Jaan's OS Updated May 11 Second Time - Page 7

YAY!! Nice surprise! But Dil Manage more, you have gained protection for tonight only! 😆

Hehehe forgot my comment

Loved it! Aww Sid was so good he done the right thing he became a professional😛, cont soon! That means tommorow or tonight for a morning surprise for me! 😆
Edited by nikita_88 - 14 years ago

2nd update - loved it Sid avoiding her, and that looking at her with nothing in his eyes

Ridz wouldnt be able to bear it now Edited by Lennie - 14 years ago

~V and Nikita: Thanks!
~Lennie: I think that given what Sid will see in the precap it is a realistic reaction. I think that he will go all numb

Jaan!🤗 Just read both OS's..i absolutely loved the first update...it was beautifully written and you did an amazingg job of showing the conflict going on in Ridz mind and that it wasn't easy for her to choose Sid...but shes married now and he's always supported her and wanted to see her happy! She still cares for Armaan but its not the same now because she now loves Sid!

~Leena: Thank you!
On the first one, I tried to make it so that you could get all of the characters points of view. I'm glad that came out clearly. For Riddhima's deciding moments it's supposed to be like flashbacks. So I am glad that worked too!
For the second one, I want to try to stay ahead of the actual story. Because then something different happens and I get all discouraged.

Wow....I loved today's update completely. I really want Sid to do that if Ridz keeps being confuse like right now. Jaan: great post sweetie. Keep it up.

Awesome post.👍🏼  I love reading SR One shotz.😳

The chart lay limply on her outstretched arm. Tia tugged on Riddhima's sleeve. "Didi. Kya Hua?"

"Huh? Kuch nahin Beta...deko tumhare charts dekhte hain"

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Sid finished up on his patient, Amraan was at the next bed. Both of the kids were sleeping and both Sid and Armaan, with their backs to each other, were writing in their charts. Chotu walked in. He came up to Sid, and said quietly. "Saab aapke liye fax aaya hain" He handed over a folder. "Maine is me dal diye"

"Thanks chotu." He patted him on the shoulder, sadly....as a way to say goodby. Chotu nodded. "Ji Saab."

Sid held out his hand, chotu looked up at him in wonder. "Jo tum in bacho ke liye karte ho Chotu...koi doctor nahin kar sakta hai..hamesha yaad rakhna." Chotu shook Sids hand with a smile, but his eyes were glistening.

"Ji, Sid Bhaiya".

Sid smiled. Armaan was watching this exchange, frowning. Kya ho raha hai? Sid…aise kyun baat kar raha hai?

Sid walked over to the file cabinet opened it and started going through it. Armaan started "Sid…"

Sid turned around. "Yes Dr. Armaan." With no attitude, no anger, just a calm level voice. Armaan eyes widened a bit, with surprise. Ise kya hua?

"Kuch nahin." Armaan said. What in the world?

Sid turned around, placed the chart in and walked out.

Edited by Jaan730 - 14 years ago

Jaan you laloo go and change the number on to page 9 instead of page ten and secondly Cont soon!

This does not even consist as an update it isn't even a page long on word 😆

But interesting, Armaan and Sid in the same tent can not wait to see what happens next!

More!!!!!!!!!!!!  lol