OS: Truly...Madly...Deeply - Page 2

awee..really nice,,luv geet pinki n maneet convo part....

sooooooooo soothing and heart felt

totally sppechless....no word...hats off to you
such a touching story and their emotions were so clearly shown i felt as though i was watching the actual epsiode...that means a lot to me....thank you so much for this

it was really awsome

1st of all , yaaaaaaaaaaay Jaaz is back wid another amazin OS of her 😉

and Now! Jaz i had tears in my eyes while readin each n every line 👏

i mean the way u expressed their feelings for each otha was amazin !!!

i wish ! i wish this actually happens !!

 

i mean tht would be the best way Maan could knw everything! EVERYTHIN! that How much she loves him, how she cant leave widout him n the Dark truth of her life! which forced her stay away frm the one she truely love!

 

Jaz Please Send this OS to the CV's ! Im sure they will like this idea ! n get Maneet closer n instead of Pinky they might get Pari as she also noticed sumfin in y-days Epi !

n anywyz Pari is here to unite thm !n i guess this will be the perfect Scene!!!

 

OMG Jaz this was ur Best OS !!!

Amazin !!!

👏

Love you !

u knw Afta Watchin y-days epi i was so sad buh this made me cry buh the nice way 😊

amazin 👏

Beautifully written Jaz. you captured all the emotions that needed to be captured. Keep it up. 

OMG........im readin sumthin lyk dat 4 d 1st tym n it was amazing!!

gosh.....1st wen i saw i was lyk its sooo big ....hw much tym it will take...but thn i was lyk its abt geen n maan so gotto read!!
thn as i was readin......gosh i srsly got goosebumps!!!

dayem d tym wen he heard her....n asked her....tum mujhe itna hi jaan payi ho......ufff i was sooo glad he heard!!!

n thn every line i was smiling.....n thinkin if i cud c it....though i was imaginin it at d bak of mind!!

n thn wen he says......
Pyaar kiya hai tumse Geet, aur yeh koi khel nahin hai. Tum meri jaan se bhi zyada pyaari ho…kaise jaane deh doon tumhe?"

gosh.....breathtaking....srsly!!! d best line Maan cud ever speak out loud..!!!
dis is such a lyf saver.......feels so gud readin.....hope sumthin lyk dat happens!!!
srsly amazing piece of work!!
keep up d gud work!!

thnx alot!!
T@S

Jazzzzzzz

Hey,

This is a wonderful OS Jaz.....
I didn't even cry that much seeing the actual epi, but tears didn't seem to end while reading it.
Was just, so beautiful, so true, all the feelings weaved in the words.... It was really marvellous, and this line is just awesome.
the man she'd inevitably come to love…truly…madly…deeply.