Tuhi mehri Zindagi FF - Part 30 P83!!!(13.03) - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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du kannst einfach toll schreiben....ich mag dein ff mehr als die sendung..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Just read the whole thing dear............Lovely............ 😳
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Originally posted by: Irika95

du kannst einfach toll schreiben....ich mag dein ff mehr als die sendung..

uiii das ist echt lieb von dir danke nochmals ich versuch mein bestes damit es dir weiterhin gefllt
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏amazing yaar...very well written...keep up d gud work....!!!!👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: PremLeoManav

Just read the whole thing dear............Lovely............ 😳

 
thanx honey i love you ff too
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PARt 5   Enjoy ;)

 

„Nakku tu kahan hai?", dutta said loudly in the room. "Meh yahan hoon.",said a voice behind him. He look behind him and there was she, Nakku. "Tu waha kyun kari hai, tujhse aram karma chaie hai na!", dutta said. "Ha, par sister mirko bahar lagi thi.", she said shyliy. She starts to walk now alone, because the sister had left now. She starts and she could not so good.

Dutta smiles, and goes to her. He take her hand and says : "Chalo meh tumhari madat karta hoon." She smilied shyly and say: " Nahi sahib meh karloon gi." "tujhe masla kya hai?Jab dekhe nahi sahib nahi sahieb, chup ker or chal.", he said. She was happy that he was caring so much of her.

 

He take her to the bed, and she says : "thanx sahieb." He smiled and asked: "Ab tu kaisi hai?" "Meh thiek hoon." "Nakku jo bi hua who me change nahi kar sakta, that's why im sorry." "Nahi sahieb, ap ki ghalti nahi hai. Who to supriya thai ap per…" "CHUP HOJA!!!", he shout. Nakku scared. "us dhokebas actress ko thai mat bhula…", he said angrily. "Im sorry sahib, who jo bi ho, apko koi or achi larki mil jay gi.", nakku said. "Haha tera bohat dil chata hai na, mere pas ekh larki hoi."", he laugh. Nakku starts to laugh too, then she thinks herself , sahib ap nahi jante meh apse kitna pyaar karti hoon. Or kitna darth hota hai mujhe apko istarana dekhoon. "nakku mujhe samaj nahi ati meh kya karoon…jab seema thi toh usne mujhe dhoka diya kyunke mere pas pese nahi the. Supriya thi to useh mere character se masla tha, isly usne bi mujhe dhoka diya…aayi sahib koi dusri larki leker aingi toh usko mere norkron se masla hoga warna kya? Nakku mirko nahi samaj ata mere saath aisa hona hota hai.", he said  sadly. "sahib, apko ekh larki chaiye jis ke saath apne darth ke upper baat karsakte hain, jo apko samje. Ap aayi sahib ko kehde keh ap khud ekh larki doon deh ge or…", nakku fell in sleep. Dutta looks at her she was sleeping because of the medicine.

He smiles and think she looks so pretty, so beautiful.

 

"bhao" Dutta looks  behind him, it was baaji. "haan bhol." "kuch nahi tu itna chup kyun hai.?", baaji asked. Dutta tells him this, what he said to nakku. Baaji said: "Bhao tu ankhe band karke un larkion ke bareh meh soch jinse tera richsta tha or hai. jaisa bi richta, par soch…jo cherah tirko nazar aiga, tu useh se nasdikia barah." Dutta looks at him, and close his eyes…all girls were in his head. Seema, supriya, the friend from kala thai…and then he saw NAKKU. He reminds her sentence…us larki ko chuno jis ke saath ap darth ke upper baat kar sakhe. he become flashbacks, when they both were talking about his story with seema, when she asked him "ap ka kya darth hai?" He opens his eyes, he had two faces from her…the black one and the white one…but it was the same smile and the same nakku. He thinks "SHE?"

 

 

Precap----"nakku, tujhe kisi se pyaar hai?", dutta ask her. She said: "Yes im in love"

              

 

Kaisa laga?😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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great updates
please update real soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
OMG!! the precap!!! plzz update fast
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#29
Just read all the parts ...
I loved it .....
continue soon ....!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i just louved it ......muah 4 dis..gr8 updates
plzzzzzz continue fast!!!!!👍🏼