khuda jane-savni/karneet ff part 10 pg 32

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

-GothicBeauty-

@-GothicBeauty-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: trisha.89
hey loved ur update.....!!
actually tis is d first tym im reading ur ff....
rose.three(varsha) told abt ur ff's.... told 2 read ur ff' s.....!!!
n ur ff's r fab...!!

thanks trisha 😃
i am glad that u liked it 😃 😃

Quote

No_Comments

@No_Comments

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#152

Thnxxx Trisha..
Love you😳

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

trisha

@trisha.89

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: marie1994

thanks trisha 😃
i am glad that u liked it 😃 😃

ur welcome......
n pm me wen u update d nxt part ...!!

Quote

...San-Yo...

@...San-Yo...

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#154

WOw, lovely, superb. Hey you are superb writer..

Keep updating

Quote

No_Comments

@No_Comments

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#155

Thnnxx for the comment Soniyo....😃
Really glad that you liked it...

Quote

megha

@megz.10

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#156

awesum update....da nxt prt luks dam intresting....cant wait..

update soon!!

Quote

No_Comments

@No_Comments

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#157

PART 7

Today Was The Day For Karan's First Job...
He Hate Too Work..But Today He Have Too...
And The First One Was Too Have Meeting With Someone Called
Inder Oberoi...😈

Dad...Pleashh not Push Me Naa...
You Know I Hate Too Work For The Oberois..Sameer Pouted Sweetly😳
His Dad:You Have To Sameer Today You Will Not Go Away...If I Want I Can Marry You With My Friends Daughter...
Karan: What?..Is She Hot Naa? You Know Na I Dont Like Behenji Types...
His Dad: SAMEER...!!! Sudhaar Jaoo..Nautanki Hoo Tum...Bewakuuf-..
Mera Beta Kaab Barra Hogaa Bhagwaan...😆
Karan:Dad Please Aap Bhagwaan Se Nai Puche..Agar Woh Chayehe Bhi Mujhe Badal Nahi Sakhta...You Know Saari Larkya Mujhepe Fida Hain...Unka Dil Tood Jaa Sakhta Hain..Aur Woh Toh God Kabhie Bhi Nahi Chahegaa Naa...
His Dad: Thike Mere Baap..Aab Toh Chaal Mere Saath...Inder Mera Dost Baut Strict Hain Aisi Batoon Main..He Hate Lovers And Late Comers...
Karan: Hmm..Inder Oberoi?!..Yeh Naam Main Sunna Hain Pehle...And He Hate Lovers? Kon Pyaar Waalo Se Nafrat Karta Hain? Itna Ajeeb Baath Hain...
His Dad: Come On..We Have Too Goo Now...
Karan: Okii..We Goo Now...

On The Other Side Perneet Was Thinking About Karan...
She Had Some New Feeling...
Like She Had When She Was Missing Her Parents...

Ajib Larka Hain..Perneet Think..Apni Haar Hi Nahi Kabool Karta....
I Have Too Teach Him A Lesson...Kya Huva Hain..Esha Come...And Ask Her..
Aaj Office Main Interview Nahi Dena Kya..Aab Toh College Bhi Finish Hone Wala Hain..Toh Thoda Paisey Toh Hone Cheyehe...Haina Perneet?
Parneet: Yeaahh Guys..me Need Job now..Soo Koi Offer Hain Kya?
Esha: Jii Haan Madam..Koi Inder Oberoi Apne New Friend Ke bete Ke Liye Secretary Dhoondra Hain..Soo you Should Goo..Thike Naa?
Perneet: Inder Oberoi? Laghta Hain Jaise Koi Sunna Sa Hain Yeh Naam...Lekin Koi Baath Nahi Thode Din Main Kaam Karrogi..Phir uss Bewakoof Karan Se Toh Chutkara Millegaa...😆
Thike Main Aaj Hi Interview Doogii..Chal...
And They Goo Too Prepare...
Udhaar Jab Main Jaoogii Naa Sab Kii Chotti Kara Doongii..
Aur Waise Bhi I Know I Am The Best Haar Baar..
And She Had A Tight Jeans On With Stylish Sun Specs...
Totally HOT....(Like Karan Said Too His Father)😆😳

Karan And His Father Reached The Office...

Come On...Akhir Pohunch Hi Gayye....
My Friend...I Missed You Soo Much...
A Old Man Screamed Too His Handsome friend...
Aaj Toh Tumne Mujhe Boohut intezaar Karwayaa...I missed You Yaara...
Me Too Dad Said Happily...Karan Just Saw His Dad Been Hugged Like Twenty Times Now...How Can My Dad Have Dostana Like This...Woh Bhi Saab Ke Samne..Meri Kya Reputation Reh Jayegii In Saroo Larkiyoo ke Saamne...🤣
And When Suddenly Inder Uncle Comes Too Karan And Seem Shocked...
Uncle Kya Huva..Mujhe Aise Kyoon dekh Rahe Hain Aap....
Main Apne Dad Ke Jaise Apke Saath Koi Dostana Nahi Rakhna Chachta...
Soo Please Dont See Like That..Mujhe Kuch Acha Nahi Lagraha...
Aapko Kuch Kuch Hota Hain..Lekin Mujhe Nahi...😆😆

Inder Was Shocked After Seeing Karan... 😲
Wasn't He Dead....Yeh Kaise Hosaktha Hain...
I Killed Him For 20 Years Ago....
Sameer And Avni...
And Their Child SaVni....😡

Avni Reaching The Office...
With Her Friends..
For The Interview...😉

Finally Itna Chalke...
I Am Tired...Hum Itni Deer Ke Baad Hum Phoncke...
Pata Nahin Mujhe Itna Ajib Lagraha Hain Idhaar....
She Walked Up Too The Reception...
And Asked For Mister Tacker...I Have Too Impress Them...
Now See Mr Tacker..I Will Be You Secretary...😉😆

Precap: TUM? Both Scream...Whole The Office Hiljaata Hain..

Pleashh Comment...😳

THE END!!!...

*Sana*

Quote

kmh2rockzz

@kmh2rockzz

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#158

hey amazing update dear
karan is just awesme😃
plzzzzzzz do pm me next tym😊

Quote

aparajhita

@.Aparajhita.

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#159

Hey Sana,

Awesome update friend, I really liked this one.😊

The Dostana part was hilarious.😆

The end was brilliant. Waiting for Inder trying to figure out this situation.

The precap seems interesting.

Won't write a long comment and bother you, this is enough.😊

Continue soon.

Apsy.