~~"MILAN"~~-part 25 and on pg120[28th may]

CHAPTER 1



Prem was standing near the window and staring at the moon thinking about what had happen some hours ago.He was married,PREM JUNEJA was married and now he was waiting for his beautiful wife HEER PREM JUNEJA.

His father LALIT JUNEJA had arranged this marriage a month ago with BALRAJ MAAN"S only daughter HEER MAAN.His father had showed him her photo.When he saw her,he couldn't take his eyes of f her."She was beautiful,the most beautiful girl he had ever seen"he thought.
Later on everything happened so soon and he was not able to meet her or see her.He had only seen her twice,first time,her photo and second time when he went to her house ,that's it .After that he was not allowed to see her because of the rasams.

PREMEER'S ROOM
PREM:"Now the time has come and I can see her yeeessssss………par ye meri donon behenein kahaan leke chalegaye usse ,aayi kyun nahi abhi thak"he was talking to the moon.

Kulraj and Veera had taken Heer to give some tips to her and to tell some things about Prem as they both(premeer) dint get time to know more about each other .Now they were taking Heer towards Prems's room.
Kulraj:"thumhe sab yaad hai na Heer" Heer dint reply
Veera:"batayiye na bhabi"Heer just nodded.
Both Veera and Kulraj chuckled looking at her and thinking that she was shy.

They reached Prem's room.They opened the door for Heer and she enterd in with a glass of milk as Prem had the habit of drinking milk every night without fail and closed the door behind her.
Kulraj and Veera had left,and they went and joined the other family members who were still chatting in late night.

PREMEER"S ROOM
Prem heard the door opening and he turned to look at his princess.She was looking really very beautiful in her red marriage dress with all the jewellery on her which were quiet heavy,those beautiful eyes and her luscious and pink lips........and now he couldn't control himself from touching her and feeling her.

Heer also looked at him and she thought"he is so handsome and cute and everything was perfect.His
eyes was the main thing which weakened her.She could feel his gaze on her.But she ignored it.      

Heer moved forward and kept the glass of milk on the side table
Heer:Prem.....dhood(milk)
telling this she walked towards her suitcase.

Prem was so engrossed in drinking her beauty that he dint notice the milk kept on the table for few seconds.

Heer went towards her suitcase and took out her night suit and walked into the bathroom without even looking at him.
This gave a little pain to Prem.
but thought
Prem(to himself):"thak gayi hogi,aur woh shaadi ki jhoda aur gehene kitne bhaari honge isiliye change karne gayi hogi.Mein bhi change karleta hoon."telling this he smiled to himself and changed to a simlpe night suit of his.

Heer came out wearing her night suit.
Prem was standing near the window waiting for her.
HEER:"Prem....mujhe thumse kuch baath karni hai"she sounded rude and looked that side and this side without meeting his gaze
Prem turned towards her hearing her voice which was rude and thinking whats wrong....
Prem:bathao Heer kya baat hai???
Heer:mujhe DIVORCE chaahiye........


THATS IT GUYS....THIS IS MY FIRST FF...... HOPE U ALL LIKE IT
PLEASE DO COMMENT AND PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON😊Edited by blufate.14 - 13 years ago

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                                    CHARACTER SKETCH

JUNEJAS
LALIT JUNEJA & GAYATRI JUNEJA:They are same as in the show.Really sweet and like to see their children's happiness.They are having 4 children.They along with their family stay in Ludhiana,they like this place and dont like to move to any other place.They are one of the richest people in the country.They have their hotels all over India.

Kulraj Malhotra:Same as in the show.She is the eldest of the siblings.She is married to Kiran Malhotra,they live in Canada.

Prem Juneja:Same as in the show.He will never tell no to his parents.He is perfect in all ways.He looks after the business in Mumbai,he helped his father to take their hotel business to gr8 heights.He is a guy about whom every girl dreams.

Preet Juneja:Same as in the show.The same sharaarti boy.

Veera Juneja:She is unlike the Veera in the show.She is really sweet.



MAAN's
Balraaj Maan:He is also having his own Hotel in Ludhiana.He is also a rich man but not as rich as the Junejas.He lost his wife after his daughter's birth.He loves his daughter a lot but cant give his time to her because of his work.


Heer Maan(now Juneja):She is the only daughter of Balraaj.She is a kind hearted girl but she is a bit short tempered.She lost her mother and was brought up by Balraaj.She still felt that lonliness,especially when her father went out of station for work.


HIII.... i purposely wrote character sketch instead of the next chapter😆 Edited by blufate.14 - 14 years ago

Heer ki abhi shaadi hui hai Prem se and she wants divorce.....Nahi

nice update.😊

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INDEX                                                        
part 1-pg1
character sketch-pg1
part 2-page 4
part 3-pg 7
part 4-pg 10
part 5-pg 12
part 6-pg 14
part 7-pg 17
part 8-pg 20
part 9-pg 26
part 10-pg 31
part 11-pg 36
part 12-pg 42
part 13-pg 46
part 14-pg 51
part 15-pg 57
part 16-pg 66
part 17-pg 72
part 18-pg 77
part 19-pg 86
part 20-pg 91
part 21-pg 98
part 22-pg 104
part 23-pg 110
part 24-pg 116
part 25-pg 120Edited by blufate.14 - 13 years ago

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