Life without youu!! (update on pg 139) - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
awesome concept!!!!!!!! liked samrat's character
 
sorry manjari i haven't been replying to ur other 2 ffs as i had been busy!!
 
i have been reading all the parts they r awesome!!!!
 
ill be back from the next week!!!
 
do continue n thanx fot the pm
 
love
 
deepti
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow manjari lovely and amazing cs dear!
Ad me to your pm list cause i,m in:)
An dthanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Hey Manjari, first of all congo fr new ff n sorry fr replying so late, please forgive this late latif friend!!!! 😭 😭

Anyways, dear awesome concept n I love the CS. I m very hapy that you included two my fav couple SG n AR in this ff.......

thanx fr the pm sweety n please try to continue soon.......just waiting eagerly fr the first update....

love
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Life Without Youu....
Heyy guys this is my first update on this ff!
Hope you guys like it and please comment!!
I hope everyone got pms!!
Love,
Manjari!!
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College- morning 8.30am
 
Two girls enter... One of them has gum in her mouth and is walking very cool-ly!!(nupur)
The other clutches onto her books and is walking straight
(gunjan)
G: dii.. main library jaa rahi hoon!! kuchh notes collect karne hain!!
N: k guns!!.. main class ja rahi hoon..!! Phir canteen main milte hain!
G: ok dii!! byee!
She walks off!!
N started walking ahead.. We see a guy coming towards her..(Samrat)
N: Heyy sam! (hi 5!)
S: hi Nupur!
N: Aaj itni jaldi??
S: what to do.. basketball coach ne bulaya tha!
N: how was it?
S: as usual!!
A girl comes and taps sam on his back.. he turns.. The girl is wearing a pink salwar and is looking nervous as usual..
S: hey sis..
N (in mind) Isnt this girl quite weird?!?! hamesha dari dari si rehti hain!! gaawd!!
R: Bhaiya... Main class ja rahi hoon.. mujhe ghar le jana mat bhoolna!!
S: main aaj tak tumhe kabhi bhoola hain!! phir bhi roz yaad dilati ho!! fine! nahi bhooloonga!!
R: ok bhaiya!! wid a small smile on her face!! main chalti hoon!!
Sam nodded!!
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G is going to class when she bangs into someone... She bends down to pick her notes up.. He too helps her..
G: are youu blind??
(armaan)
A: Mayb.. tumhe dekhkar shayad ho bhi jaoo.!!
G: Excuse me?? Who do you think you are? hah??
A: I thinkk... im Armaan.. Armaan mallik!!
G: good for youu! and walks away from there!!
A(in mind) Itna attitude hain! gosh! aisi larkiyan toh sabse hot hoti hain!!
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In class (2nd year)
Mayank was early.. he had got his seat...
Nupur came in..she walked up to his desk as that was the only place empty..
N: tum roz ek hi time table follow karte ho na??
M: excuse me??
N: kyun... bathroom aa raha hain?? Lol
M: bad Joke!!
N: I dont care!! roz tumhare bagal ki hi seat empty hoti hain!! koi nahi baithan chahta na tumhare paas?!?!!?
M: Agar tumhe baithna hain toh baitho warna...
N: Dhamki dey rahe ho?? nupur bhushan ko? Mr. mayank. wateva?
M:Sharma!
N: ya.. wateva!
A guy behind mayank
Random Guy: Hey nups.. tum yaha baith jao na!! Mayank bohot hi boringg hain!!
N: haha... i know THAT!!
She walks and sits behind him!!
Mayank makes a face!!
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1st year class.
Gunjan went to an empty desk and was just abt to sit when Samrat takes that place!!
G: excuse me.. maine apna bag pehle yaha rakha tha!
S: Oh!! sorry! (he looks away)
G: Plz can you shift?
No answer
G: Im talkin to youu samrat?
S: Im not interested babes!
G: Gunjan..
S: yes.. ms gunjan...
G: better..
A: hey dude.. larki itna request kar rahi hain..
S: toh tu kyun nahi isse apne paas baitha leta!! Mujhe waise bhi akele baithna ki aadat hain!!
G: What--Ever!! (Gosh! wonder uski problem kya hain!)
She goes and sits somewhere else!
G: Heyy Ridz!!!
Samrat looks up.. Ridhima walks in..
R: hey gunji!! kaisi hain!! weekend kitna longg lag raha tha naa!!
G: seriously yaar!! isbar toh tu bhi nahi aa pai!!
R: I know! bhaiya ki tabiyet theek nahi thii!!
G shot a glance at sam..
G: ek baat bata.. tera bhai hamesha se hi aisa hain!!
R: matlab?
G: itna weird hain!!
R: gunjannn.. woh bohot sweet hain.. bas koi unhe jaan ne ki koshish nahi karta!!
G: agar woh kissi kop karne de tabhi na.. achha watever... aa baith na!
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Precap: Solid arguement between armaan and Samrat!!
         
This is quite short.. but i hope you'll like it!!
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
i read it befoe ur pm amaizng yaar loved it continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Nice Part Dear!!
Awesome Start...
And Armaan Say HOT To Samrats Chachmish?!! 😲
Its Good That Sammy Didn't Heard Yaa Ammy Was GONE!! 😆
Pllzz Cont Soon....

*Sana* 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
amazing update
awesome
loved it
continue soon
thx 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
awesome manjari!!
really good!
loved it to the core
looking forward to the next part
so cont soon n thnx for the pm

luv
debo
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
marvelous update...cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Lovely part continue soon