Originally posted by: sana786a
cant wait 2 read ur ff seems intrestingπ
Originally posted by: betty123
ur introductions is very nice......m waiting for ur next update
Originally posted by: kritika4eva
Hey!!I loved the character sketch!!πDo update ASAP!!M waiting!!ππ
Thanks for appriciating it soo much guys, i'm really overwhelmed to hear this :) !! i will start to write my first part now !! π
Nakusha (talking to herself): Looking magnificent girl, my first day at work (with a exiting smile on her face) !! How should I be, what if people at work doesn't like me? No, no (still talking to herself)' They have to like me, because I am accommodating (kind), and a delightful girl who everyone loves ' Mom was right. I should be smiling and try my best. But what if .. NO WHAT IFS!! NO IF NO BUTS ONLY JUTTS!! And laughs alone on her own lame joke ' and says nobody is around when I am funny. Well that's up to them.
And walks out, trying to find a pretty dress or so ' she finds this beautiful salwar kameez and thinks "IAM A PROUD INDIAN GIRL", my first impression should be like that" and takes a pink salwar kameez on. After that she looks again herself in the mirror. Nakusha : IAM ALL READY, - yeah ready ' I should go !! Wish me best of luck & smiles to herself.
In the meanwhile we see a guy, in this big mansion ' (in his room) he has just come out of shower it's none other than OUR DUTTA!! ' he comes out without any shirts on! (GIRLS CONTROL ;) LMAO) water drops on his upper body, wet hair and his towel on neck ' then he takes his towel and wipes his body of with it. Takes his kurta on, and the west obviously.. HE then goes downstairs ' and sits on the dining table, then aayi sahib arrives
Dutta : Aayi, khaane ko de ' maine baahir bhi jana hai kaam ke liye
AS: Dutta haan naukarani ko bulati hai, woh bhi aaj kal kaam chor hogayi hai
Dutta: Jaldi bulao
At that point baji comes
Baji: Bhao main sahich time aaya hai, nashta ker rahe ho na?
Aayi sahab: Haan Haan tu sahi time per aya hai, wait ker main aabhi khana le ker aati hai, patah nahin yeh naukar kahan chaley gaye sab ke sab.
Baji to Dutta : Bhao yeh jo haina media waley ' patah nahin kya anab shanab chaab dete hai, tu ne dekha keh un ne kya likha?
Dutta: Tujhe patah hai na keh mujhe koi fark nahin parta
Baji: Patah hai apun ko, lekin mujhe tu parta hai na, deekh kya likha hai : DUTTA PATIL THE DON HAS NOW KILLED ANOTHER HELPLESS GUY!
Baji: Patah nahin apni angrezi jhaar dei hai, unko kya ptah keh yeh helpless hai? Dil kerta hai keh ek ek waloun ko maar marr ki unki haddi bana loun
Dutta: Chal chup ker our khana kha, humney woh Sunil ke bache ko bhi parkarna hai
Baji: Sunil ka bacha? Bechare uske bache ka kya kasoor?? SMILES BIG because he tried to be funny
Dutta: aghar tu eik our joke mara tu main teri yeh jo bateesi hai ' nikal dega, tu na tu bol paye gha or nahi hans paye gha
Baji looks at him and closes his mouth
hope you guys liked it.. does anybody know how you write the episodes in your title fx. The proposal episode 1 .. ect. ??
luv Ladoo
comment:
p_commentcount