OS- Colors of Life page 52 - Page 24

cute os amrita di😛.....cute becoz each scene has flash of cuteness 😳.... shan's fast, his notice abt khanak not allowed to enter the kitchen, loved it...  and khanak did the vrat successfully? wow ......i mean i though she will fall now and shan will come and catch her 😉... anyways do update next part soon....😃 Edited by m4manju - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ammu_SunshYn

wats wid the 'babes' , di??...got akshay-khushboo's disease??..

Yeah it was from them and I find it beautiful now😆😆😆

Originally posted by: m4manju

cute os amrita di😛.....cute becoz each scene has flash of cuteness 😳.... shan's fast, his notice abt khanak not allowed to enter the kitchen, loved it...  and khanak did the vrat successfully? wow ......i mean i though she will fall now and shan will come and catch her 😉... anyways do update next part soon....😃

Oh, my sweet babes....Missed you but I'm so busy now😭😭😭

great  job! that was  sweet that Shaan wanted to keep vrat for her!

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

great  job! that was  sweet that Shaan wanted to keep vrat for her!

Thanks alot dear, let's see what happened to his vrat in the next part😆😆😆

Grt OS amrita!!  👏👏👏

amrita damn cute sweety

 haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii shaan doing it all for khanak made me all emo.........soooooo sweet
 the scenes were just tooooooo good
 loved every bit of yr writing
 im dying to hear the next part jaldi
 gosh its just superb
 a very loving karavachauth for shanak

Originally posted by: simiv

Grt OS amrita!!  👏👏👏

App bahut khoob likhte ho!!👏

 

Thanks babes (oops! Kya kare?ABoo ka side effects, anyway, I find babes beautiful now)

Originally posted by: shanakforever

amrita damn cute sweety

 haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii shaan doing it all for khanak made me all emo.........soooooo sweet
 the scenes were just tooooooo good
 loved every bit of yr writing
 im dying to hear the next part jaldi
 gosh its just superb
 a very loving karavachauth for shanak

Thanks babes 🤗

Aww...I loved it Amrita!!