Originally posted by: heer.maan786
hi sweetheart me first to comment congrats π
its really very nice....wonderful.....awesome..... thanksπ³
waiting for the next shock and ya we believe that all the
driver faint out bcoz of heer's beauty koi shak nai hai.....π heheheheππ
Originally posted by: alisha_harshiti
hey nice concept
Originally posted by: newt2007
wonderful start with suspense
breaking my head to find the plan?clueless.continue soon.
Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen
hihi finally wooh '
reserved m going to eat and then come back i didnt had my lunch starvingg
unreserved now * aishu itna mat khaya karrrππ
hello meesthi waves back *
lolz u too short term memory loss patient exam mein sab bhool gayi lolz answer sheet mein sab likha ki nahiii sahi sahi bata ????han han answer sheet mein hi likha haiπ
chal padhne de phir bataungi how was it ????????????? bangggg on headdd*
accha u liste nshot ka koi naam to dede kam se kam like
HUMTUM & CAR
HAHAAHAHHHAHA ππππ........................ sory sory naam dena bhul gayiii
u know mujhe pata tha tera dimag shai kabhi nahi chalta hia and now m sure
lolz 7 pm
7 pm matlab saam ke 7 baje lolz woh shaam ke satah baje uth ke nasta karegi hey bhagguu
change kar jaldi my goodness anti meridian aur post meridian mein antar nahi pata isse hayeeee yeah phream karte karte sab bhool gayi ... welll tu mujhe achi tarh se janti haiπππ
lolz tht line was hillarious like she got an electric shock idea bura nahi hai prem ki life se isse fenkne ka hmm sochna parega ... abe idher sad ending ni karni .. happy happy .. samjhiii πππ
lolz isme un drivers ki koi galti nahi hai madam agar pink top aur shorts pehenegi to isme kisi ki galti nahi sivaye uske ......πππlolz................
hahah tejiii yeah he is best an lolz kahin shaadi karwane ka irada to nahi lolz driving teacher ke bhesh mein hamara groom ...........tu jada hi soch leti haiπ
ahahah lolz saare ddriving teachers hone wale dulhe hi the kyaaaa hahaha
my god chun chun ke piece likhti hai tu meeshti ... thanks its a complement ..π
i was so mad ki after telling me the story on gmail u didnt post it i was abt to kill u u know tht bcz the story appealed me so much
wooh lolzz meeshti she saw his broad????? chest toh likhna tha my god teri galti nahi hai soch ke hi i am drooling aajkal tu rraw tension bahot likhne lagi hai hmm
well heer koi toffe hia jo khayega tu prem sharam kar u were dating me naq ??????????? sudhar jaaaa nautankiπππ
lolz staring session merqa dil to tut gaya hayeee kya baat haiππ
and teji planning hmm damad ko wink ye budhiya thik mnahi hai hmmmmm
it looks like main heer aur meeshti teji hai thts why winking prem hahahahah
loved it very funnyπ
and i dont htnk i need to say do pm me ???????????????????????/yeah surely pm u
love
aishu
wow nice update
continue soon
Originally posted by: blufate.14
awesome
wat can the plan be??? π€
plzz do PM me
Originally posted by: Kamal_23
awesome
thnx 4 the pm
continue soon
KAmal
Originally posted by: anishajk99
BEAUTIFUL START........SO TEJI'S PLAN IS TO BRING PREMEER CLOSE...........LOVED IT.............PLS DO CONT ASAP.........THANX 4 THE PM.......
hey...
that was a great update...
btw... is prem and teji planning something together??
cnt wait to read the rest..
pls update the next part soon... :D
thanks for ur such a lovely coment ...................
Oh Hi Meeshtiπ
I vaguely remember the mentioning of these seven 7 oneshotsπ.. nice memory.....πSomebody said last month that she was deciding to post them that sundayπ€..Am I right??π yeah yeah u r riteeeπ.But I spare u because of your examsππ..shukar hai.....πSee how sharp my memory is??ππ. yeah.................βοΈBut coming to the oneshot..I loved the idea behind itπ³βοΈβοΈ..Very nicely thought.. thanksss.Prem being the trainerπ...Oh I wonder it might take an year or may be several to learn driving if Prem's the trainerππ..lolxxxxx she couldnt learn driving before because the trainers used to get lost in her beauty now it will be the opposite caseπ..thats trueeee ππBut Phrooling apart..I am notwwaiting for the next part so you better post soon..ππ..Wanting to know what's Teji and Prem's plan to woo Heerπ³π³ u have to wait for it ..............ππLove You, Mehakπ€
Originally posted by: crystall
Awesome os !
I just loved it !
Can't wait for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
Originally posted by: premeer4rever
Hello Meeshti
that was awesomeeee
wow prem n teji teamed up..cooooool
waiting eagerly to know abt the plan
update sooon....
Originally posted by: annwesha kayal
Hi Meeshti,
superb start!!!
plz cont soon...waiting for next part..
thnx for ur pm.
Originally posted by: Nitty2910
oh wow, awesome OS and the story is different too. Can't wait to know about the plan, and plz could you PM me when you update the next chapter? Cause i surely will not want to miss it
fantastically fabulous.....
this gonna be fun ... so teji is up to something is she a matchmaker now.... bt luv da intro.....
Originally posted by: Greeshma....
hiiii meeshthi....................π€hiii gresshu
i remember once you told that u will post an OS on sunday................but u didn't....................... i hope this is the same which mentioned on that day.....................u have a sharp memory ... this is dat osπ
anyways................. the shot was awesome dear π π π π.................. you have written it beautifully βοΈ βοΈ βοΈ βοΈ................... i don't think u need any coaching class from me.......................π π π π thanks...............π³
prem is the driver teacher π² cant believe this................ hope this is a part of the plan of prem and teji mom................. can't wait to know more about their plan and hw they will fall in love................... π π π πhm.......π
but one thng i couldn't understand how did heer escaped from the accidents? i mean ............while other driving teachers are adoring her beauty she is driving it................. then during the accident she also would have injured right.............π π π π.. she always wear a helmet for protection..dunt u listen that elephant and ant jokeπ
and i am scared about our prem............. agar woh heer ko aaj ki tarah dekhthe rahenge tho usska haalaath prevoius teachers se bhi bura hoga...............π π π π π.. are ab heer ki baari hai driving teacher ko dekhne kiπ
update soooon.. will try
and all the best for ur last exams.......................
with lots of love and prayers....................β€οΈ thanksss
greeshuAbhi shadi nahi hui aur abhi se hee saas aur damad ki planning shuru hogayi...kya baat hai... πππEven though Prem n Teji make a good son/mother in law.. sureeeπHeer... my child... get ready for a surprise.. hehehhehee πwhich u will luv obviously... πhahah...the car trainer thing is too funny...its going to be awkward.. yeppppppπheer is going to think... Hum tum ek gadi mein bandh ho aur... naughty boyπVery nice OS... cant wait to read ur other parts... but u have tooπThnks Meeshti for the pm ur welcumLuv ya sis...- Vishwa/Vishuthanks glad u liked it π³
Originally posted by: v_nikhita18
awesome os!!!!!!
loved the concept......all the trainers are injured due to heer's beauty....πwonder what prem and teji's plan could be!!!!do continue soon!
Originally posted by: anoushay_kdmhmd
meeshtii...ki bachi...apni jaan bachani hai to bhaag....*running behind u wid ma belan*
It was such a clifhanger...urghhhh update fast warna....
Originally posted by: Ayesha103
hey wonderful updaate! update asap plz xxx wat a wonderful concept heer leaarnin 2 drive maybe we will obviously hve many axidents lol! x
Originally posted by: Heerbeauty
100........................
(wow)
you know i wanted read like this os for a long time
where prem will be heer's teacher and they will keep romancing..........π
you are great that you made this os
go ahead
ican't waiti anymore read next
update soon
thanks for the pm
and next time also pm me
Paddo
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