment)

dekh na meri sar se aasman ud gaya hain (Armaan, and Riddhima turned towards each other and wait for the beat to start, before they walk towards each other)

dekh na meri sar se aasman ud gaya hain (Both start walking towards each other)

dekh na asmaan ke sire khul gaye hain zameen se (They have an eye lock)

dekh na asmaan ke sire khul gaye hain zameen se (He puts out his hand, and she puts hers in. Audience are going wild by seeing the chemistry between them)

chup chup ke (2) chori se chori chup chup ke (2) (She turns twice and rolls in his arms)

chup chup ke (2) chori se chori chup chup ke (2) (He drops her low, and they pose for a bit, he brings her up)

chup chup ke (2) chori se chori chup chup ke (2) (Puts his hand on her waist, ready to walk back)

The song faded with the beat (as before) rising. She could not tear his eyes away from his during their small dance. As he was bringing her up, he whispered, "you look beautiful" in her ear, so no one could see him. And this jerked her back to life, as she felt her heart flutter, and blood rush to her cheeks.

Once they were behind the curtain, reality flushed into her. She was elated with happiness. The audience had loved them! She had been perfect! She suddenly hugged him tightly, as he hugged her back with equal happiness.

"We did it, they liked us," she gasped!

"Nope, they loved us!" he replied.

By the end of the evening, their college took the trophy for the best designs and style and presentation. The host asked Shaina who she thought was the best model in their line.

"I think there are two," she replied. "And I'm sure the audience agrees with me. The two new comers, with the greatest chemistry between them, Armaan Mallik and Riddhima Gupta of course!"

The crowd whistled and cheered for them, as they were ushered to the front to hug Shaina. When Riddhima looked up at Armaan, she felt her heart beat faster, and her cheeks burn.

Flashback ends

Riddhima turned once more under her blanket. Yes, this definitely must have been the first time she fell for him. She closed her eyes tight, praying for sleep.

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Hope you guys enjoyed this part. Please do let me know. And Thanks for all the comments. 😊
@swetha...AR knew each other..but BF and GF..not really. Just read on..hope its not a disappointment.
Love,
Sanaa
Edited by ARfanSanaa - 14 years ago
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hey awsome part yar
i am eagerly waiting for the FB
thanx for the pm
love u
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oh sanaa,i thought they would be bf n gf but nevertheless some thing strong should have happened fo'sho
thnx for pm
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great ff and awesome update plz pm me next time you update

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