it's just superb and i just can't decribe how good it is. looking 4ward 2 hear sum more great poems in da future. keep up the gud wrk!!!!!!!!!applause 😃
thnax guys for liking it......thank u very much meri doosri poem bhi acchi hai yaan nahin plz parh kay comment karna agar acchi na lagay tab bhi kyoun ki i don't mind i think critisism makes a man perfect oops man nahin girl yaar abhi women kehnay jitnay barhay nahin hain