CID stories : By CHINNU - Page 3

Originally posted by: CAHAT320

this story is really good........

thank you so much....

Chinnu good work yaar,if this is your first attempt which is so good I'm sure that your next one will be awsome,your concept was different and plot was also nice,just one suggestion if there would've been a little more investigation the story would have been better, nevertheless is it is very good,hoping to read many more from you 👏

Originally posted by: Bhavanab

Chinnu good work yaar,if this is your first attempt which is so good I'm sure that your next one will be awsome,your concept was different and plot was also nice,just one suggestion if there would've been a little more investigation the story would have been better, nevertheless is it is very good,hoping to read many more from you 👏

thanks bhavana....i was waiting for ur suggestion....i will try my best next time....

Edited by chinnu_manikyam - 13 years ago

wow!!! achha poster banaya aapne
it looks fantastic 👏

Originally posted by: dayabhi

wow!!! achha poster banaya aapne
it looks fantastic 👏

thank u so much@dayabi

you killed daya????? and then u will continue later???? another behrupia????? another agonizing wait for daya fans????? and i dunno, ure narration is nice but abhijeet behaving like ds..... well.... gud story but sad too.... and u brought prabha here??? nice move.....

👏 👏 👏..awesome.........👏👏👏👏................
& 😲 😲 😲 😲...............how this happened daya sir pe doubt dal diya 😭 😭 😭 😭.................

hoping daya sir is fine..........😊 😊 😊............ doctor change karo 😆 😆 😆 😆 how can he say that......😆 😆 😆
hope to see daya sir back in next part........  😃😃 😃
continue asap 😃

this story is the best story i have read here.
although incomplete..
 but awesome!!
ps: please stop killing daya..