NEW MAYUR SS.JAB CHALI SARD HAWA Last prt on pg 84 - Page 58

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Posted: 15 years ago
yaar
in ff ke zariye hi hum nups aur mayur aur sajan ko yaad rakh payenge toh plzz aisa mat kaho
do cont soon
nice promo
thnx for the pm
sneha 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
*LAST PART*

Mayank closed the door beside them...as soon as mayur enterd the house mayank's cell rang...
M:hello..
S:hello mayuu.
M:haan maa.
S:tum log theek se pahunch gaye na,..mein kab se tumhare phone ka intizaar kar rahi thi...par tum log ho k phone hi nahi kiya,..shayad shimla jate hi apni maa ko bhul gaye..isiliye maine hi phone kardiya.
M:maa yeh aap kaise baatien kar rahi hai...mein aapko phone karne hi wala tha...
S:acha beta nupur kaisi hai.??
M:wo theek hai...subah hi toh aap se mil ke aaye the hum..aap aise puch rahi hai jaise ek mahina hogaya hai?
S:haan tumhara kya bharosa hai isiliye mein ne puch liya...
M:kya zamana aagaya maa ko khud apne bete par vishwaas na raha...
S:ohh apni nautanki band kar...kafi raat hogayi hai ab mein rakhti hun..apna aur meri bahu ka khayal rakhna..
M:haan maa..gud nyt.
S:gud n8...
Nupur who was listening silienty mayu convo on d phone sitting on d couch...mayur disconnect the call n looked at nupur.
N:maa ka phone tha kya.?
M:haan.....
N:acha to ab mujhe.....mayu cut off d sentence.
M:acha baba batadunga....pehle tum yeh sari kaafi heavy hai change kar k aao...uske baad mein tumhe batadunga...
Nupur obeyed mayank's orderd n went to change....


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Nupur came out from the washroom wearing blue night dress...mayu glanced at nupur n saw nupur looking stunning in her blue night dress...water droplets vz thier on her face...he could not controlled himself n proceed towards nupur...nupur saw mayank proceeding towards her...she lowerd her eyes...mayank came forward n made nupur looked into his eyes....he then took her hand in his n kissed....he then kissed her shoulder....mayank's act was bringing tingling sensation in her nerves...she was blushing badly...her cheeks had bcum fully red...mayank noticed her red cheeks...he kissed her cheeks den kissed her whole face uncountably...he then proceed towards lips....b4 it nupur pushed mayank.
N:bahut hogaya..
M:kya?
N:aap ka natak...
M:natak ?tumhe yeh natak lagta hai..?
N:haan
M:nupur mera natak khatam hochuka hai...
N:matlab ?
M:matlab yeh hai k jo mein ek mahine tak karraha tha wo natak tha...yeh natak nahi sach hai mein tumhien dil se pyaar karta hun...
Nupur was in g8 shock she didnt moved an inch..she was just standing looking at mayank...mayank made her to sit on d bed.
M:nupur kya hua..?sach mein tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon...tumhe yaqeen nahi araha hai kya.?
Nupur just shook her head in no...
M:oh k koi baat nahi thodi dair mein tumhe sab samajh mein aayega...
N:3 saal.?
M:mein wahi kehne wala tha...pehle mujhe yeh batao tumhe yeh teen saal k baare mein achanak jaanne ka khayal kaise aaya..?
N:achanak nahi jab suhaani bhabi ghar mein aayi toh wo kuch teen saal keh rahi thi..aur party mein b aap k frdz kehrahe the isiliye..
M:isiliye tum jaanna chahti ho...
N:haan...
M:teen saal pehle mujhe ek ladki se pyaar hogaya tha....
N:toh aap ne uske bajaye mujh se kyun shaadi karli...?nupur asked in a angry tune..
M:bataun kyun nahi ki...
N:haan...
M:kyunki woh ladki koi aur nahi tum hi ho.
N:kya.?
M:haan nupur teen saal pehle hi mujhe tumse pyaar hogaya tha..
N:par yeh sab kab??kaise??
M:tum janna chahti hona toh suno...
Aaj se teen saal pehle jab mein dadu ki marzi se jab shimla transfer hua...toh mein uss wakt yahan par bahut akela mehsus karta tha...mera mann bilkul kaam mein nahi lagta tha...mein jo bhabhi se bilkul kareeb tha jin ko mein apni behen ki tarah maanta tha toh unko mein ne yeh baat bata li k mein shimla mein bahut akela mehsus karta hun...toh unhaun ne mere liye us wakt mere liye ek do saal purani apni shaadi ki cd bhej di jisme unki puri shaadi record thi...bhabi ne shayad mera dil behel jaeye wo cd bhej di thi...ek din mein office se aane k baad woh Cd laga li...toh mehndi ki rasam chal rahi thi...jahan par ek ladki bahut chahel rahi thi..mein uska pura chehra nahi dekh saka shayad zyada logoun ki wajah se...mehndi ki rasam k baad sangeet tha....jisme sirf ladkiyaan ek gaana ga rahi thi...mujh par us cd ka bhi kuch lutf nahi horaha tha mein use off karne hi wala tha k mujh screen par wahi ladki dikhaai di jo kaafi khubsurat aur chulbhuli thi..jo machal machal kar koi gana ga rahi thi....mein us ladki k saat uski aawaz b sun raha tha jo ke sureli thi...ladki k saath uski awaz b mere dil ko chu gayi...uss din k baad mein kaafi badal gaya mein jo pehle kabhi gaane nai suntha tha sunne laga..yeh kahe toh acha rahega k sirf uski aawaz sunne laga joke mein ab apne mbl pe record kar rakhi thi aur tab se mein us ladki ko pasand karne laga...aise hi ek saal guzar gaye...jab mein shimla se kuch dinau k liye ghar aaya toh maa mujh se shaadi ki zid karne lagi par mein us ladki se pyaar karne laga tha jiska mujhe koi ata pta nai tha...aur mere liye ladki dhundne ki zimmedari bhabhi ko sonpdi...mein ne ladki joh qualities batayi woh yeh thi k ladki khubsurat ho uski aawaz mein jaadu ho woh shauk wo chanchal ho balke bilkul wahi ladki ki aadatien...aur phir mein wapis shimla chala aaya...phir 5maheene guzar gaye.. bhabhi mujhe baar baar phone karke kehti k meri choice k mutaabik koi ladki nahi mili...aur ek din bhabhi bahut gusse mein thi aur woh khud shimla pahunch gayi aur mujhse zabardasti karne lagi k mein apar kisi ladki ko pasand karta hun toh batadun...mein batane k liye thoda sharma raha tha aur finally us ladki k baare mein batadiya....
After hearing abt dat girl she started 2 laughed at me..i bcum very angry..bhabhi noticed my anger n stoped laughing...i asked her y she vz laughing..she 2ld me d girl name z nupur n shez her maasi's daughter....n she again started to laughed n this time i bcum more angry.
M:bhabhi usme kya hai k aap itna hans rahi hai.
R:are buddhu mein hansungi nahi toh aur kya karungi ladki apne ghar mein hai aur hum pure shehr dhud rahe the...par tum abhi uss se shadi nahi karsakte..agar tumhe usse shaadi karni hai toh dedh do saal intizaar karna padega.
M:but y?
R:bcoz b4 few days only her mom died n shez totally broken use sambhalne mein time lagega...
M:oh k bhabhi i wil wait..phir dedh saal baad hamari shaadi hogayi...

N:par meri yeh samajh mein nahi aaya k agr aap mujh se itna pyaar karte hoto woh sab rudeness kya tha.
M:woh sab mera plan tha...hamari shaadi k wakht bhabi ne mujhe bataya tha k tum apni mom ki dead k baad kaafi depressed hogayi ho aur tum ab woh pehli jaisi nupur nahi rahi jisse mein ne pyaar karta tha woh ab bilkul khamoosh rehti hai toh mein ne promised kiya tha k mein apni purani nupur ko wapis zarur laaunga..
N:wo kaise?
M:agar mein tumse achi tarah behave karta to tum samajh jati k mein tum par raham kar raha hun...isiliye mein tumse rudely behave karne laga taake tum puri family se ghil mil jao..aur tumhara self confidence wapis aajaye...
N:aur agar mein aapke rudeness ki wajah se aapse nafrat karne lagti toh aap kya karte..?
Mayank moved forward n cupped nupur's face..
M:nupur meri aankhaun mein dekho aur kaho k kiya mein nafrat karne k laayik hun tumhe meri aankhaun mein pyaar ki gehraai nazar nahi aati...
Nupur didnt replied she just buried her head in mayank's arms..mayank also tightened her grip around nupur.
M:waise nupur tumhe meri do shart maanni padegi..pehli yeh hai k aaj k baad tum mujhe aap k bajaye tum keh kar bulaogi.. Aur dusri yeh hai ab mein tumhari woh aawaz sunna chahta hun jiski wajah se mujhe tumse pyaar hua tha..na mat kehna nupur..

N:
Jab sard hawaien chalti hai...
Lehrien mauj manati hai...
Is mausam mein jab tum nazar aate ho...
Ek khulbhuli si dil mein machalti hai...
Mann yeh kehne lagta hai..
K bas tumhari bahaun mein kho jaoon..
Puri dunya se bekhabar hokar sirf tere khayalaun mein kho jaoon..
Dil yeh mera kehta hai..

Ab tum joh mill gaye ho...
Dil yeh mera kehta hai...
Tumhari aagosh mein sar rakh kar..
Mein meethi neend sojaoun....
Aur jab subah ko mein apni aankien kholoon.
Khud ko teri bahaun mein paaun..

Ab tum yeh pucho ge yeh kya fasaana sunaya hai.??
Ye fasaana nai mere dil ki hakikat hai...
K hum tum se mohabbat karte hai..
Hum tumse mohabbat karte hai...

Nupur completed d poem n tryd 2 get up 4m mayanks arms...but mayank pulled her back...nupur was on top of mayank...mayank changed d position n nw he was on top of d nupur.....mayank made love to nupur....mayank kissed her shoulders then necklines then moved towards lips...n looked at nupur 4 approval..nupur lowerd her eyes as to tell mayank as she has acceptd d approval....mayu kissed on nupur's lips..slowly she to responded 2 d kiss...n then d kiss bcum passionate one...n finally both dose off 2 sleep snuggling in each other's arms...both bcum do dil ek jaan...

Haey frndz
Dis is d end of d story....i didnt end it lyk how i wantd 2 end it b4...u all clearly knw d reason..i was not in d mood 2 update..bv then i rememberd my promise so updated it....n i dnt knw 2 write romantic scenes but still i tryd to write...i hope u wil lykd d ending....thanx alot who had supportd me througov d whole story..thanx alot 2 all my regular reader n thanx 2 every1 who have pressed like tab..
I want 2 knw do u lykd d update or not so plzz do comments.sorry 4 d typo mystke

Luv
*kulsum*

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Finally mayank's secret out... Aww he loved her so much...mayank's such a sweetheart here...

Iloved the ending kulsum..it cheered me up n brought a smile on my face..thank you..

Nupur's poem was wonderful...
And the ending was also very very nice..loved it..

I'll miss this ss...

Do write more on mayur...

Love,
Akansha..

P.s. Yipee i m first..*party*
Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
finely a nice mayur ss end but hope this is not the last one
keep writing on mayur on telivision our mayur get seprated but in our heart the remain together and unbreakable
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Posted: 15 years ago

awesome ending dear...loved it...i know the situation prevailing....in that situation also u updated it..thanx a ton dear..pls do write more.........

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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing update sis i was so sad 2day coz they kill our nups but u cheered me up sis 🤗
thanks 4 thet
this SS was wonderful n enjoyed each part while reading it 😛
the ending was mindblowing hun
i hope ur gonna start onther ff of mayur
thanks once again 4 given us such beautiful story 2 read n pme 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
Kulsum.. that was a lovely update... and thnx for keeping the promise...
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Posted: 15 years ago
tht was awesome last part
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Posted: 15 years ago
Firstly, thanx for updating.. I was not expecting any updates in the situation that we all are now... So, your update is a pleasant surprise....

Back to the update, Awesome update... You have written very nicely... Finally, the secret is out... Loved everything in this update....

Keep writing more... Would love to read your stories...

- Pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey Kulsum,

Nice ending... finally the secret is out, after all that wait. 😆 Mayank is so sweet... love at first sight and he searched for her and was determined to marry her only and wait so long for her also, how cute. 👍🏼
Thank God that Nupur didn't end up hating him but understood his reasons for doing what he did... nice ending too.. they are finally together.. enjoyed it a lot. 😊
I know my comment is shorter than usual but like u said the mood is not right at the moment. 😔
Anyways this was a great FF, sad that its ended but now plz u have to start another one... as it is we are all being deprived of seeing Mayur as a happy couple in MJHT coz of those bloody CVs but u can bring a smile to our faces na? 😊Take care. 🤗

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