baat ek raat ki-2 (bheegi bheegi raaton mein pg-4)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Archana and Manav finally happen to meet each other in Khandala (kindly don't ask me how and why) they need to stay there for one night. Manav has lost his wallet. It's already late night and all hotels are packed. Coincidentally they have come to one hotel and only one room is left.

 

(It is at the reception, they see each other)

 

Archana- ji aap

Manav- Archana tum

(music plays..sau saal pehle mujhe tumse pyar tha, jiya bekarar tha, aaj bhi hai aur kal bhi rahega)

Receptionist- aap dono mein se room kaun lena chahega jaldi bolo..gaana baad mein sun lena

Archana- ji inhe de dijiye room

Manav- nahin inhe de dijiye

( for 10 mins they keep saying inhe de dijiye)

Receptionist- aap dono road pe so jao plz..main kisi aur ko kamra de deta hun

Manav- Archana room tum le lo main kahin bi raat gujar lunga

Receptionist- haan madam le lo kamra..yeh kahin bhi so jayenge

(Archana takes the key)

Archana- ji aap mere sath chalo na..aap udhar bed pe so jana aur main zameen pe

(Archana ke itne kehne ke baad music plays..dha sa re sa'aa aaa aaa'.sathiya tune kya kiya)

Receptionist- aap dono plz kamre mein ja ke gaane suno..yahan mera dimaag mat kharab karo..please

(both enter the room)

 

(for 30mins both are silent and BT people play 6 non-stop melodious songs)

 

Archana- kaise hain aap?

Manav-main thik hun. Aur tum?

Archana- main bhi achhi hun. Shravani kaisi hai

Manav- dekho uske bare mein pucha na to is 5th floor se kud ke jaan de dunga

(manav ki nazar archana pe hai. Wo bheegi hui hai and looking absolutely hot with the light pink saree that too drenched in rain)

Manav- archana  yeh 1 saal tumne kaise bitaya

Archana- maine training ki. Pata hai jo education usually 4-5 saal mein log karte hain wo maine 1 saal mein khatam kar li.

Manav-maine tumhe yaad karne ke alawa kuch nahin kiya

Archana- chalo ji jhooth mat bolo' aap ki biwi hai

Manav- nahin maine uske sath kuch nahin kiya

Archana- chhi gande..main to keh rahi thi aap ki family hai..to yaad karne ka time kahan mila hoga aap ko.

Manav- tumne mujhe yaad nahin kiya?

Archana- ab woh sab batane ka kya fayda. Rukiye main change karke aati hun

Manav- nahin aise raho na..kaafi hot lag rahi ho

Archana- chhi..kya keh rahe ho'(sharma jati hai)

Manav- I love you

Archana- hey bhagwan..shravani kya sochegi

Manav- uska naam liya na deewar pe sar patak patak ke jaan de dunga

Archana- dekhiye manav raat kaafi ho chuki hai ab so jate hain

(Archana wears a night gown and looks even spicier (not writing the exact word). Both sleep on the floor on two sides of the bed)

 

(manav can't control himself but pretends to be sleeping)

Archana- aye so gaye kya Manav?

Manav-main soun ya mar jaun tumhe kya?

Archana- naraz ho kya?

Manav- main bhala tumhara hun hi kya jo tum pe narazgi zahir karun?

Archana- yeh puch rahe the na maine aap ko kitna yaad kiya?

Manav- batane ki zaroorat nahin..tum zindegi ke sath aage nikal chuki ho

Archana- nahin suno to. Maine aap ko bas do occasions pe yaad kiya..ek jab baarish ho rahi ho aur doosra jab baarish na ho rahi ho.

 

( dono ke aankhon mein aansoo. Achanak bijli chamak uthti hai aur badal garajne lagte hain')

 

( to be contd')

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Posted: 13 years ago
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The 1st part was nice😆 I hate it when ppl say pehle app pehle app (especially on the dining table I let elders take food 1st so i say koi bhi le lo magar jaldi lo warna khana thanda hoga😆)

Yahan bhi zameen par

The last line by Archana was cute!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely part....
update soon!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
wow...........
 
hillarious.............
 
specially manav's dialouges..................
 
sir patak k jaan de dunga................best
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
😆😆...Manv wants to jump frm the 5th floor if she asks abt shravani..LOL
 
bechara receptionist....full sympathies with him😆😆
 
lovely part SD👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤣Brilliant i have khushi ke aansu😭
 
music plays..sau saal pehle mujhe tumse pyar tha, jiya bekarar tha, aaj bhi hai aur kal bhi rahega❤️
 
i think the best background score!!!!👍🏼
 
So what happens next SD bhai, mile ke bhi yeh dono mil na sakhe tumse na jane kyun!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks..just see what they are going to do next....both are in their late twenties..so will they do what normal people (that too having the relation of ex hubby and wife) are likely to do or  will Mahanta prevail?

wait for the next update to read the real "baat" of the "raat"
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful...well done..👏

looking forward to next part..😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mast SD!!! Waiting for the next part eagerly!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful SD ji 👏
Eagerly waiting for next part, the real 'baat'
When I imagine Manav uttering those dialogues you write, I burst out laughing
I love the Manav you and Nikki portray😆
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