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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: annwesha kayal
great update !!

waiting for next part..

thanks for ur pm.

yeah sure ..

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

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Posted: 15 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: Ayesha103
brillllliant!glad prem found out sooooooooooo happy update asapp! sorry 4 nt commenting on last update plz 4giv me had a wedding 2 attend!:Dx

its ok.....
i noe dat everyone r happy n wil try to maintain it..

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

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Posted: 15 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: resham12345
Excellent FF. Just read the whole thing. Please add me to the pm list.

yeah sure wil add u...
thx for commentin.

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

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Posted: 15 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: 0711rokxoxo
YAY!! I m soo happy Prem knows everything
but waiting for ur big update

yeh sahil bhi na end mein pani pher diya hehehe

why so much mystry aaiiiggghh

heheh

thnks for the pm

same here....
i noe...i hv much of mystry wht to do...

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

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Posted: 15 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: amu142
Am waiting to see what Sahil is upto!

Prem shud repent and ask for forgiveness frm Heer...but first of all he shud teach his mother n sister a lesson

thnkin for it....thx yar for the suggestion...

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Kavita

@kavitanaina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#446

Awesome. Today itself I started and read from the beginning till last. Please update soon.

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

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Posted: 15 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: kavitanaina
Awesome. Today itself I started and read from the beginning till last. Please update soon.

yeah sure...doin it...

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

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Posted: 15 years ago

#448

udatin...by 4.30pm...sry for delay...

Edited by fireblaze_divya - 15 years ago

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

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Posted: 15 years ago

#449

chapter 22

heer follows sahil to garden...
heer:-wht do u mean by dat sahil??
sahil:-mom dad ko sab pata chal gaya....dadi aur mami ke bare mein...woh aapke peche hospital aaye the...
heer:-kya??
sahil:-yes..n may be he is cumin here now...
heer:-wht???
sahil:-yes but its not so easy.....
heer:-kya??
sahil:-i m not gonna 4give dad so fast u better remember dat..mom..sayin this he goes to his room..
heer goes n tells everyone wht sahil bout prem comin..all r happy...
preet:-bhabhi mein chalta hu office jaana hai...sayin this he leaves..
aarav:-mom mujhe frnd ke ghar jaana hai..plz...wil u drop me??
meher:-haan chalo...di mein ise chod ke aati hu...sayin they all leave
now only heer sahil n chahat were at home..
sahil n chahat r in livin room watchin TV...
heer in bedroom...cleanin room n thnkin bout prem...
chahat is jumpin...while watchin cartoon....while sahil is continuoesly playin wid his sling..
chahat:-bhai kya kar rahe ho?
sahil:-kuch nahi sling nikal raha hu...kyu tujhe kuch problem hai kya???
chahat:-mama.........she shouts..heer cums hearin chahat shoutin..
heer:-kya hai chahat bilkul aapne papa pe gayi ho..
chahat:-mama bhai sling nikal raha hai...
heer:-sahil....kya kar rahe ho??..mein kaha na..tum aaisa kuch bhi nahi karonge..phir??
sahil:-par mom haath dard hota hai pura din aaisa rak ke..
heer:-yeh tumhe aapna haath thodne se phele sochna chaiye tha na...sayin this heer goes to her room...for other works...
sahil:-kya hai..mom kyu bataya??
chahat:-kya hai na...agar aap sling nikaloge...to phir aap mujhe mar sakte ho na...abhi to aapka haath banda hai na...sayin this chahat runs..
sahil:-ruk...today i wil surely kill u..
chahat:-phele pakdo to sahi...
sahil runs behind chahat...
chahat:-waise bhai....aap mujhe maroge kaise???
sahil:-abhi dekha tha hu...
chahat's leg..gets stuck in the carpet n falls on the couch...
sahil:-abhi kya karegi..meri pyaari behena aaj mein tujhe nahi chodunga...sayin this sahil removes his sling n catches chahat's hand....
sahil:-ab mein nahi chundunga....today i wil surely kill u.....mom ko meri complain karti hai..ruk abhi bata hu...
prem who is standin at the door..sees his children fightin sweetly...
chahat sees prem
chahat:-bhai ruko...
sahil:-abhi nahi aaj tu meri haath se maregi..
chahat:-bhai...papa...points towards the door...
sahil turns n sees his dad..
chahat quickly runs....n hugs her dad n cries...
chahat:-papa aap hume chod ke kyu chale gaye??
prem:-i m sorry beta...
chahat:-bhai muje bhout marta hai...smirks at sahil..
sahil:-ruk abhi bata ta hu...sayin this he runs behind her..chahat runs into her room n closes the door...sahil bangs his head on the door...sahil starts bangin the door
sahil:-open the door dam it...today surely i wil kill my dear sis...open the door
chahat frm inside:-no ways mere pyaare bhai...
hearin heer cums n sees prem standin...n seein sumthin...see she wht he is seein in she is shocked to see sahil n chahat fightin..
heer then again sees prem...who has a smile on his face n n'joyin the scenes...
heer shouts:-sahil......
sahil turns bck...n prem comes to sense...
heer:-y the heck did u remove ur sling???
sahil:-mom....he picks up his slings n runs to the play room..
chahat who sees dis say:-bechara bhai.....superman ban raha tha....aur kya ban gaya...
heer:-kya kaha tune chahat??
chahat:-kuch nahi n closes the door..
heer:-kya baap ho tum..bache ko marte hue dekh rahe ho??
chahat bilkul tum par gayi hai...aacha hai sahil mer pe gaya hai...
prem:-par ab mein kya kiya??
heer:-kuch nahi..sayin this see goes to her room..prem follows her...
prem enter the room....
heer:-ab kya hai prem?tum yaha kyu aaye ho??
prem:-heer mujhe tum se baat karni hai...
heer:-kya hai prem??
prem makes heer turn...n looks into heer eyes..
prem:-i m sorry heer meine tumhare pe vishwas nahi kiya..
heer:-usmein kya badi baat hai??...woh tum hamesha karte ho..
prem:-heer plz mujhe maaf kardo.....mein shaadi karna socha..tumhe bhout duk diya....
heer:-mujhe malum hai...hai ki tum mujhe pasand nahi karte..
prem:-nahi heer...mein tum se bhout pyaar karta hu...mein kisi aur se nahi karta...woh mujhe laga ki tumhne abortion karvaya isiliye mein bhout gusa aaya..aur..
before he cud complete heer gave prem a tight slap...
heer:-mein aapne bache ko mar dalungi???...tum aaisa bhi kaisa soch sakte ho....n starts sobbin...sahil humesha sahi kheta ki...mujhe tum par vishwas nahi karna chaiye..
prem:-plz heer woh baat mujhe veera ne bataya tha..plz heer mujhe maaf kardo..
heer:-prem aaj tak tum ne mere baat kabhi nahi suni par veera ne kaha aur tum ne maan liya kaise prem??
prem:-mujhe malum mere se galti hui hai...plz heer..
before he cud completed sahil shouts.:-aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
prem hears the sound n runs outside to see wht happened...heer also cums..
sahil in hall shoutin....n chahat beatin him..
sahil:-aare sorry..plz chahat mere haath mein lagi hai..
chahat:-aaj mein nahi chodungi...
heer:-chahat....
chahat:-mama...woh...
heer:-sahil ko lagi hai na...pagal ho tum aapne bhai ko mara rahi ho woh phele se us lagi hai...
sahil:-mom leave it.....aap chahat ko kuch maat kaho...usne kuch nahi kiya..
heer:-par sahil woh tujhe...
sahil:-woh meri behen mom.....nothin wil happen....
heer:-sahil tum...
sahil:-its nothin mom...sayin this he leaves n chahat starts cryin n hugs prem..
chahat:-papa plz mujhe le chalo...mama mujhe bhout daat thi hai..
prem:-haan beta...par mama...aapke aache ke liye hi daat thi hai na.....abhi roona band karo...aur chalo...jaa ke bhaiya ko sorry bol do...
chahat:-tik hai papa....sayin this she goes to sahil's room....
prem:-heer plz...meri baat to suno..
heer:-prem mein abhi tumhari koi baat nahi suna chahati hu..plz tum yaha se chale jaao....
prem:-tik hai heer..sayin this prem leaves...

heer in her room cryin sittin on the bed...
sahil cums n sees heer cryin..he goes n wipes her tears..
heer:-sahil i m...
sahil:-mom u sud be...aapne bhout badi galti ki dad ko maaf na karke...
heer shocked:-sahil tu,,,,,
sahil:-haan mom i hv 4given dad bcoz...he has done no mistake.....
heer:-par sahil tu nahi jaanta..
sahil:-mom mujhe sab malum hai...he tells everythin....n says mom there is no mistake of dad...that's y i told u.....but u....
for the first time sahil had tears in his eyes..
sahil:-mom u took away my dad...sayin this he went..
heer shocked...
heer:-mujhe prem se maafi mangni padegi...i m sorry prem.....yeh mein kya kardiya????aaj phele bar sahil ke akh mein aasoo....yeh sab meri yaha se hua hai...
heer gets up....takes her cell n calls prem but he is not answerin....plz prem mujhe maaf kardo...mera phone uthao...
heer decides to call preet..
preet:-haan bhabhi..
heer:-preet prem hai??
preet nahi bhaiya office nahi aaye hai...
heer:-tik hai n hungs up the fone..
heer thnkin:-prem plz....mera fone utha...mujhe bhout dar lag raha hai.....

PRECAP:-Y IS PREM NOT PICKIN UP THE FONE??IS HE ANGRY ON HEER OR SUM OTHER REASON??

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Edited by fireblaze_divya - 15 years ago