Maaneet ff...Ishq Hua....thread #1.. - Page 76

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Part 48...

Geet wakes up to a beautiful morning...she stretches her arms and looks at the beautiful sunrise outside...she shuts her eyes for a moment and gets flashes of maan last day...she opens her eyes quickly and thinks as to why she is thinking of maan...she opens her eyes quickly...

Geet: oye geet...yeh tujhe kya hogaya...aankhen band karke tujhe maan sir kyun dikhe?...kahin tera screw maan sir ki tarah dheela toh nahin hogaya na?...nahin nahin aisa nahin hosakta...subha subha ..jaake taiyyar hojati hoon aur nashta karleti hoon...aaj Babaji ke darshan karne jana hai...deri nahin karni chahiye...!!!...

geet goes to take a bath and gets ready in a white full sleeved churidar paired with silver jootis and earrigns..geet looks beautiful...she gets ready and goes to maan's room to see whether he is ready or not...

Geet: yeh maan sir ready hue he ya nahin...of course woh toh apna 3-course nashta poore karke ready hoke bethe bhi honge...subha ko jaldi uthna mr.khurana ki speciality hai...!!!

geet knocks on the door and gets no response...she knocks again and gets no response...!!!...she gets tensed and fugures out that how cum maan hasnt opened the door yet...she again knocks and thinks to herself...

Geet: yeh maan sir ko kya hogaya hai?...achanak aisa kya  hogaya?...kya yeh sorahehe?...abhi tak?...nahin nahin...aisa nahin hosakta hai...aisa kaise hosakta hai...jaise suraj kabhi bhi pashchim se nahin uggsakta hai waise hi maan sir kabhi bhi ser tak so nahin sakte he...waah waah...!...par mujhe unki tension horahi he...kahin unki tabiat ko toh kuch nahin...kya karoon..kya karoon???...haan ek kaam karti hoon...uss chotu se bolti hoon iss kamre ki dusri chabi lekar aaye...

chotu nrings the master key to the room and geet opens it...she opens and to her shock maan is still sleeping...

geet widens her eyes...

Geet: huh...???...yeh kya?...main udhar pareshan horahi hoon aur yeh idhar aaram se sorahe he...yeh itni der tak...waise toh kal der se uthne ke liye mere upar thanda paani daaldiya...aaj zaroor suraj bhi pashchim se nikla hoga...yeh au rabhi tak sorahehe...waah...!!!...kal uss paani ka badla main lekar rahungi...abhi mazaa chakhati hoon...

geet goes and gets a full bucket of extremely cold water...she picks it up and throws it on maan...maan gets up in a huff...

Maan: uhhh...uhhh kya hua?...kya hua?...baarish andar aagayi...baarish...huh...

Geet seeing maan like that starts laughing...laughing loudly...maan forgets everything and just stares at geet so lovingly...geet keeps on laughing...he notices geet looking beautiful in white...he puts his hand under his chin and sits just like a kid and watches geet..he says in his mind...

Maan: koi itna khoobsoorat kaise hosakta hai...Bhagwan ne bhi geet ko bari phursat se banaya hai...(he realises that geet has actually played a prank on him)...main kya bethe bethe geet ko taqraha hoon...usne mujhe paani se bhiga diya...!...geet...!

Geet still laughing comments on maan's state...

Geet: sir...aap kitne funny lagrahe he...aapko laga baarish hai...hahahaha...baarish nahin ...isse kehte hai geet ka tsunami...(laughs)...sir aap na bilkul bheege hue kawuye lagrahe he...(laughs)...

Maan: tumhe hasi aarahihe...?...tumhe zara si bhi sharam nahin aati he kya?...(he looks at himself...looking at his wet clothes)...geet...yeh kya hai?...

Geet: paani...english me isse water kehte he...chi sir...aapko itna bhi nahin pata...!!!!!!!

Maan: mujhe pata hai geet...par tumne mujhpar paani dala kaise?

Geet: thoda sa dimag aur haath ke help se...yehi kaha tha na aapne...!

Maan: geet mera matlab hai ki tumne mujhpe paani kyun phekha?

Geet: tit for tat...kal aapne mujhe nehlaya tha...aaj maine aapko nehladiya...simple...!

Maan: geet...badla...?...paani ka badla paani se...?...geet aisa koi karta he kya?...kyun why?...koi aur tareeka nahin mila?...

Geet: kyun jab main thodi der ke liye sona chahti thi tab aapne mujhpar paani phekdiya aur ab maine kiya toh aapke liye sab kuch maaf...waah waah waah...waah...!...aapke liye toh yehi theek hai...!!!

Maan: arey geet...yeh kaisi philosophy hai...maine pheka toh tumne bhi phek diya...agar kutta tumhe katega toh tum kya kutte ko kaatne jaogi...?

Geet: arey kutte kahan se aagaye beech me...insaano ki baat karrahe hai na?...aur waise bhi aapko shanti se sote hue dekhkar mujhse sahaa nahin gaya...itni golden oppurtunity main kaise chodsakti thi aapko pareshan karne ka...aur aap itni der tak kyun sorahe the?

Maan: woh main kal raat ko kuch zyada hi thakgaya tha isiliye...aur waise main tumhe yeh kyun bataun...meri marzi...main jagoon ya soun ...aur waise tum itni taiyyarh hoke ...ban-than ke kahan jarahi ho?

Geet: kahan jarahi hoon?...(geet gets slightly angry)...main na...main na main na jahannum jarahi ho...aapke dost rehte he na wahan pe...dnt wry main aapka msg unko dedungi...!

Maan: wat?...geet...achanak phoolan devi kyun bangayi?

Geet: phoolan devi?...mera bas chale jhansi ki rani banjaun...aur aapka gala dabadoon...

Maan teases geet..to irritate her...

Maan: geet...tum mera khoon kardogi...mujhe toh laga tha ki tum sirf logo ka khoon choosti ho?

Geet: huh...aapko main count dracula lagti hoon?

Maan: nahin geet...tum count dracula nahin...tum toh makkhi ho...

Geet: aapka kya side business he mujhe tang karna?

Maan: nahin main business he...geet ab batao tumhe kya hua?

Geet: ab bhulgaye na...yaad nahin aapne mujhse wada kiya tha ki aaj hum Babaji ke darshan karne Golden Temple jayenge...bhulgaye na aap?

Maan: oh isiliye tum taiyyar hoke bethi ho...jab tumhe bahar jana hota hai tab toh tum ekdum subha uthke ready hojati ho...aur meeting ke liye jana hota hai toh tum soyi pari rehti ho...waah...

Geet: hum Babaji ke darshan karne jarahe he...ghumne nahin

Maan: achcha...tum aur ghumogi nahin aisa toh ho hi nahin sakta ...bolo geet ...tum ghumna nahin chahti..??

Geet: uppp...haaan...lekin uske baad...ab aap phaltoo ki baatein karna band kijiye aur mere saath chaliye...taiyyar hojaiyye...aur haan aise bheege kawuye ki tarah mat aayyiega...plz haan...geet ki koi izzat hai...kya kahenge log...ek insaan ke saath ek kawuya...!!!...nahin nahin...(geet laughs...)

Maan: geeet...main na tumhe ...main na...

Geet: yaad ajaye toh baad me batadena...ab jaake taiyyar hojaiyye..mujhe late nahin hona...!!!

maan goes to get ready...maan gets ready on time...both geet and maan leave for Golden Temple...!!

 on the way geet is so excited dat geet starts speaking as usual...!!!...leaving maan irritated but maan enjoys it at the same time...

Geet: achcha sir...ek baat puchoon...aap bhadak toh nahin jayenge na?

Maan: geet...tum kabse permission lekar baat karne lagi...tum ne toh isme phd haasil ki he...tum toh bina time aur insaan dekhe kahin pe, kabhi bhi baat kardeti ho...pucho geet..mujhe pata hai ki agar main manaa bhi karunga toh bhi tum puchogi...toh might as well pooch hi lo...!!!

Geet: uff ho...aap bhi na...sir aapki ek behen he na...?choti?

Maan: haan...he meri ek choti behen...kyun?

Geet: kahan he woh?

Maan: London me...kyun?

Geet: sir aapki aapke behen se baat nahin hoti he???

Maan: haan...hoti he...ek wahi toh he mere life me...mere liye bohot special he...baat hoti he...har week me ekbaar toh zaroor...

Geet: achcha...sir woh wahan kya karrahi he?

Maan: padhai...wahan London university me padhai karrahi he...bas khatam hojaegi toh woh vapas aajaegi...!!!

Geet: waah!...uska naam kya hai?

Maan: bataya toh tha tumhe ki uska naam mihika hai...pyar se main usse mihu kehta hoon...!!!

Geet:wow...aur woh..

Maan: geet meri behen ki bio data poochna band karo...chalo hum pohochgaye...

geet and maan get down and enter the temple...

Geet: achcha sir...aap kabhi yahan pe aaye hain  kya?

Maan: bachpan main aaya tha geet par uske baad...

Geet:sir kehte hain log yahan jo sachche dil se magte hai woh unhe miljata hai...

Maan looking at geet...

Maan: sach?

Geet: much...sach me..mere Babaji ka dil bohot bara hai...woh sabko sachchi dil se mangi hui har cheez dete hai...har khwahish poori karte hai...

Geet and maan enter the main temple...geet is so excited that she tells inside the temple...

Geet: Babaji...main finally aapse milne chali hi aayi...!!

Geet goes on a silent prayer when maan looks at her and floors for her innocence...

Maan: Babaji...geet aapko bohot manti hai...aap par jo vishwas karti hai usko kabhi mat todiyega...geet ne mujhe kaha tha ki jo kisise pyar karta hai toh usme usko apni duniya nazar aati hai..woh wahi usse apna Bhagwan manleta hai..!...kya geet hi wahi hai...aaj yeh step bhi poori kardijiye...!...mujhe bhi chamatkaar dikhadijiye...!

Geet and maan finish praying...geet and maan move furhter...as they are out of the temple...an aged old man who is a priest there walks arnd and blesses them as a couple...maan is startled and cannot say nethng...while geet defends that they r nt a couple...

Man: Rab ji tumlogo ki jodi salamat rakkhe...

Geet: par papaji ...hum jodi nahi hai...

Man: par saath toh ho na...

Geet: haan lekin...uss tarah se nahin...

Man: oh ji puttar ji main yahan pe bohot saalo se hoon...mujhse kuch nahin chupta...abhi saath main nahin ho lekin baad main zaroor hoge...

Geet: kya papaji aap bhi...aisa kuch nahin he

Maan: papaji...aap yeh..?

Man: puttar...Babaji sab jante hai...kiske liye kaun bana hai...oh ji Bhagwan dekhna tha na tujhe...tera Rab tere paas hai..pehchaanle..!...aankhen band kar...usko kholne ke baad agar yeh kudi tujhe dikhi toh samajhle ki yehi teri duniya hai...!!!

Saying dis he leaves frm dere...geet cnt figure out wat is actually hapng...

Geet: yeh kya kehrahe the sir?...mujhe kuch samajh main nahin aaya...

Maan: arey yeh toh maine Babaji se...inhe kaise??...

arey geet kuch nahin...he turns to the odr side thinking that geet might not be on d odr side..he decides that he shud change directions in order to confirm dat aftr he opens his eyes he sees geet coz he knows geet is standing next to him...

Maan closes his eyes...he recalls all the moments wid geet...and suddenly opens his eyes...he sees Geet...he gets extremely happy as another step gets true...geet takes maan wid her and they explore the place...maan all dis while looks at geet and sings wich is oblivious to geet...

Tu hi toh jannat meri, Tu hi mera junoon
Tu hi to mannat meri, Tu hi rooh ka sukoon
Tu hi aakhion ki thandak, tu hi dil ki hai dastak
Aur kuch na janu mein, bas itna hi jaanu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Sajdhe sar jukhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu

Ohhh hooo ohh'.

Kaisi hai yeh doori, kaisi majboori
Meine nazron se tujhe choo liya
Oh ho ho Kabhi teri khusboo
Kabhi teri baatein
Bin mange yeh jahan pa liya
Tu hi dil ki hai raunak,
Tu hi janmo ki daulat
Aur kuch na janoo
Bas itna hi janoo
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Sajdhe sar jukhta hai
Yaara mein kya karuo
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karuo

Vasdi vasdi vasdi, dil di dil vich vasdi
Nasdi nasdi nasdi, dil ro ve te nasdi
Rab Ne' Bana Di Jodi'..haiii
Vasdi vasdi vasdi, dil di dil vich vasdi
Nasdi nasdi nasdi, dil ro ve te nasdi

Cham cham aaye, mujhe tarsaye
Tera saaya ched ke chumta
Oh ho ho' tu jo muskaye
Tu jo sharmaye
Jaise mera hai khuda jhumta
Tu hi meri hai barkat, tu hi meri ibadat
Aur kuch na janu, bas itna hi janu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Sajdhe sar jukhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu

Vasdi vasdi vasdi, dil di dil vich vasdi
Nasdi nasdi nasdi, dil ro ve te nasdi
Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi.. haiii

geet and maan cum out of the temple where geet asks...

Geet: achcha sir aapne kya manga?

Maan: geet jo mangte hai woh batate nahin he...varna wish poori nahin hoti...!

Maan: achcha tumne kya manga?

Geet: arey abi toh aapne kaha ki nahin batate...toh main kyun bataun?

Maan: nahin mujhe laga ki tumhare pet main toh koi baat nahin ehti toh socha try marloon..!

Geet: very funny!!!..ab chalein...

Geet and maan leave and reach the guest house...it has been maan's best days so in extreme happiness he jumps and falls on the bed saying" I LOVE YOU GEET"...(smiling)...

Edited by swthrtdevisha - 12 years ago

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