prida OS:come fall in love all over again

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hi guys i was missing lnmdj today like hell. so wrote this one shot. this is my first OS so plz bear my mistakes. here is it hope you guys will enjoy it.

                COME FALL IN LOVE ALL OVER AGAIN

( it is after the scene when pri comes home and damini cooks food for him but he does not eats and goes upstairs where he sits on the swing and cries and she cries on the table)

After crying on the swing he goes in his room to check what is she doing? But when he enters their room he sees damini nowhere and becomes tensed. Woh kahan hai? Abhi tak kamre main kyun nahin ayi? he thinks and goes downstairs. There he sees her on the table. Her head was on the table and she had gone to sleep while crying. He goes towards her and looks at her. Her face was sad and there were tear tracks down her checks. He could not bear her in this condition his heart almost stopped beating on the thought that his dear wife whom he loved most in the world is in this condition only because of him. She had trusted him and tried all possible tricks to make him happy, to make this marriage successful, but what is he going to do with her tomorrow? he is gone break the trust of Damini Gujral Saxena tomorrow. He is gonna break his heart tomorrow. He didn't wanted to think what will happen tomorrow he just wanted to be with her tonight but again he had broken her heart, no he had broken his own heart she was his heart and he had broken his own heart again. Tears start to run down his cheeks. He shurgged of all these thoughts and picked her up. He carried her into their room and gently places her on the bed careful not to wake her up. He again looked at her she was sad but the moonlight was falling on her face making it glow. She was sad but still looked like Greek goddess. He wipes her tears and takes of her shoes and gives a kiss on her forehead. He turns on the A.C and gives a blanket to her. He then goes downstairs and warms up the food. She had made food first time and for him just because she he had asked her to cook food, just because she loved him, just because she wanted to make him happy. She had made it for him and there was no way he was not gonna eat it. He ate the food, some items were good and some were bad but he ate all of them. It was the best food he ever tasted and he could ever taste. He then goes upstairs and sleeps beside her grabbing her by her waist pulling her closer and hugging her tightly not thinking what will happen tomorrow just wanting to spend this night, this moment with her.

He wakes up in the morning and looks at his lovely wife sleeping beside her. He gives a kiss on her forehead and says," mjhe maaf kar do damini. umeed hai tum meri majburi ko samjho gi aur humare is rishte ko ek mauqa do gi." He then goes in the bathroom freshen up and leaves for office with POA file and giving one last look to his dearest wife sleeping on the bed.

There damini wakes up at 9pm and sees that pri is not there and she is on the bed. She thinks about what happened last night and how she slept on the table but now she was on the bed. So he did came and carried her to her room. But then again if he cared for her then why didn't he ate the food which she cooked for him. If he already ate dinner then he could at least taste the food for her. She thought that a long shower may help her relax so she goes into her bathroom and returns after a long bath. She was feeling much better now. She was going to take out her formal dress when she remembered that he didn't wanted her to work. She put the dress back saying if this makes u happy then why not try one last time. May be then I will understand you or your changed behaviour towards me. She takes out a shlawar suite changes and goes into roshni's room. There avni was also present and was cutting some apples. She looked towards damini and said," oh di acha hua ap a gai dekho na humari princess breakfast nahin kar rahi hai." Damini comes in and sits beside roshni saying," hummmm toh humari princess kisi se naraz hai." Rosh nods in agreement and avni also comes beside her saying," toh woh kaun hai." Rosh says," varun."  Damini and avni both start to look here and there thinking about pri and sam. Avni replies," di aj kal sameer bhi bohat ajeeb behave karta hai." Damini does not answer and starts to think about pri's behaviour towards her now a days. Avni and roshni both hug her and say," what happened di?" she replies," nothing I... just ....  woh rosh ne breakfast nahin kiya na main ne bhi nahin kiya mere saath toh karo gi na." She nods in agreement and then damz feed rosh an slice of apple and then rosh feeds her the next slice while avni cut apples for them. Then dammini  asks," where is muma." Avni replies," di woh toh abhi abhi office ke liye chali gain. Aj thora late ho gain."

There at the office, in pri's cabin the saxena brothers were waiting for ella, they had arranged a press confress so that they can expose ella in front of whole world. Ella comes in the office goes to attend the random press conference when she enters the room sam says ,"oh welcome ella gujral we were waiting for you to come."

There at home girls get bored so they turn on the tv and while surfing they stop at the news channel and their jaws drop seeing what is happening on the TV screen.

Back at office pri says." ap ne humare papa pe galat ilzam lagaya aur aj hum ne apna badla le liya."

Sam: yeh sab ap ki apni galtiyon ka natija hai

Pri: agar apne humare papa ko na mara hota toh aj ap ko yeh din na dekhna parta.

Ella puts her one hand on her heart and takes support from the wall with her other hand. She looks at them with tears in her eyes and starts to take deep breaths. The boys tell everything about their plan and how ella killed their father. Then without answering any questions they let the media out of the office and then asked Mr Mehta to take ella to the hospital.

There the girls were shocked sticked to their positions unable to move or think anything, when damini breaks the silence and says," pri aisa nahin kar sakta" and runs out of the room. Avni and rosh also run behind her they sit in the car and she starts to drive the car like a maniac, breaking every signal, every traffic rule with tears in her eyes daring not to let them fall.

In the office pri was sitting in his cabin with his head in his hands and varun was also sitting on the chair while sameer was pacing in the room finally sam said," bhai hum ella ko marna nahin cahte the phir yeh sab..." pri replies," han hum toh sirf unhen torna cahte the magar un ko marna humare plan main nahin tha." Varun says," bhaiya agar ella gujral ko kuch ho gaya toh woh humain kabhi maaf nahin Karen gi' pri says," main janta hon magar humein apne pyar pe bharoosa rakhna hoga." He then thinks about damini, how will he tell her? how will he make her understand that he loves her and what he didn't wanted anything to happen to ella, his thoughts were disturbed when the girls stormed into the cabin and damz shouted," prithvi mama kahan hain." He says," damini tum yahan"

Sam: avni..

Avni: kya avni han tum sirf awab do ke mam kahan hain jai ya sameer

Pri: tum logon ko pata chal gaya

Damz: humein hi nahin puri duniya ko pata chal gaya tumhare bare main mr prithvi saxena.

Var: rosh meri ba...

Rosh: shutup varun and tell me where is my mama she shouts

Sam: hospital main

Avni says," hospital" and runs out of the cabin. Rosh also runs behind her and damini says," agar meri mama ko kuch hua toh main tum logon ko zinda nahin choron gi" the tears which she had been controlling for so long now found their way down her cheeks and starts to flow while she also ran behind them. The boys stood rooted to the spot watching their hearts broke in front of them. Damini came out of the office and saw avni on the ground while roshni was cupping her face saying," diii." Damini runs towards them and rosh says," di avni di gir gayi her ankle twisted and is swelling now." Damini looks at her ankle and they help her in getting up. When the three stood up they saw inder in front of them. Damini says," tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?"

Inder: bas tumhara cehra dekhe aya tha

Avni: dafa ho jao yahan se

Inder: relaxe avni. Aur tum damini hahahaha is is prithvi ke liye tumne mujhe chora the na aj dekho tumhare is prithvi ne tumhein mujh se bhi bara dhoka de diya.

They try to walk beside him but inder grabs damini's arm and says," ek minute damini. Main kal hi jail se wapas aya aur aj yeh tamashe hahaha waise abhi mera badla toh baki hai" and starts to drag her but she kicks him right between the legs and runs a little further when inder again garbs her and his men roshni and avni. He takes damini with her and when his car disappears his men leave avni and roshni.

Rosh: di humein jeej se madad mangni cahiye

Avni: nahin hum unse mada nahin mange gein

Rosh: di par damini di..

Avni: damini di ko hum khud dhond len gay

Rosh: par kese

Avni grabs her from her shoulders shaking her badly saying: tumhein samajh main nahin atta hai. Woh di se pyar nahin karte yeh sab sirf ek dhoka tha dhoka

Just then her phone rungs and she picks it up caller says," main dr rahul bol raha ho. Ella ji ko heart attack aya hai unka operation karna pare ga humein kuch papers pe sign karwane hain ap plz jaldi city hospital a jayein." She say," heart attack.... ap operation start karein main abhi atti hon." She then turns towards rosh and says," main hospital ja rahi hon tum jeej ko batao." Rosh nods in agreement and runs back inside the office while avni takes the car and leaves for the hospital.

There rosh runs inside and on the way hits into a pillar. Blood starts to come out from her head but she still gets up and runs to pri's cabin there she opens the door and says," jeej." Everyone come towards her and pri cuppes her face asking," what happened roshni?" She replies, "woh damini di" pri," kya hua damini ko." Rosh says," woh di... di." Sam, "kya hua bhabhi ko." Pri shakes her and asks," what happened to damini" and rosh replies," woh inder di ko le gaya." Sam," inder woh kahan se a gay woh toh jail main tha." Rosh," han woh kal hi chout gaya aura b woh di se badla lena cahta hai woh di ko le gaya jeej plz di ko bacha lo plz." Pri ran outsides and takes his car and goes in direction which rosh had told him there sam asks about avni while varun gives her a glass of water as soon as she hears avni's name she remembers about her mother and stands up saying," mujhe mama ke pass jana hai. Unhen unhen hear....t a..tt...a..ck aya ttt...hha" and she faints varun catches her and sam says," main avni ke pass jar aha hon."

Pri was driving madly when his phone rang, it was inder he picks it up and inder says," sari property mere nam kar do aur apni is biwi ko bacha lo." Then he hears someone shouting it was damini. pri says," agar damini ko kuch hua....." Inder replies," kuch nahin hoga agar tum caho." Damini shouts "decent hotel" from behind and inder puts his hand on the phone but it was too late pri already heard the name of the hotel and then he heard a slapping sound he shouts," inder" and he replies," yar yeh tumhari biwi bohat bolti hai pata nahin tum kese bardasht karte the. Magar tum toh mere se bhi zayada smart nikle biwi ke saath maze bhu liye aur POA bhi hahah" pri shouts," inder" and he says, "angrily chilao maat aur agle do ghante ke ander ander property mere nam karo warna....." And then he cuts the line while pri goes towards decent hotel. There inder and damini reach decent hotel and he drags her inside room 402. He throws her on the bed and locks the room. Pri was on his way when his heart said something is wrong and he became restless he drove as fast as he could and reached the hotel there damini tries to hit him but comes on top of her and pins her with bed. Then she shouts," help" and he slaps her. pri asks the receptionist about the room in which inder is staying but she refuses to tell he gives her some money and she tells him room no 402. He rushes towards the room. There damini hits inder with a vase and manages to get up from the bed. She reaches the door but just then inder grabs her arm and pushes her, she hits into the wall and her head starts bleeding. He then again grabs her arm and she slaps him him from her other arm. He becomes very aggressive and throws her on the bed. He gets on top of her and grabs both of her hands with his hands he was about to kiss her when pri breaks the door and grabs inder from his hair pulls him back and gives him some nice punches into face. Inder's nose starts bleeding and he hits him back but pri was to aggressive and hits him finally inder faints and prithvi looks at damini who was now standing scared, depressed, sad and as soon as pri turns towards her he rushes and hugs him tightly and starts to cry. He consols her by saying," damini usne tumhein haath toh nahin lagaya?" Damini replies, while crying" main dar gait hi prithvi, main tumhare elawa kisi aur admi ko apne apko haath lagane nahin de sakthi." The moment those words came out of her mouth his heart popped out and a new ray of hope appeared but just then she realized what she said and moves back. She thinks about what happened today and faints. He catches her takes her to the hospital in which ella was admit and avni and sam were also present.

When avni sees damini her heart stopped beating, first her mother and then damini what is happening with them. She shouts at sam and pri in frustration saying some word which she and they both will regret throughout their life. She was sitting on the chair when doc came and said," ela ji ka operation hogaya hai. But I am sorry I don't think she will survive." She has got only some hours left. She stood up and grabbed the doc's collar shouting," what do u mean meri mama ke pass time nahin hai. Tum log bewakoof ho. tum logon ko kuch nahin atta hai. Main apni mama ko bacaon gi main bachaon gi unhen." Then sam comes and grabs her by her shoulders and she leaves the doc. She collapses on the ground and sam also sits with her and she starts crying saying, "mama ko bacha lo sameer plz." Pri and sam also start crying and just then roshni comes with varun. She runs towards avni and avni leaves sam and hugs roshni. They both start crying and the doc again comes saying," damini ji ko hosh a gaya hai." They both go into her room and tell her about ella she also starts to cry and they hug each other. Outside all three brothers feel miserable and consider themselves responsible for girls condition. Then the doc comes and says," ella ji ap sab ko bula rahi hain."

They all go into her room and the girls hug her while the boys stand in front of her looking downwards. Ella starts she says that," main ne balraj ko nahin mara. Us raat jo khun hua tha woh inder ne kiya tha. Main ne apni reputation ka khayal rakhte hue ek galat bayan de diya jis ki wajha se tum logon ke papa ko itna kuch sehna para. Unki maut ke bad main ne ek detective hire kiya. Jis ne mujhe tum logon ke bare main bataya aur inder ke bare main. Usi ne citanya ko aur balraj ko mara hai. Meri tabayat bohat pehla se kharab thi jo aj zayada hi kahrab hogayi. Tum log meri maut ki wajha apne ap ko maat samjhna. Main yeh janti thi ke main apni betyon ki shaadi kis se kar rahi hon aur mujhe bohat khushi hai ke tum logon ne meri betiyon ki zindagi main aye." Then she joins her hands and says," mujhe maaf kar dena meri wajha se tum logon ke papa ..." they come towards her and also start to cry they said, "ap humein maaf kar den mama hum ne itni bari galti kar di. Plz humein maaf kar dein." Ella replies," nahin tum logon ne koi galti nahin ki hai balke main toh bohat kush hon ke tum log meri betiyon ki zindagi main aye ho. Mere jane ke bad meri betiyon ka khayal rakhna." They say," hum rakhen gay and ap plz humein maaf kar den plz." Then ella says, "mujhe apni betiyon se akele main bat karni hai." They leave and ella says," damini, avni and roshni meri wajha se un logon ne apne papa ko kho diya tum log un se nafrat na karna. Unhen ek mauqa do woh tum logon se bohat pyar karte hain. Unhein ek mauqa do. Woh sabit kar den gay ke woh best hain. Balraj ke samne tum log bari hui ho woh aksar kehta tha ke meri bahuen bilkul tum teeon ki terha honi cahiyen. Aur sach kahon to main ne dil main tum teenon ke liye balraj ke bete hi soch rakhe the magar tumhein inder ke saath khush dekh kar main ne apni soch badal di. Jab mujhe pata chala ke woh teenon balraj ke bete hain main bohat kush hui jane anjane tum logo...n k...o mi...lna hi ttth..a. ho sake toh... unko ek mauqa... dena me...re bacho..........................................

MAMA MAMA.................

The next day

After the funeral ceremony damini went into her room. The girls were like statue in the whole ceremony and after doing all the rituals she went into her room. After listening to what ella said the boys felt very guilty and begged for forgiveness they were broken, guilty she could see it but still she left prithvi without forgiving him. He was broken so he decided to leave her. After doing all the rituals he had left for manali stealing one last glance of damini. Rosh had forgiven varun at the hospital and avni had forgiven sam at the ceremony and they both felt better. Sam and varun decided to stay in Mumbai. She was standing by her window her mother's voice was ringing into her ears" use ek mauqa do damini" and then pri's voice came "mujhe maaf kar do damini." She could feel something was missing, her heart was missing and she knew it. She had given her heart to him a long time ago and now it was going with him. She closed her eyes and all she could think about was him the time she spent with him. She opened her eyes and that moment she knew that she would die without her heart she has to bring her heart back. No one can live without her heart and so can't she. She ran outside and knocked at sam's room he opened the door and she asked," prithvi ki flight ka time kya. Kaun si flight jaldi bolo." He smiles and tells her she runs downstairs and gets into car. The other four also follow her.

She reaches the airport and looks at the time there was still time so she ran towards the announcement room and snatches the mike from the lady. She says on the mike,' prithvi kahan ho tum plz mujhe chor kar mat jao. Main mar jaon gi. I was such a duffer that I let u go in the first place. Plz I am waiting for you in the hall plz come plz." then she ran towards the hall. There pri was at the counter when he heard his damini his heart popped out from his mouth and he ran towards the hall. He reached the hall and saw her damini there, she also looked at him and both started to cry. She ran towards him and he hugged her at the same time lifted her by grabbing her from her waist. They hugged each other for eternity and then she broke the hug cupping his face saying," I am sorry" he was still lifting her so he didn't cupped her face but said," no damini plz forgive me." She says," no forgive me" he says "no forgive" she says," me" he says,' me" and then the other four shouted," Oh shut up you two kiss already." They both stopped at once shared and eye lock and then she kisses him. He also kissed her back while stilling lifting her. Every single person present at the airport threw in air whatever they were holding in their hands while they forgot what has happening around them and kissed each other passionately at the airport in the middle of the hall.

And in this way they fell in love all over again.........

After that they lived happily ever after.

                                                           The end

PS: guys i know this a piece of crap and its too long but couldn't help myself so posted it here. plz plz do comment even if you like it and even if you don't like it. it will help me improve and do press the button if you like it.

thank you
-baz
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wow baz wat a OS,can i call u di,loved it awesome u sended me in prida land
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Originally posted by: Sheetal.Gera

wow baz wat a OS,can i call u di,loved it awesome u sended me in prida land



thanks.
glad you liked it
i am only sixteen if you are younger than you are most welcomed to call me di.

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u r sixteen then yes i can call u di becoz i m 14
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Originally posted by: Sheetal.Gera

u r sixteen then yes i can call u di becoz i m 14


oh nice young talent huh.

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talent kaise di???????????
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Originally posted by: Sheetal.Gera

talent kaise di???????????


you write wonderful ffs at such young age.

-baz
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thanks for this OS... it was good...
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Originally posted by: shalini_s

thanks for this OS... it was good...



glad you liked it.😃

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hey baz amazing OS !!!
loved it!!!