Jab (Fir) Dill Milley: Chapter 8,Page 30-Last Chap - Page 11

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Posted: 15 years ago
ohh armaan ppooor poor guy he still loves ridz n its so obvious and so does ridz ... aww continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow Lovy
just too awesome part
i so really loved it
beautiful
especially the last AR scene
heavenly
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 15 years ago
Woww di!
That was amazing!
I am actually happy that Riddhima broke up with Jay 😆
Thanks or the PM
Love,
Munazza

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Lovyyy 🤗
Amazing Part..
Cont. Soon
Thanxz For The PM 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey lovy,

I know you are furious at me for not utilizing my reserve box of last week. I am so sorry, was just so caught up with exam preparations' but again that's no excuse. So a simple apology with the mortal promise that I will ensure it does not happen again.

For Part 1, I have edited my comment on Page 12 . Do have a look at it.

Now for part 2. Thankyou for the wonderful update, duly on time. It was nice to read this. Both Armaan and Riddhima, are fighting against their true emotions, bottling up everything, but not wanting even a bit of the true feelings to surface, for the fear that they might have to go through a heartbreak once again, for the fear that what the other will think'

It reminds me of the song Heartbreak Warfare, by John Mayer. Especially a line in the song which goes like: ' When you want it to begin, no one really ever wins in a heartbreak warfare.'

Jay, was the predictable Casanova guy, who always wants a pretty arm candy to flaunt to the world, doesn't matter if she dumb or bright' she just has to be pretty. I like the part where Armaan made her realize that it is more important to love the person rather than the physical appearance. On a more personal note, I always think guys like this should be dating make up boxes. LOL

So, Riddhima has broken up'. Armaan is fighting his feelings, but for how long will he be able to carr this faade? And well, rebounds never really last long. How long will the fight before the finally succumb to the callings of their hearts, and the plans of destiny is something to be seen.

A lovely update, and will be waiting for more.

Much Love,

Arushi and Hannah

PS: Thanks for the PM on both the accounts.
PPS: These are Hannah and my combined thoughts, so the comment is solely not mine. This comment is to be taken as our (Hannah and my) comment.
Edited by Arushi. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Beautiful part.
and yikez a break up alreadiii LOL..that was quick
loved the AR scenes, and nicely written:)
but the ending was a shocker..armaan wanting to prove that they're not meant to be? YA RIGHT..lol that wnt be happenin. but really excited for the next part :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
great part
update soon
thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey lovy,
i just hav no words to explain how the part was,
it was so so so so superb...., fantastic, mind blowing etc etc

i hope they soon realise ther original feelings for each other
waiting very much eagerly for ur next part, seriously ur updates r definitely worth a wait for as many days till u do so..

thanks for the pm
cont soon plllsssss

ahh forgot to mention, im really happy abt ridz's break up wid tat moron jay
Edited by swahas - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
😲 Jay is so.......I mean he is kind of an obsessed person
But I loved Armaan n Gazal's convo esp. when Gazal said"Phir to mera chance gaya"😆
Loved the part
Thanks for the PM di,
Take care
Love,
Munazza


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Posted: 15 years ago
*edited*
Chapter 1- Nice intro of all characters. Armaan's GF, Riddhima's BF great! Armaan didnt want to go but when he did AR kept staring. Way to go!
Chapter 2- That marathon walk was so adorable. Both have feelings but dont show. Idiots! Riddhima dumped Jay so soon! That's excellent. And the last scene was electric. Sparks in the dark!
Chapter 3- Gazal-Riddhima, Gazal-Armaan talks were great. Gazal is so funny. I liked the way Riddhima told her classmate:I was one of them! The Jay-Riddhima scene; glad that Armaan butted in which was followed by a shower of AR hugs. Riddhima almost confessed her feelings by asking armaan if he would ever leave her again. He is always there for Riddhima and she knows it. Both want to be with each other and to be away from each other at the same time.
I like the names of the chapters and each of them always leave me with a smile on my face. Thank you for that.
Edited by Ammy4ever - 15 years ago

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