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Edited by yourz4eva - 13 years ago

Please reply and comment that will help me to improve my writing skills.

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shona_lover

hey nice story
but why so sad ending???.....sorry i don't mean to sound rude but i am and they lived happily ever after kinda person......
anyways it was written beautiful
keep up the good work.

Originally posted by: DaShInG_DeViL

hey nice story
but why so sad ending???.....sorry i don't mean to sound rude but i am and they lived happily ever after kinda person......
anyways it was written beautiful
keep up the good work.

thanks for your comment

don't be sorry its just your pov😛. i will try to make only happy ending os in future😊.

heyyy dear,
nice one



love
Riddss

Originally posted by: Riddss

heyyy dear,
nice one



love
Riddss

thanks once again dear😃

:'( sad ending
but it was touching <3

Originally posted by: kash.is.bk4ever

:'( sad ending
but it was touching <3

thank u dear😃

Dude!!
U F****en made me cry!!
Gawd it was so sad!!
If possible do cont wid a second part!
Since I am the hapily ever after types!!

very well written by you yeh OS parhe ker last sene yaad agaya Shilp aur Armaan ka