When I First Saw You - MayUr FF (Updtd Part 3 Pg6)

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Heya Guys! Yoshita here.😊 It's been quite a while since I joined India-Forums. I have read many many FFs and OSs and they are awesome! Even I wanted to write one. I also wanted to get so many compliments😛 but I could not think of a storyline. But now finally I have come up with one. It may not be so different but it is my first attempt. Well, frankly I am very nervous about this FF.😕 I thought for around 50 times before posting it. I hope you guys will like it. 😳😆
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Let me give you a little introduction about it. It is basically a MayUr FF so the story will be revolving around Mayank n Nupur. They both are college students. The story will show how they became friends and slowly and gradulally how they fell in love.

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Part 1

Morning 8 o'clock

The Phone Rang.

The Person From The Other Side Said:

"Hi Gunjan!"

Gunjan, a girl in her teens, still wearing her night clothes who till now was feeling very sleepy now suddenly started jumping with happiness!

"Di! Hi! I'm so glad you called!"

The Person On The Other End Was None Other Than Nupur!

"Phone Kaise Ni Karti! Apni Choti Si Behen Ko Ek Khush Khabri Jo Deni Hai!"

"Di, keh do ki tum Mumbai aa rahi ho!"

"Chal thik hai, keh diya! Tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi ki Nupur Bhushan ne teri baat maan li!"

"Sach Di?! Main Bohot Khush Hoon Di! Kab aa rahi ho tum?"

"Do din baad. Maine tere college mein admission bhi le liya hai!"

"Wow Di! Tab toh bhot maza aayega! Hai Na?"

"Haan! Chal Main phone rakhti hoon! Packing Bhi toh karni hai! Bye Sweet Sister!"

"Bye Di! Jaldi Aana!"

Nupur and Gunjan are real sisters. They lived in Delhi. They lost their mother at a very early age. Gunjan shifted to Mumbai for her studies but Nupur didn't. And now, Nupur is also shifting to Mumbai in the same college as Gunjan's.

College-

G : Hey Mayank! Guess What!?

M : What?

G : Kya Mayank.. Kabhi toh guess kiya karo. Khair Chhodo.

M : Thik Hai. Chhoda. Ab Batao Kya Hua.

G : Tumhe maine bataya than na apni Di ke bare mein'

M : Nupur na?

G : Haan! (Teasing Him) Kya Baat Hai! Mister Mayank Sharma jo ladkiyon ki taraf aankh tak uthakar nhi dekhte, unhe meri behen ka naam yaad hai.!

M : Gunjan, agar tumhne bakwaas karni hai toh main jaa raha hun.

G : Acha Acha Theek hai! Sorry Yaar!

M : Thik Hai Thik Hai. Maaf Kiya!

G : Haan Toh Mayank, (almost jumping) Di parso aa rahi hain!

M : Oh Great (very sarcastically)

G : Zyada bhav khaane ki zaroorat nahi hai. Ek baar Di ko dekhoge na toh in books ko bhool jaoge.

M : Ho Gaya? Ab Main Jaun?

G : (haste hue) Jao!

Mayank Sharma was Gunjan's friend. She was the only female friend of his. Well, there was a reason behind it. Gunjan was not like other girls. She didn't flirt with boys or with Mayank. She was a serious student just like Mayank. Mayank and Gunjan shared a healthy relationship. And they never thought each other as someone more than a friend. (So need to worry readers!)

Mayank was a very handsome guy undoubtedly. Fair Complexion. Brown Eyes. Killer Smile. Cute Dimples. A Deadly Combination to say the least! He was the kind of guy for whom any girl would die for. But he never paid attention to these "stupid" girls as he referred them. He loved his mom more than anything. He never talked about his father to anyone not even to Gunjan.

Now, Mayank headed towards the Library as usual. Library was like a second home for him. He felt comfortable there. No one to disturb him. And there he had his friends with him. Books. "No Complaints No Demands". He forgot all about Nupur as he was not interested. But he did not know what destiny had planned for him.


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This Was The First Part Friends. Hope You Liked It. Hit The 'Like' Tab if you liked it. Please do Comment/Criticize. 😊 I just have a small request. If you want me to add you in your PM list then please send me a friend request. It'll be easier for me. Thank You! 😊

Love,
Yoshita







Part 1 - Pg 1
PM List - Pg 3
Part 2 - Pg 3
Part 3 - Pg 6


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yipeee first one 2 comment!!!!!
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yipeee first one 2 comment!!!!!

continue dear and pm me when u update!!!!!


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I'll Surely PM you. 😊
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Great start . . add me to your PM list! 😃 Loved it simple! 😳

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Great start . . add me to your PM list! 😃 Loved it simple! 😳

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