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Posted: 13 years ago
#191
just read it.  Different. Narration is as always 👏 will comment further after you compete it.
Going good👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great going di,👏👏 please post the next part, as everyone is waiting for that.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great work chinnu di!!👍🏼
take ur own time to compelete the story!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for reading everyone....will post the next part ASAP.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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chinnu... please post what happened to Mithra latter😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊 "He touched his fingers near left cheek and started looking around". The moment I read this I knew it was Abhijeet.😆
 
The description of the scene where Daya was pulling her out of the Qualis etc has been elaborately done. But how the CID caught the actual Mitra lady has been a bit rushed. Maybe you could have added some action there.
As a crime story, attention should be given to the manner in which criminals are caught.
 
Otherwise, the plot is very good.
 
And Happy Birthday again. 🥳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Agree with all points said by Visrom...

But great plot Di... I liked the part 2 very much... Nice job Birthday Girl...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the birthday treat Chinya !!! A very nice story !!! Well elaborated like you always do !! Nice work re !!

I loved your description and plot quite a lot !!! Action was a little less but still a very well written story !!!

Once again Happy Birthday re !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh long awaited part II. chinnu will read & post my views on monday. 😃

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