A LOVE STORY - Page 11

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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice update,i really liked reading it!!!!
update soon and don't forget to send me a pm 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey dear, that was mindblowing part

but plz dear, add me in ur pm list and plz do pm me for more updates
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice one hazra........ mayur were soooo cute.......... especially nupur when simran was sitting beside mayank............. i hope mayyu nupur ko jaldi manaye......... do continue sooooooooooooooooon..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesum update dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 2-
poor nupur
bahut jealous kar diya mayank ne
aaab mayank ki baari hai jealous hone ki
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyyy hazra
fabulous updates
jealous nupur is too good
do continue soon
n thanx for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

hi guys..updated 3rd part..i hope u like it..dont forget to comment..read n njoy..

nupur went from there..flashback ends...
g-mayank..nupur tumse bohot zaada pyaar karti hai..isliye pls use hurt mat karo..
m-gunjan...tumne use akele kyu jaane diya..
g-maine to use akele jaane se manaa kiya tha par vo nahi maani...
m-vo zaada dur nahi gayi hogi..mai bhi jata hu...bye guys..
g-bye..
mayank leaves from there...
s-chasmish..bhale hi ye dono kitna bhi jagdaa karte hai par dono ek dusre se bohot pyaar karte hai...😊
g-ha samrat..ye to hai...😊
other side..nupur was walking on road..
n to herself-pata nahi mayank mujhe itna kyu sataata hai..kya hoga hai use..ab mai bhi usse kabhi baat nahi karugi..😔
m to himself-zaada dur nahi gayi hogi...
mayank went on his bike..he saw nupur and went to her..
m-ruko nupur..
n-tum..😡
m-nupur...mere bagair akeli jaa rahi ho..
n-tum jao na us simran ke paas..😡
m-nupur...meri baat suno..
n-mere raaste se hatho..😡
m-pehle meri baat suno..
n-mayank mere raaste se hatho..😡
m-nupur...
nupur was going but mayank was not allowing her to go...
n-mayank hatho..😡
m-nupur..meri baat to suno..
n-mayank hatho..😡(she shouted at mayank)
mayank got angry and he caught nupur's hand tightly..
n-mayank ye kya kar rahe ho..chodo mera haat..mujhe dard ho raha hai..😡
m-aur mere dard ka kya...jab tum mere sath aisa karti ho to mujhe bhi dard hota hai...😡
n-mayank...mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hai..chodo mera hath..😡
mayank got more angry..he leaves her hand and went from there in anger..
n to herself-😭
its 9 o clock...at nupur's home..she was in her room...her mom came in the room..
nm-nupur beta..dinner ready hai..chalo..
n-mujhe nahi khana hai..😔
nm-beta...jabse tum clg se ayi ho tabse tense lag rahi ho..baat kya hai beta..kuch hua hai kya??
n-nahi mom..aisi koi baat nahi hai..😔
nm-beta..tum mujse kuch nahi chupa sakti..bolo beta..baat kya hai..
n to herself-agar mom ko mayank ke baare mai bataa diya to vo mujhe 10 sawaal karegi...abhi sahi waqt nahi hai..
nm-kya soch rahi ho beta??
n-vo...mom vo...
nm-ha beta...bolona..
n-vo mom..meri dost ke sath mera jagdaa ho gaya hai..aur galti ham dono ki thi..to ab mai use kaise manao..
nm-to tum use sorry boldo..
n-vo nahi manne wala hai...i mean vo nahi manne wali hai..
nm-to fir...kuch gift kar do...
n-gift...good idea..😊
nm-ab chalo dinner ready hai..😊
n-ha mom..ap jaeye..mai do minute mai ati hu..😊
nm-ok..😊
she went from there..
n to herself-idea acha hai..agar mai mayank ko kuch gift kar dugi to atleast uska gussa thoda kam to hoga...vaise galti meri bhi thi..mai kuch zaada hi possessive ho gayi hu..gunjan ne thick kaha tha..mayank sirf mujse pyaar karta hai..vo sirf mera hai aur vo mujse zaada der tak naaraz nahi reh sakta hai..phone karti hu use...
other side..at mayank's home..he was in the washroom..his mom came in his room and his cell was ringing...
mm-nupur..ye nupur kaun hai...
she picked the call..
n-hello mayank..i m sorry..mai janti hu mai kuch zaada hi possessive ho gayi hu par kya karu..mai tumse bohot pyaar karti hu..tumhare bagair nahi reh sakti hu..tumhe kisi aur ke sath nahi dekh sakti hu..mayank..tum sun rahe hona..
mm to herself-ye sab kya chakkar hai...
n-mayank kuch to bolo...
mm-beta..mai mayank ki maa bol rahi hu..
nupur was shocked..
n-kya...😔
mayank came out from bathroom..
m-maa...kisse baat kar rahi ho??
mm-nupur..
mayank was shocked...
m-kya...
mayank took his cell from his mom and cuts the call..
mm-aree phone kyu kaat diya...
m-maa vo...kya kaha nupur ne??
mm-pehle tu mujhe ye bataa ki ye nupur kaun hai??
m-vo...vo meri dost hai..
mm-sirf dost hai ya fir..
m-maa..kya ap bhi..nupur sirf meri dost hai...
mm-acha..to fir usne phone par aisa kyu kaha ki vo tujse bohot pyaar karti hai...
m-kya..nupur ne aisa kaha..
mm-usne to ye bhi kaha ki vo tere bagair reh nahi sakti hai aur sorry bhi kaha..
m-nupur ne sach mai aisa kaha...😊
mm-tu smile kyu kar raha hai...
m-vo...maa...vo..mai apko batane hi wala tha...
mm-acha..kab batane wala tha??
m-vo...aj..aj hi batane wala tha..
mm-acha...jhoot bolne bhi sikh gaya hai..mayu...tu jab nupur se itna pyar karta hai to mujse kyu chupaya..beta..mai tumhari maa hu aur tu mujse hi ye sab baat chupane laga hai..
m-maa aisi baat nahi hai..mai apko batane hi wala tha...
mm-ab kab mila raha hai meri hone wali bahu se...😊
m-maa ap...
mm-beta...ab to use dekhne ke baad hi chain milega..aur vaise bhi mujhe apne bete ki pasand par pura bharosa hai..😊
m-😊
mm-acha ye to bataa..vo dikhne mai kaisi hai??😊
m-vo...vo duniya ki sabse khubsurat ladki hai...😊
mm-acha...😊
m-ha maa...ha thodi jagdaalu hai par dil ki bohot achi hai..😊
mm-to ab kab mila raha hai??😊
m-bohot jald maa...😊
mm-ye hui na baat...😊
hey guys..here ends my 3rd part..i hope u like it..so kya hoga ab??janne ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka..love u all..
hazra
Edited by hazraluvsalman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyy awwwsum update
cont soooon
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thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice.. waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely updt
thanks for the pm

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