SAJAN-FF( DIL KA RISHTA)

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Posted: 13 years ago
guys.......this is my next ff on sajan.......i hope u all will like.....just like...liked my other ff's.........its a story of two people....samrat n gunjan....u will no the concept when u will read the story....just hope that u would like it............its name is...DIL KA RISHTA.....
chararcter scetch:
samrat shergilll:samrat-siggy1.png image by payal25
cool handsome guy....well educated guy......dashing smart...loves his familly n mother very much.....working with his one month elder brother rather than frend on there busineess.....is looking for his love.....wants to do love marrige.....but fate has decided something different for him.....
gunjan bhuushan:
sweet shy simple  girl..who is a doctor....lost her best frend mother....when she was a baby....lives with her father n bui..with her cousins.....loves her family very much....n thinks for them all the time.. doesnt want anything from life..only her familys happiness...
 so guys....this is the main characters......samrat n gunjan...two different lives...will soon becoiome......one...
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other characters...
mayank shergill:
samrats elder brother.......his frend.....understands his brother very much...loves his wife n mother very much.....he is working in there family business...
nupur mayank shergill:
mayanks wife n samrats bhabi......rather best frend..with whom samrat does pranks....plays trcickss..n tells his feelings..loves her husband....
shilpa shergill:
mayan k n samrats lovable mom......loves her both children... n considers nupur as her own daughter....n now wishes to bring her another daughter-in-law.......
shashi bhsuhan:
gunjans father......wants her child to be happy in her life...
dia bhushan:
gunjans cousin......but gunjan considerss her as her real sister...
uday bhushan:
gunjans sweet brother.....but she considers him as her big brother.....
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part-1
a bright beautiful morning....mumbai town is shown.........when the camera focuses in a mansion......where a lady is doing the arti.....n comes in a room...where a girl is sleeping...covering her face,.....she is bui..
bui=are..dia chal tuh na......kitna soyegi????????
dia=bui......plz sone do na.....gunjan ko ane do.....phir woh utha degi..
bui=uffo...tu to mujhse nahi sambhallegi.....gunjan kaha ha??? wohi tujhe utha skati ha......
d=bui.......gunjan mandir gayi ha......har sunday ko to jati ha.....
bui=are ha.......chal tu uth ja..uday jogging se agaya ha....
then the camera is taken to a mandir..where a girl is praying to the god.....her beautiful eyes is hidden behind the specs..n her dupatta is flying..where her hair is also flying....then she openes the eyes...n her sweet smile makes the palce more beautiful.......she is gunjan......the panditji comes....
p=gunjan beta..ye lo..
g=namaste panditji......kaise ha aap???
p=beta har din yehi sawal puchti ho???
g=apto mujhe janta ha..na..har din mandir akehi mera din shuru hota ha......
p=janta hu....bhagwan tumhe sare sukh de..ye lo prashad..
g=accha panditji....chalti hu...
gunjan goes to the stairs of the mandir..nw as giving prashad to the orphan childs...other side...a woman n a girl comes.....they r nupur n shilpa aunty....
n=namaste panmditji..
sh=ye lijiye...aj sabko khana hila dijiyega..
n=mummy ap yehi rukiye.....ma zara prashad charhake ati hu...
n=theek ha beta...ma bachcose milti hu...
shilpa aunty heads for the children when her eyes were fixed on gunjan..how nicely she was playing with the kids..her smiles......n then the love for them...shilpa aunty couldnt move her eyes...nupur comes..
n=mummy hogaya..chale???
sh=.............................................
n=mummy kya hua????
sh=kuch nahiu....ma uss ladkiko dekh rahihu....waha..
nupur also looks n smiles..
n=isse pehle nahi dekha..aur itna pyaar...kitni pyaari ladki ha.......ha na mummy????
sh=ha..
p=lo nupur beta.......are majhi ap abhtak gaye nahi???
sh=panditji...ye ladki kaun ha???
p=ye..ye gunjan beta ha....har subhah yaha ati ha.....barihi pyaari ladki ha...... nek vichar ha........
sh=pata chalta ha kitni acchi khandan ki ha......wase kiski beti ha ye??
n=mummy kahi app.....
sh=kyu??? tumhe ye pasand nahi ayi?????
n=mummy....mujhe koi problemm nahi ha..par sabsade ko to puch liijiye......
sh=usse...ma sambahlungi...panditji..ap ek kaam kijiye is ladkike parivaar ke bareme mujhe batayiye......theek ha?????
p=sach??? ap barehe acche gahr apne bete samrat ka rishta leke jaraheha.....
sh=mujhe pata ha..ap pehle woh kijiye jo mane kaha...aur phir...unke ghar rishta leke jayiyega.....
p=ji..ma aj sham apke ghar ata hu..
n=namaste panditji...mummy..mayank booht khush hoga...par samrat???
sh=nupur..mera dil ajtak galat nahi hua..aur mera dil kehta ha...ye ladki..samrat keliye sabse acchi hogi...tum, dekhna......
hope u guys would like the 1st part......
 

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Posted: 13 years ago
congo maisha 4 new ff
its truely amazing part
hats off 2 u yaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
plz do continue soon this ff
n also other..........................
m always waiitng 4 ur ff so plz plz nxt time sam ki entry n plz jaldi jaldi sab update krnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
m waiting jab tak tere ffs nahi padhti mera din accha nahi jata so plz update soonnnnnn
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1st time m m first 2 cmmnttttttttt m really feel vry glad in ur new ff m 1st yupieeeeeeeee
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maishaa congrats!!!
Loved the first part!! gunjan is soo sweet
and nupur and shilpa aunty liked Gunjan!! cant wait 4 samrats entry!!
N his reaction!! poor him! love marriage toh hoga hi nahi!!
poor soul!! but marriage ke baad love hoga na??
haha!! continue soon!!
loved the concept!!
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nice start....congo for new ff.
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nice start maisha!!!!!!!

congratulations for ur new ff!!!!
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nice start
loved it
continue soon
 
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Awesome Concept!!
And I LOVE Your FFs...
So Please Add Me IN To Your PM List!!
Pllzz Cont Soon!!😳
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awesome start please continue soon 😊
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maisha
part 1 was awesome
luved it alotEdited by Ayesha_Sajan - 13 years ago