Originally posted by: gp00
I have a feeling I'll be adding multiple scenarios here:
Let's start with the jungle--Here is my mini-novel...I tried to keep it short but I just couldn't convey the feeling.
Naku walking just outside of the house. Dutta comes, watching her. They're wearing the same stuff, naturally. She turns around to see him there, he looks down at his injured hand, readjusting the dupatta strip. He tells her to get back to the safety of the house, and he goes back inside.
She does not return, but instead is just sitting on the ground nearby, thinking. Dutta comes to get her, is not happy she did not listen to him. He stretches out his hand for her to grab, "chal", he says. She gets up, she abruptly lets go of his hand, thinking that's what he would want. He notices.
They're walking back to the house. Naku brings up Jagpat's story. Dutta looks uncomfortable, surprised, and keeps walking, Naku stops him with her hand. She asks him if he sees himself in it? The anger, letting his days go without happiness?
They have a disagreement, Dutta gets upset at Naku, grabs her hand, she loses her balance 😆 and falls on him. He steadies her with his arm on her back, and it takes him long to let go. I can't see him saying I love you just yet. That's for my next scenario.
Sorry this was so long.
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