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Hey guys.....recently i had written some poems....and Jess told me to post them here....so im doing that...dunno whether they are good or not...but these were my only solace when i was in mess!!!

the first one is titled wish!

WISH!!!

wish i could fly,
reach far beyond,
and soar into the sky,
breaking open these shackles that close me by,
wish....i could fly!

wish i could dream,
of the mountains and summers,
and endless beautiful flowing streams,
unburdening from the melancholy and stagnation,
wish.....i could dream!

wish i could hear,
the soft falling of the gentle raindrops,
the unsaid story of a single tear,
often unheard and drowned in the chaos and cheer,
wish....i could hear!

wish i could speak,
what is difficult to put in words,
and yet more difficult in my heart to keep,
coursing through me and weighing me down,
wish.....i could speak!

wish i could bear,
the trials and troubles, the liars and hurdles,
and understand that life is not often fair,
it mares you, it heals you in its own way,
but wish.....i could bear!

wish i could see,
that beauty is in the heart,
always present in you and me, in the eyes of the beholder, the one who choose to be,
wish....i could see!

wish i could greet,
the dawn, the dusk, the evening twilight,
each so unique and yet so complete,
moving like circles in a sand, with no end and no go,
wish....i could greet!

wish i could love,
love so simple and true, to look into the eyes and through,
unconditional, patient, easy or tough,
no matter how, when, where and what, like no other,
just wish.....i could love!

but most of all,
i wish....... to fly, to dream, to hear, to speak
to bear, to see, to love, to greet,
to understand and comprehend what i have and learn to share and give,
to appreciate the precious gift,
- a life which is to breathe and live!!!
wish.....i could live!



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poem 3 page 1

hope u like it!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago


                                                     Take me as I am..

Take me as i am,
for i wont say i am always right,
i wont say i am always bright,
i am not always a happy sunshine,
sometimes i cry, sometimes i whine!

Take me as i am,
i dont always speak the truth,
sometimes i am snobby, sometimes i am rude,
i dont always keep my cool,
so many times i act like an idiot and a blithering fool!

Take me as i am,
there are times when i make no sense,
i get all worked up, worried and tense,
times when i wanna run away and hide,
want to see no one and yet want someone beside!

Take me as i am,
there will be rains, there will be clouds,
there will suffering, there will be doubt,
there will be endless torrents pouring down upon us,
sometimes when we may fight and question our trusts!

Still...Take me as i am,
walking on the streets i need a hand to hold,
someone to keep me company, someone to behold,
i may not be good, i may not be the best,
but remember we are humans and each one is different from the rest!

Take me as i am,
scold me, teach me, cheer me, heal me,
help me, trust me, hurt me, love me,
make me laugh, make me cry,
make me live as days pass by,
BUT...
do not try and change me...
tell me what is wrong and right,
but dont try to override my voice or make me give up a fight!

Just... Take me as i am,
and i promise i will too....
take you as you are, to be there with you,
and be there for you!!



i hope u like it!😃



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                                                    Goodbye / Farewell

Why is it so tough to say a goodbye,
unlike a simple hello, good day or a hey,
the words just form on my lips and freeze,
not wanting to be spoken and becoming the final speech.

Somehow i hope that the time would turn back,
so i can be there with everyone and have a good old laugh,
how can i just change my ways of the years,
or forget all the joys, the pranks, the tears.

With everything around me making me realize,
that i am being given a chance at a new life,
i still wanna hold on and never let go,
to feel safe in the embraces of the ones i know.

How tough it is to let go, change and move on,
to leave behind all that i have and count upon,
i feel a tremor in my heart and fear in my mind,
for i know the pain of separation is never ever kind.

I want to go forward and yet stay back,
afraid to leave the voices and faces that the future might lack,
and how i wish i can always remember,
all the people who have touched me for ever and ever.

The memories of these final moments,
the last laugh, the last touch, the last tears,
the last songs, the last dance and the last cheers,
will always stay with me and linger on,
ever if i bid farewell and say a goodbye,
i'll hold them in my heart as years will pass by.


hope u like it!😃
 
Edited by shinz - 13 years ago
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Loved it Shinz... thank u for sharing your talent...
 
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Shinz... WISH.... what a beautiful poem... I felt like you wrote it for me... It echoes me perfectly... I dream to fly... I dream to be with nature forever... I loved your poem... this one the most among the three...
 
You are amazing writer dear... keep writing more whenever you get a chance...
 
The lines that touched me the most...
 
wish i could speak,
what is difficult to put in words,
and yet more difficult in my heart to keep,
coursing through me and weighing me down,
wish.....i could speak!

wish i could bear,
the trials and troubles, the liars and hurdles,
and understand that life is not often fair,
it mares you, it heals you in its own way,
but wish.....i could bear!

 
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L !!!! 🤗
 
Secone one... Take me as I am... so wonderfully written.... Isn't this everyone's feeling?... to have people accept them as they are... just let me be myself... take me as I am...
 
Awesome poem Shinz... you write exceptionally well... 👏
 
Third one... Goodbye....
 
I almost cried reading this... goodbye are always hard... I hate them... I actually cannot say goodbye to anyone close to me... I try to keep them with me always...  I have few close friends from my 10th and 12th those are still in touch with me... though we never get to meet each other for years... such friends are never lost... we never say goodbye to them in our hearts....
 
Awesome poems Shinz.... !!!
 
 
Edited by -Jess- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ah the first two were BEAUTIFUL!

I personally liked the second one..I think i can relate to it more!

And its beautiful! 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
updated the third one too!
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Shinz... now you are making me cry...  OMG.... the third one just made me emotional... Shinz.. you r a genious... write more please....
 
 
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Originally posted by: -Jess-

Shinz... now you are making me cry...  OMG.... the third one just made me emotional... Shinz.. you r a genious... write more please....

 
 



im so glad u liked it...i was apprehensive of this one...since i wrote it in a haste...thanku for being so encouraging Jess!!🤗🤗
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Ah the first two were BEAUTIFUL!

I personally liked the second one..I think i can relate to it more!

And its beautiful! 👏



thanku!!
im glad that u liked it......oh the second one...well....its the one i feel is the truest ATM.....i wamt ppl to take me as i am too!!!😃

thanku again....!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shinz



                                                    Goodbye / Farewell

Why is it so tough to say a goodbye,
unlike a simple hello, good day or a hey,
the words just form on my lips and freeze,
not wanting to be spoken and becoming the final speech.

Somehow i hope that the time would turn back,
so i can be there with everyone and have a good old laugh,
how can i just change my ways of the years,
or forget all the joys, the pranks, the tears.

With everything around me making me realize,
that i am being given a chance at a new life,
i still wanna hold on and never let go,
to feel safe in the embraces of the ones i know.

How tough it is to let go, change and move on,
to leave behind all that i have and count upon,
i feel a tremor in my heart and fear in my mind,
for i know the pain of separation is never ever kind.

I want to go forward and yet stay back,
afraid to leave the voices and faces that the future might lack,
and how i wish i can always remember,
all the people who have touched me for ever and ever.

The memories of these final moments,
the last laugh, the last touch, the last tears,
the last songs, the last dance and the last cheers,
will always stay with me and linger on,
ever if i bid farewell and say a goodbye,
i'll hold them in my heart as years will pass by.


hope u like it!😃
 



God! this goes into my computer!

B-E-A-Utiful!

I think most of us have gone through this...But to put it in this way is genius!

Loved it hun! Its beautiful!

🤗