More heaven than a heart could hold...pictorial OS

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Edited by crazilycrazy - 13 years ago

i want him to do that!!! i really do - i want him to fight for his love. Thanks for the Oneshot - it portrays really what i want to happen.

Neha

wow!!!!!!!!!!what a lovely piece writing.very nice dear⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Ankitia,

SUPERB Ankita.....

Loved it to the core.....
dadi's dialogue is just brilliant. I wish they could use that dialogue in the serial also. If not whole then, this line....It's really magical...

"You say that love hurts Maan,but thats not true.Lonliness hurts.Rejection hurts.Losing someone hurts.Everyone confuses these things with love.But in reality,love is the only thing in this world that covers up for all the pain and makes us feel wonderful again."



With Luv,
Jhankaar

awsuM!!!

i liked iT!!!!

Hey ankita

AWESOME work⭐️
really beautiful
loved it
thanks for the PM

love
prinz

Real nice post Ankita and pls continue writing ....to fight for love and then gain it is far more satisfying and i think thats what Maan will do now.....

Real nice post Ankita and pls continue writing ....to fight for love and then gain it is far more satisfying and i think thats what Maan will do now....and when they hugged it felt like the world stood still..... 😍

Originally posted by: nehaahmad

i want him to do that!!! i really do - i want him to fight for his love. Thanks for the Oneshot - it portrays really what i want to happen.

Neha

Thank you Neha.When you love someone truly like Maan loves Geet your love knows no bounds.He will fight.This OS is specially written for him.If he truly loves Geet he will believe her,he will stand by her and he will fight for her Edited by crazilycrazy - 13 years ago