UNCONDITIONAL LOVE(SR OS UPDATE) page 19 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
wow! super and great..
kee writing more
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
hehehe... "apni biwi ki fragrance pehchaan gaya... thik ja rahe ho beta..." hillarious... very well written please please update soon its going very well PM if you can
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
i m really excited abt d nxt part...update as quickly as possible...great post yaar...
Posted: 13 years ago
#64
amazingπŸ‘ 
too good yaar to goodπŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
woww too good shubam!!!!! waiting for the next update!!!!!
awesome update!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
wow update soon can i ust give one suggestion that can u write the paragraph into dialogse
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Lovely update!!! eagerly waiting for your next update :))

Keep it up dear!!!
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Ridz neha ke saath room main jaati hain aur waha aur bhi log hote hain, neha saab ko introduce karti hain. Ridz ka to saara dhayan sid par tha usse lag raha tha kab woh sid se mile aur saab se badi baat cha kar bhi nahi mil pa rahi thi.

Sid thode samay saab ke saath beth kar phone le kar uthta hain aur ridz ko call karta hain ridz ka phone ring karta hain aur sid ka call dekh kar bahut khush hoti hain ussi waqt neha bolti hain " Bhabhi utha lo phone bro ka hoga but plzzzzzzzzz batana nahi ki aap yahi par ho". Ridz call pick karti hain par usse samajh nahi aa raha ki kaise baat karein saab ke samne thoda ajeeb lag raha tha par kya karti. Sid kaise ho tum? Main bilkul thik hoon tum kaisi ho hospital aa gayi tum?

Ridz nahi chahthi this id se jhooth bole isliye usne kuch bhi jawab nahi de kar sid se hi sawal puch liya" aur kya chal raha hain"? tumhari bahut yaad aa rahi hain ridz mujhe nahi pata tha main tumhein itna miss karoonga. Thodi samay bad humlog tayar ho kar venue par jayenge phir raat main party maine tumhein bataya than na?

Haan bataya tha tumne chalo tum abhi busy hoge sid main call karti hoon tumhein bye and take care. Bye tum bhi apna dhayan rakhna ridz.

Ridz bhool gayi this id se baat karte hua ki waha par aur bhi log bethe the aur saab ridz ki baatein sun rahein the. Phone disconnect karne ke baad achanak hi ridz ke mouth se I love u sid nikal jaata hain aur jab turn hoti hain to sabhi ridz ko hi dekh rahein the. Ridz bilkul embarrassed ho jati hain aur usse samajh nahi aa raha tha kaha jaaye woh. Tabhi neha aati hain aur kehti hain " Srry bhabhi humlogo ne apki baath suni chalo aap bhi fresh ho jao main tab tak apke liye kuch khan eke liye aur apki favourite coffee le kar aati hoon". Thanx neha but mujhe kuch nahi chaiye main fresh ho jaati hoon tabhi door par sid ki awaaz aati hain ridz ka heart beat fast ho jaata hain sid ki awaaz sun kar. Arre bro andaar na aa jaaye ruko sid humlog bahar aa rahein hain, bye bhabhi aap thoda aram kar lo aur fresh bhi ho jao aap.

Neha aur baki saarein room se bahar jaate hain ridz jaldi se window ke pass ja kar sid ko dekhti hain. Sid ne green color kurta pehna tha usse dekh kar ridz dekhti hi reah jaati hain. Neha bahar ja kar sid se mazak karti hain kya baat hain bro agar aaj bhabhi rehti to apko dekhti hi reah jaati u r lookin too gud kisi ki nazaar na lage, aaj punit bhaiya nahi aap hi dhula lag rahein ho kaho to koi set karein aapke liye aaj ladki walo ki taraf se.

Oye neha tujhe pata nahi hain ki main apni biwi se bahut pyaar karta hoon aur is janam main to kisi ke liye mere pass time nahi hain. Hai bro apki baat se to main bhi agree karti hoon ridz bhabhi hain hi itni sundar ki unke alawa aap kisi ke barein main nahi soch sakte. Oye tujhe kaise pata ki ridz bahut sundar hain. Wow - ------- apki aankhon se dikhta hain unke liye pyaar aur waise bhi apke mobile par maine pict dekhi thi yaad nahi. Arre haan maine ho to dikhaya tha. Ridz yeah saari baatein sun rahi thi usse lag raha tha ki woh jaldi se bahar jaaye aur sid ko hug karein.

Sid neha aur baki saarein logo ke saath chala jaata hain waha se. ridz apna luggage open karti hain aur dress nikal kar fresh hone jaati hain aur door lock kar deti hain. Ridz tayar hoti hain aur wait kar rahi hoti hain ki kab koi aaye aur usse sid ke pass le jaaye. Neha aur ritu door par knock karti hain "Bhabhi gate kholo humlog hain". Ridz door open karti hain ridz ko dekh kar dono ke hosh ur jaate hain "bhabhi really is janam main sid ko kisi aur ke baarein main sochne ki jaroorat nahi u look so beautiful". Thanx par aisa kuch nahi hain tumdono bhi bahut achi lag rahi ho. Arre haan bhabhi yeah maussi ne diya hain apke liye aur kaha hain yeah aapke liye hain mana nahi karne ke liye. Ridz box open karti hain to umein ek necklace set tha. Bahut sundar hain par main yeah nahi le sakti. Bhabhi maine pehle hi kaha tha maussi ne kaha hain mana nahi karne ke liye aur isse pehan kar chalne ke liye aur waise bhi yeah aapke sari se match kar raha hain bua aane wali thi par par busy hone ki wajah se nahi aa payi aur boli hain ki woh aapse raat main itminan se baat karengi so plzzzzzzz wear this jewllery.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Loved it..Pls continue......πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Posted: 13 years ago
#70
amazing WOW!! you sure made my day.