My eyes are your eyes:Maneet OS

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Posted: 13 years ago

All my friends are sad abt not having enough Maneet romantic scenes in my ff Colourful birds.This is a sad romantic OS 4 Maneet.This is my Navratri gift 4 my friends.

My eyes are your eyes




Geet..her name sounded musical.Not only her voice was musical,her eyes also sing.Anybody who looks at her eyes will fall for her.She has attractive eyes which is filled up with romantic music.The secret of her musical eyes is Maan,her lover.Maan filled her heart,mind and eyes with love and music.He is a musician who made Geet fall in love.Music flowed from his heart to her eyes.Her eyes always sing romantic songs for him.
'Kaise mujhe tum mil gayi, kismat pe aaye na yakin
utar aayi jheel mein, jaise chaand utarata hai kabhi
houle haule, dheere se
gunguni dhup ki tarah se tarnnum main tum
chhuke mujhe gujari ho yu
dekhu tumhe, ya main sunu
tum ho sukun, tum ho junun
kyun pehle na aayi tum
kaise mujhe tum mil gayi, kismat pe aaye na yakin...{Ghajini}.

Navratri day..That was the most significant day in their love story.
That is when Maan proposed to her.Geet and Maan loved each other.But they never confessed to each other even though they were aware of each other's feelings.
The dandiya night was in full swing.Maan and Geet played Dandiya and enjoyed a lot.While dancing itself he proposed to her,
"Geet...I love you".
She blushed.She did'nt take much time to answer as she could'nt control herself.
"I love you too Maan".
They both could not express their happiness due to over excitement.They continued dancing.Unexpectedly he pulled her towards him.
"Maan..what are you doing?People will see".
Geet was nervous.
"I'm not bothered.Let others see our love.Well..you look very ravishing in this traditional Indian dress.You look very pretty while playing dandiya".
She blushes.
Like she feared,everyone saw their open romance.They stared at them.But nothing stopped Maan.
"I love Geet.I want to marry her".
He did'nt hesitate to tell it openly.
Surprisingly things moved smooth.Nobody went against their wish.Everyone blessed them.
Mann showed the shiny moon to Geet.
"Geet..see the shiny bright moon.The moon is witnessing our love".
She smiles,"I also feel that the beautiful moon is watching our romance".
Maan looked deeply into her face.
"The moon is thinking how beautiful you are.You are beaytiful like this moon".
She blushed.
Maan sang for her,
"Chand Chupa Badal Mein, Sharma Ke Meri Jaana ,
Seene Se Lag Ja Tu, Bal kha Ke Meri Jaana,
Gumsum Sa Hai, Gupchup Sa Hai
Madhosh Hai,Khamosh Hai,
Haan Ye Sama, Haan Ye Sama Kuch Aur Hai,
Han Han Han Chand Chupa..."{Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam}.
Geet is mesmerised by his sweet music.

They did'nt know that their dreams are going to shatter very easily.
After the dandiya party,Geet stepped out of the area only to put her life in danger.The fate stored something terrible for her.A lorry hit her car.Her parents got saved by God's blessing.But she remained in the ventilator.Maan's prayers and tears saved Geet's life.But their misery continued.Geet was not same anymore.She had lost her eye sight.The most attractive part of her has left her forever.Her glittering eyes lost life.
Maan's tears fell on her.She burst into tears.
"Maan...please go away.Don't shed tears for me.Don't waste your life for a blind girl".
Her heart was bleeding while saying this.
"Geet...how could you think that i can leave you.I love you.I will love you forever.I can't leave you like that".
Geet's eyes seemed to be an ocean because of the tears.
"What are you saying Maan?I can't see anything.I have no eyes".
"Don't say like that.You have eyes.My eyes are for you.You have eyesight.You can see things through my eyes.I have no right on my eyes.My eyes are your eyes".
Geet burst into tears again.Maan caressed her.She rests her head on his chest for peace and comfort.

The end
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Posted: 13 years ago
great OS.. loved the songs u chose
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Posted: 13 years ago
oops real sad one ..geet lost her eyesight :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mindblowing...!!!! πŸ˜‰
beautiful...lovely luv story...!!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
OMG!!! she lost it...!!!!😲 i had tears in me eyes....!!!!😭😭😭😭😭
so pure luv...!!!!!😳😳😳😳😳
Posted: 13 years ago
really nice OS
love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey  superbbbbbbbbbbb  n  touchy  OS  yaar..........i  loved  it.............
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Posted: 13 years ago
sad....but i luved iT!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey that was really awesome...so loved it
great...OS
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Jass brilliant  work hun ⭐️ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ⭐️.

Luved d way u described ManEets journey frm luv to marriage .
Der confession, der luv n  romance πŸ˜
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simply luved it 😳 πŸ˜ƒ.

Ur selection of songs in all ur FFs r always awesome n vry romantic 😳.

D ending was really vry sad Geet lost her eye sight 😭 😭 😭.
But den dos last line by Maan really melted my heart 😳
dat was really beautiful
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True luv is not bound to jst our eyes but its wat we feel in our heart😊😊.

Thanx 4 d Beautiful OS hun πŸ˜ƒ


Posted: 13 years ago
awesome OS
how cute..
loved it