NEW FF: Out Of Darkness..... *Part 2* UPD pg. 3 - Page 4

Is this the same story u wrote in Choti Bahu forum ?

Wow. What an interesting concept. very dark. Please dont make the groom to be dev. I dont want one more bad man in the life of Geet. Geet needs someone who can protect her.

Please continue soon. can't wait to read more. Can you please add me to your PM list if you have one for this story.

hey great part

interesting ff.... i like it can't wait to read more.. please add me the pm list if you have one :) eagerly waitin for the next update !

Hey Angel!

Isn't this the one you'd put up for RaDev in the CB forum? But you never completed it!

Anyways, I can read it here now, again!

Tia

omg
great part
loved it
thanks for the pm

love
pooja

I just caught up with your FF. Whoa! That was awesome and the concept is so unique. I loved it! Do continue soon and please add me to your PM list.

nice nce veery nice... add me in ur pm list plllllllllllllllllsssssssssssssss

Hey there

hey there awesome concept....but i noticed you have not written again for a while...are you not continuing?