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Posted: 20 years ago
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loog kehtay hain kay net hai jhoot ki duniya

likin yahan pay sachay dost bhi hain

kuch hain dosti kay dhagay main bhandhay

to koi dosti main sarfarosh bhi hain

nahin dekha hum nay aik doosray ko

yahan hum sab safeed posh hi hain

likin phir bhi jantay hain ik dosray ko

kya yeh baat kabil-e-nosh nahin hai

aik doosray say kabhi lartay bhi hain

aik doosray ko detay dosh bhi hain

kartay hain apni khushi ka izhaar to

aik dojay kay gham main madhosh bhi hain

yahan pay sub guest bhi hain

to yahan pay sab host bhi hain

yeh hai hamaray liye aik aisi mehfil

kuch madhosh to kuch hosh mein bhi hain

jiss ko ana hai, khula hai darwaza

kyoun kay sab yahan pay josh main hain

guys batana kaisi hai

main nay itni mushkiloon say likhi hai

plz😭

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Bhaskar.T thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#2
Excellent

You deserve applause. Cutie Pie told me earlier about it. It's very good.

👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#3
too goood ana nani....why ru crying 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
#4
excellent poem yaar.....................really deserve applause.............. 👏
itni ahci poem likhoo gi to kaun pasand nahin karey ga...........ek ek baat sahi likhei tum ne ............Yeh forum humari family hai or yaahn ka her member humara family mem 😊
i luv my dis family laotttttttttt 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
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thanx big b
farhina and richa for liking this
i was very much nervous about sending it
but now thanxc 2 u 4 encourging me
yes big b
i pm amna di that she will ask u
bcz iu don't know how will u react but now i m satisfied
i m writing another poem
i will send it in some time
phir app ko jo acchi lagay usay select kar lena
ok
lol
ana
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow excellent poem.. 👏 👏 👏
keep up good work 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#7
Excellent 👏 now you have set the mark, you have to make sure the second one is as good as or better then this one.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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gr88 bhohat he achi lagi 😛 sach yahan par sab kuch hii hota hai yai forums mayri family hai i love u alllllllllllll 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
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ana.........this is fab.fantastic,awesome.....more more more more...................!

bro i told u na...she is awesome! 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#10
Excellent poem.Great going 👏👏
Edited by rajeev the best - 20 years ago

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