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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

Heya!

I'm Nidhi
but call me Nikki! :)
I love your story's concept
looks really interesting
pm me whenever you update! =)

hi nikki
i will make sure that this ff is interesting
im updating real soon and will pm u😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: daniella05

concept is amazing!!!
waiting eagerly 4 ur update
thanks 4 the pm

thanku
am updating asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: mayurian-artian

hi di

me fiza
luv ur ff soooo much
do add me into p.m list
luv
fiza

hi fiza
will add u for sure😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Part 1
 
N: maa main office ja rahi hun. aaj office main bahut important meeting hain. bye!!!!
NM: arre beta! nashta toh karti ja...dekho is ladki ko kaam ke aage kuch nazar hi nahi aata. kabhi bhi nashta nahi karke jaati. meri bachi phool se kaanta(thorn)     banti ja rahi hain
ND: achi baat hain. nupur mann laga kar kaam karti hain. aur meri beti koi kaanta vaanata nahi hain.
NM: hmmmmmmmm...
 
 
(cut to office)
N: so sir as you can see that our compant is perfectly fit to handle your project
Customer(C): and who will handle the 2nd part of the project?
N: which company is better than Sharma industries?  ( ab bff hain)
 
 
(cut to cabin)
N: RV!!!!! im so happy. we got the deal
RV: obviously babes! wat is there to be surprised about?
N: oh come on RV! aisi koi baat nahi hain.
RV: waise 2nd part kisko mila?
N: duh!!!!!! stupid question
RV: oh! sorry hum toh bhul hi gaye the. (sarcastically) obviously MR. MAYANK SHARMA ko
N: RV (warningly) u know mayank is capable and he deserves it
Mayank enters and Nupur runs and hugs him tightly
 
 
even though nupur and rv luv each other they never express it (achi baat hain πŸ˜†)
 
N: Mayank humme deal mil gayi
M: woh Nupu. that is gr8 news., tumne bahut mehnat ki thi. im so happy for u.
(even though MAYUR r bffs Mayank does not leave any chance to praise Nupur even though he knew ki yeh deal bhi uski Nupur ko hi milegi)
N: toh aaj treat ho jaye!!!!!
M: aaj nahi Nupur. aaj bahut kaam hain. kabhi aur sahi.
N: Mayank tum na bilkul sadu ke sadu hi rahoge. hamesha karele ki tarah kadvi baate karte ho.
 
 
plz chalo aaj itne tym baad mauka mila hain.
M: acha baba! theek hain. hum sab saath chalenge tumhare favourite resturat main. happy?
N: bahut. BY GOD Mayank mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum itni jaldi man jaoge.
M: RV tum bhi hamare saath chalo
N: haan u shud come
RV: hum tumhe kabhi mana kar sakte hain kya babes? (completely ignoring Mayank 😑) after all... ( but shuts up after an 😑 luk from nupsi )
 
 
after dinner at gunurs house samrat proposes to gunjan and they r to be engaged next week. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
while the four r talking
N: arre wah jiju muje nahi pata tha ki aap itne romantic ho.... kya baat hain
S: nupur kabhi hhamare saath raha karo sab pata chal jayega...
N: kash jiju jaise aapne di ko propose kiya waise hi koi mujhe kare
G: kya baat hain nupur aaj toh tu...
Mayanks POV:
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA???????????????????????? aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
abhi jo nupur ne kaha kya woh maine theek se sunna?
woh chahti hain ki usse bhi koi propose kare? mayank beta tera patta ko kut. tu usse kabhi bhi aise propose nahi kar payega. 🀒🀒🀒
beta tujhe kisne kaha tha ki is filmy aur aadhi...nahi puri pagal ladki se pyaar kar? ab kya karega bachu??????????πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
 
Nupurs POV:
kash RV bhi mujhe jald hi propose karde. main apna pyaar kisise nahi chupana nahi chahti. waise jiju kitne romantic hain. RV ko inse lessons lene chahiye.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
 
work for nupur goes on in the office and so does herlove story continues. she is (unfortunately) deeply n madly in love with RV
 
 
 
guys aaj ka safar yahin khatam hota hain.
im waiting for your comments
they are most encouraging and make me write more n more.
with ur encouragement im also starting an SS.
thanku so much guys
 
luv
shruti
PS: plz mijhe koi bata sakta hain ki main pix kaise upload karun?
i was trying to upload pix thats y the update was late😊
 
 
Edited by shruti_99 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
lolvey update
well i am the first oneEdited by adi_gupta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
INDEX
PART 1: pg 7
PM LIST: pg 7
PART 2: pg 20
PART 3: pg 26
PART 4: pg 31Edited by mayur_my_jaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Wow kya mast update thi

Nupur RV se paglo jaise pyar akrti hai aur RV usase par nahi Mayu hai na
And mayank ko pata nahi hai Nupur ki feelings ke bare me na hi nupur ko
 
Shruti please update soon it was sweet update
Edited by arunabehere - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: zarfishan1983

hey very nice concept as i have told u b4 plz cont soon and thx alot for the pm

thanku
im glad u liked it
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

it's nice shruti.........keep it up......i'm waiting for d next.......miss my mayur very much

thanku
i have updated
am pming u
even im missing MAYUR😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: sakura_mayur

Heyyyy shruti
Really nice concept
Do continue soon
N plzzzz add me to ur pm

thnx
will add u