Maneet OS- Always By Your Side

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys I don't really post much on the forum..this is my second Maneet OS, something I thought of as a continuation of yest. (wed.) Scenes! Hope you like it!

Maneet OS: Always by you side!!

After Geet leaves the room Maan falls a sleep peacefully, knowing that he had his life back, he had his Geet back!

The next morning when the sun rays came in through the window, Maan rubbed his eyes and woke up. He looked towards the couch and found Geet fast asleep there. He rubbed his eyes again thinking maybe he was imagining things, but then recalled all the incidents from the previous night and believed that Geet was indeed there.

Geet was laying their peacefully, a few strands of hair coming across her face. Her dupatta lay on the other side of the couch covering her feet, she held a magazine close to her heart, as if she had fallen asleep reading it.

Maan got up from his bed and walked over to the couch smiling at her. He moved closer and caressed her cheek, she shifted a bit in her sleep and smiled. Maan then moved to take the magazine away from her. It was a parenting magazine and it was open to a page with the cutest baby picture. Maan looked at the picture and smiled.

He then moved to move the strands of hair away from Geet's face. He moved one strand behind her left ear and kissed her cheek, he then moved the other behind her right ear and kissed her cheek, just then as Maan was moving his lips from Geet's cheek, Geet woke up startled.

Maan: Good morning, smiling at her'

Geet: Aap?! Their lips were very close and they just paused there looking into each others eyes.

As Maan's eyes moved downwards from her lips examining her figure, Geet realized she didn't have her dupatta on. She made a move to get the dupatta from her feet but Maan caught it before her and held it behind his back.

Geet: Dekhiyay'

Maan: Looking at Geet, dreamiliy..Dekh hi toh raha hoon.

Geet:, Aap..aap mera dupatta dedijiye. Yeh achi baat nahi hai

Maan: Acha yeh achi baat nahi hai, aur jot um neh kiya, mujhay chor ke chaligayi aur phir khud agar kamray mein sogayi baad mein.

Geet: Woh woh'

Maan: Woh kya..bolo na Geet?

Geet: Main bhi aapko dekhay bina kaisay soh sakthi thi, she said shyly, Maan smile and Geet caressed his cheek trying to distract him, and put her hand to get her dupatta back.

Maan realized what she was doing.

Maan: Yeh kya kar rahi ho, aisay toh tumhay apna dupatta wapis nahi milnay wala.

Geet: Toh?

Maan: Kuch chaiyay hota hai, toh badle mein kuch dena partha hai.

Geet: Dusht Danav, bilkul aik business man ki tarah baat kardi na!

Maan smiled.

Geet: Kya dena parega.

Maan pulled her close by her hands and whispered in her ear, abhi tumhay mainay aik kiss dekar good morning kiya, Geet blushed'.toh tumhay''

Maan: Waisay tum samjdar ho samaj hi gayi hogi'

Geet: Main main, kaisay?

Maan: Aray Geet itna mushkil nahi hota, bas mere paas aao, aur he said pulling her closer' Geet closed her eyes.

Maan: aankhein band rakhoghi toh kaisay karo gi.

Geet: Mujhay sharam arahi hai, aap mujhay aisay nahi dekhay.

Maan: Acha theek hai, main apni aankhen band karleta hoon, phir tum karlena theek hain.

Geet: Haan Geet blushed.

Maan closed his eyes and Geet quickly kissed him on the cheek. She was just pulling her dupatta from his back when he pulled her into a hug.

Just then Nakul came into the room.

Nakul: ahem ahem coughing.

Maan opened his eyes: Tum.

He quickly moved Geet's dupatta from his hand and put it around her.

Nakul: Jee dadi maa ne nashtha beyja hai, aap ko phone kiya tha lekin lag nahi raha tha,

Maan looked towards Geet angrily remembering how she broke his phone.

Geet gave a nervous laugh!

Maan: Haan haan acha tum kahna do aur bahar wait karlo, aur kuch chaiya hoga toh main bula lunga.

Nakul: Jee.

Geet takes the food from Nakul and makes Maan sit.

Geet: Chaliyay ab aap nashtha kiyjiye. She started to take out the food, which had omelettes and parathas, slices of bread with butter.

She started feeding Maan and then Maan stopped her.

Maan: Geet tumnay bhi kal raat say kuch nahi khaya na, tum bhi kahao.

He took a piece of the paratha and fed her. They both smiled lost in each other

Geet: Hai kitany mazay ka paratha hai, bas agar achar hota toh maza ajatha.

Maan: Achar?

Geet: Haan achar, hai mera itna mun kar raha hai kuch khata kahnay ko.

Maan called out to Nakul.

Nakul: Jee

Maan: Nakul, achar lao.

Nakul: sir achar?

Maan: Haan achar, mujhay nahi pata kahin say bhi lao par mujhay abhi chaiyay jaldi.

Nakul: jee, he leaves on his quest for achar.

Geet: Aray koi baat nahi, main toh yunhi kehrahu thi, aap ne toh becharay ko, choti si baat ke liye

Maan: Nahi Geet , tumhari koi bhi baat mere liye choti nahi, tumhay kuch chaiya toh mujhay tumhay dena hi hoga.

Geet smiled..aap kitnay achay hai haan.

Maan: Haan haan jantha hoon, ab tum khana kao.

They both ate, Nakul brought the achar and all too. Soon it was time for them to leave.

The both sat in the back of the car. As the car started moving Geet got a little queasy. She ran out and threw up. Maan went to her.

Maan: Geet tum theek toh ho.

Geet: Haan woh bas kahan say hogaya.

MAan: NAkul, yeh kaisa achar laya theay tum, dekho Geet ko kya hogaya he said flustered.

Geet: Dekhiyay, she held his hand and whispered, aisa toh hota rehta hai, aap fikar maat kijiye she told him and he looked into her hend and she closed them telling him she was okay.

They were in the car and a bump came and Maan's elbow hit Geet on the side of the stomach.

Geet: Ouch holding her stomach.

Maan: Geet Geet tum theek toh ho, he said putting his hand to her stomach.

Geet looked down at his hand on her stomach and then put her hand over his.

Geet: Aap mere saat hai, toh mujhay kuch ho hi nahi saktha. And she hugged him from the side.


Sorry for any mistakes, have quickly typed this, have to go to college in a while but this came to mind so couldn't resist writing'do leave comments!!

~Fatima


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Posted: 13 years ago
is it not good guys? please tell na!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww.....its so cute, awesome job yaar.  As I was reading, I could actually imagine Maneet saying this 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it!!

hopefully the real episode is filled with Maaneet scenes as well too!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wooooooooooow ..
to good ..
continue pls xD

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Posted: 13 years ago
fatima



OS yaar






                 







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Posted: 13 years ago
Very Very good one thanks:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
hayyyyyyyeeee. that was so cute...love maaneet
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it.....
very nice
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you everyone who commented!! Glad u liked it!!!😳