MN FF -Ye Dooriyaan- Pt14 -pg 141 - (6-May) - Page 40

Originally posted by: Tapoor

Really nice part
i m also eagerly waiting 4 her reply
pls update soon

Originally posted by: zoya_me

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.....my cheeks are hurting from smiling so hard....and i'm squealing like a maniac......i loved this update...it was soooo sweet.....eeeeeeeeeeeeeee.........please please please continue soon

zoya 🤗

I m verrrrrrryyyy glad to know that u found the update cute:)

thank u sooo much :)

Originally posted by: Dpkavasudeva

kal btaungi!!
kal btaungi!!
kal btaungi!!
kal btaungi!!


gosh!! hanging on the cliff!!!

update soon...( she said kal btaungi... u mean u'll update tomorrow;) )

Originally posted by: fanofmjht

great part
do cont soon

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Part 4
It was sweet one
Kitna confusion haan un dono ke beeche mein
Though their eyes speak wat they actually want to speak but i want them to spk through words

Though they knw wat their eyes are saying they jus dnt believe it yaar
Hop Mayu finds out her majburi soon

hey Afsha 🤗

thank u soooo much 😃

u ll have to wait for M to find out the majbhuri :)

Part 5
It was really sweet
Liked that how out of blue Mayu said his feelings to her
Nups mom really like Mayu i thk
Why she was Angry di u didnt mentioned it
Liked wen Nups was dancing
Loved their phone convo also
Loved it

Originally posted by: Tasnim2623

lovely..

Originally posted by: mina_18secret

Nice part... Continue soon!

Love

Mina

Originally posted by: Mou.

oh! Divz i m sorry for commenting late..& I absolutely loved this part..........

Okk, other than mayank & nupur,this part is special for me coz of DDLJ........u just describe nupur's feelings after watching the movie & that was what i felt back then ,watching that movie for the first time.......bohot saari purane yaade taza hogeyi......

& now coming to MN.......earing part u mentioned was really amazing,such small thing , but how when it comes to love this became important!!!!!!!!
& i love the way straight forward Mayank told his true feelings to Nupur at once.....& now i m waiting for her reply...
lovely update divz.it made me happy.(u know this days MN memory make me cry.).....update next part soon dear!!!!!!!!!!!

hey Mou 🤗 thank u sooooo much for the lovely comment :)

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

hey divzz

i read all the 4 parts today!!
awsomeee partss

i'm loving the story so far yaar

srry for the late comment

do con't soon

-sanam-

Originally posted by: myownarea

itaara ithu :)

finally u commented :) :)

angane...aa DDLJ yum rajum okke nikkiye comment cheyyichu :)

wonderful 😃

oh glad u loved those parts..

the way Nupur falls for Raj :) I can sooo understand:)

u r welcome n keep reading 🤗

hehe........i justttttttt lovd this 'welcome' chechi........😆😆😉😉